Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当（如"seeing"应为"singing"），句子结构不完整，表达不够清晰。建议注意单词拼写和语法，使用完整句子表达观点，并且避免重复和不连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax. I also play the guitar every day, which allows me to practice my singing skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误（如"learn"应为"learned"），句子不完整且表达不清晰。建议使用完整句子，注意时态和语法，清楚表达自己的经历和现状。

Ví dụ: No, I have never formally learned how to sing. However, I have been singing since I was a child and I practice every day to improve my singing skills.

Gợi ý: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，句子不连贯，难以理解。建议简洁明了地回答问题，使用正确的语法和词汇，表达清楚自己的想法。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my parents because they are my biggest fans. They enjoy my voice and often ask me to sing for them when we meet.

Gợi ý: 回答中有拼写错误（"seeing"应为"singing"），语法错误和表达不清晰。建议注意拼写和语法，使用完整句子表达观点，并具体说明原因。

Ví dụ: I think singing can bring happiness to my parents because I am their child and they raised me. When I sing, it shows my love and appreciation for them.

× Yes, I like seeing because things make me relax.

✓ Yes, I like singing because it makes me relax.

这里'seeing'应为'singing'，因为题目问的是喜欢唱歌。动词'see'的现在分词形式不符合语境，应使用'sing'的现在分词形式。

× And I play the guitar every day, so. It can practice my singing skills.

✓ And I play the guitar every day, so it can help me practice my singing skills.

句子中缺少动词'help'，使得句子不完整。'It can practice'结构不正确，应改为'it can help me practice'。

× No, I've never learn how to sing.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing.

现在完成时中，动词应使用过去分词形式，'learn'的过去分词是'learned'。

× Because I play a guitar and I know how to sing when I.

✓ Because I play the guitar and I know how to sing.

'a guitar'应改为'the guitar'，因为前文提到过，且句子不完整，去掉多余部分使句子完整。

× When I was a child.

✓ When I was a child,

这是一个时间状语从句的开头，后面应接主句，单独使用不完整。

× But I sing every day so I'm just trying to improve my sings cues right now.

✓ But I sing every day, so I'm just trying to improve my singing skills right now.

'sings cues'是错误的词组，应为'singing skills'，表示唱歌技巧。

× I wanted things for my parents be 'cause they are my big fans and they like my voice and the when we met they asked me to sing to them.

✓ I want to sing for my parents because they are my big fans and they like my voice. When we met, they asked me to sing for them.

'wanted'应为现在时'want'，因为表达的是现在的愿望。'things'应为'sing'。句子结构混乱，需拆分并调整。

× I think seeing can bring my parents hapiness because I'm I'm their kids and they grow me up and when I thinking it shows my love to them.

✓ I think singing can bring my parents happiness because I'm their child and they raised me. When I think about it, it shows my love to them.

'seeing'应为'singing'。'kids'应为'singular child'。'grow me up'应为'raised me'。'when I thinking'应为'when I think about it'。句子需调整语法和用词。