Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by correcting grammar and avoiding redundancy. Also, explain your feelings about singing more specifically and use linking words to connect ideas.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing, although my voice is not very good. However, whenever I have some free time, I usually sing songs to myself, especially in the bathroom, because I enjoy the acoustics there. It always makes me feel happy and relaxed.

Gợi ý: Focus on structuring your answer clearly with correct grammar and vocabulary. Use linking words to explain your experience and feelings about learning singing. Avoid unclear phrases and be specific.

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned some singing basics when I was in sixth grade. My school had a music teacher who taught us about different tones and how music works. However, I was not very good at it, so I did not continue learning further.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more fluent and natural by correcting grammar and sentence structure. Use linking words to explain your feelings and reasons clearly and avoid repetition.

Ví dụ: In the future, if I get a chance, I would like to sing for my parents because they are amazing. I admire how they have been together for 25 years, and I would love to dedicate a song to them to show my appreciation.

Gợi ý: Try to express your ideas more clearly and use correct grammar. Use linking words to connect your opinion and personal experience logically and avoid unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: Well, it depends on the person, but I believe that people who love singing or songs feel happier when they listen to music. For example, whenever I listen to music, it refreshes my mind and improves my mood.

× Yes I like singing but my voice is not do too much good.

✓ Yes, I like singing but my voice is not very good.

The phrase 'not do too much good' is incorrect. The correct adjective to describe the quality of the voice is 'good'. 'Do too much good' is an incorrect adverbial phrase here. Use 'not very good' to express the intended meaning.

× But whenever I have Bob than I usually sing a song for myself to enjoy the environment inside the bathroom and that is so funny about it.

✓ But whenever I have a bath, I usually sing a song to myself to enjoy the environment inside the bathroom, and that is so funny about it.

The sentence has structural issues and incorrect word usage. 'Have Bob' should be 'have a bath'. 'Sing a song for myself' should be 'sing a song to myself'. Also, the sentence is long and needs commas for clarity.

× At that time in my school there is one teacher who usually takes it, gives a lesson and gives us a lesson about in music how the music boils.

✓ At that time in my school, there was one teacher who usually took the class, gave lessons, and taught us about music, how music works.

The tense is inconsistent; 'there is' should be 'there was' to match past time. 'Takes it' is unclear; 'took the class' is better. 'Gives a lesson' should be past tense 'gave lessons'. 'How the music boils' is incorrect; 'how music works' is appropriate.

× gives us a lesson about in music how the music boils.

✓ gives us a lesson about music, how music works.

The preposition 'about in' is incorrect. Use 'about' alone before the noun 'music'. Also, 'how the music boils' is incorrect; 'how music works' is the correct phrase.

× At that time in my school there is one teacher who usually takes it, gives a lesson and gives us a lesson about in music how the music boils.

✓ At that time in my school there was one teacher who usually took the class, gave lessons, and taught us about music, how music works.

The sentence mixes present tense 'is', 'takes', 'gives' with past time 'at that time'. All verbs should be in past tense to maintain consistency.

× I'm not good in it, so I didn't prefer ****.

✓ I'm not good at it, so I didn't prefer it.

The correct preposition after 'good' is 'at', not 'in'. Also, 'didn't prefer ****' is incomplete; assuming 'it' is intended.

× In future I get if I get a chance then I would like to sing for my parents because they are so amazing.

✓ In the future, if I get a chance, I would like to sing for my parents because they are so amazing.

The phrase 'In future I get if I get a chance' is awkward. It should be 'In the future, if I get a chance'. Also, commas improve clarity.

× I'm so fascinated about their things and how they they have been together from the past 25 years so I would like to dedicate one sold to them.

✓ I'm so fascinated by their relationship and how they have been together for the past 25 years, so I would like to dedicate one song to them.

'Fascinated about' should be 'fascinated by'. 'Their things' is vague; 'their relationship' is clearer. 'They they' is a repetition error. 'From the past 25 years' should be 'for the past 25 years'. 'One sold' is a typo; should be 'one song'.

× Well it it depends on the person twice is but I would say that a person who fails attached with singing or songs, they feel more happy while listening to music.

✓ Well, it depends on the person, but I would say that a person who is attached to singing or songs feels happier while listening to music.

'It it' is a repetition error. 'Twice is' is unclear and unnecessary. 'Fails attached' is incorrect; should be 'is attached'. 'They feel more happy' should be 'feels happier' to agree with singular 'a person'.

× For according to me when I whenever I listen some music it makes my mind more fresh an my mood get enhances with it.

✓ According to me, whenever I listen to some music, it makes my mind fresher and my mood gets enhanced by it.

'For according to me' is incorrect; use 'According to me'. 'Listen some music' should be 'listen to some music'. 'More fresh' should be 'fresher'. 'My mood get enhances' should be 'my mood gets enhanced'. 'With it' should be 'by it'.