Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more coherent and natural by using complete sentences and linking words. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. For example, clearly state your feelings about singing and explain why, using linking words like 'because' or 'however'.

Ví dụ: I don't really like singing, especially in front of others, because I feel nervous and think I am not very good at it. However, when I am alone, I sometimes sing a few verses just for fun.

Gợi ý: Your answer is clear and relevant, but you can improve coherence by using linking words like 'although' or 'but' to connect ideas smoothly. Also, try to avoid repeating similar ideas and keep sentences concise.

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing classes. Although my mom wanted me to join music classes as extracurricular activities during school, I was not interested and therefore did not pursue singing.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence clarity and grammar to make your answer more natural and effective. Use linking words to connect ideas and avoid incomplete or unclear sentences. Also, be specific about situations when you might sing for others.

Ví dụ: As I mentioned, singing is not my favourite activity. However, I sometimes sing for my husband, especially to cheer him up. I also occasionally sing for my nieces and young children in the family.

Gợi ý: Improve clarity and coherence by using correct grammar and linking words. Avoid unclear phrases and provide specific examples with clear explanations. Try to keep sentences concise and relevant.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness and help people relax. For example, my husband loves to sing when he is stressed; he plays music and sings along to feel better.

× I don't like singing I'm Maybe when I'm alone I might sing a few verses here and there, but if I. Had to say in front of an audience and think that might be a big nightmare for me.

✓ I don't like singing. Maybe when I'm alone, I might sing a few verses here and there, but if I had to sing in front of an audience, I think that would be a big nightmare for me.

The original sentence is a run-on with missing punctuation and incorrect sentence breaks, causing confusion. Separating into clear sentences and correcting 'Had to say' to 'had to sing' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I don't think I am very good at it, so I would not like to be singing.

✓ I don't think I am very good at it, so I would not like to sing.

The phrase 'would not like to be singing' is awkward here; the correct form is 'would not like to sing' because 'like to' is followed by the base verb, not the continuous form.

× No, I have never taken any classes or courses to learn singing.

✓ No, I have never taken any classes or courses to learn how to sing.

The phrase 'to learn singing' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to learn how to sing' because 'learn' is followed by an infinitive verb phrase, not a gerund in this context.

× My mom actually wanted me to enroll in musical classes as my extracurricular activities during my school days.

✓ My mom actually wanted me to enroll in music classes as my extracurricular activity during my school days.

The phrase 'musical classes' is less common than 'music classes' for this context. Also, 'extracurricular activities' should be singular 'activity' to match 'enroll in' which refers to one type of activity.

× Sometimes, especially when I have to. Casual him maybe I might sing for my nieces Ann young babies, but that's just about it.

✓ Sometimes, especially when I have to comfort him, maybe I might sing for my nieces and young babies, but that's just about it.

The phrase 'have to. Casual him' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'have to comfort him'. Also, 'Ann' is likely a typo for 'and'. Correcting these improves clarity and grammar.

× Yes, a lot of people turn to singing to be happy or just relax in some weight.

✓ Yes, a lot of people turn to singing to be happy or just to relax a bit.

The phrase 'relax in some weight' is incorrect and unclear. The correct expression is 'relax a bit' or 'relax somewhat'. Also, adding 'to' before 'relax' maintains parallel structure.

× For instance my husband loves to sing whenever his trust he will just play some music and hunter himself RV singing.

✓ For instance, my husband loves to sing whenever he's stressed; he will just play some music and entertain himself by singing.

The original sentence contains unclear and incorrect phrases like 'whenever his trust' and 'hunter himself RV singing'. These are likely transcription errors. Correcting to 'whenever he's stressed' and 'entertain himself by singing' makes the sentence grammatically correct and meaningful.

× Whole songs even though.

✓ He sings whole songs even though.

The fragment 'Whole songs even though.' is incomplete and lacks a subject and verb. Adding 'He sings' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.