Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因，但语言不够自然，句子结构混乱，且有语法错误。建议简化句子，避免重复，使用更准确的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax when I am stressed. Also, singing with my parents and friends strengthens our relationships.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，句子不连贯。建议使用正确的时态和表达方式，清楚说明学习唱歌的经历。

Ví dụ: Yes, I took singing lessons after primary school. The teacher taught me how to sing with the correct pronunciation, which improved my skills.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了想为父母唱歌的原因，但句子结构不完整且有语法错误。建议使用完整句子，表达清晰且连贯。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my parents because they supported me by paying for my singing lessons. I hope to make them proud.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和不连贯的表达，语法错误较多。建议简化句子，使用连贯的表达，具体说明唱歌带来的快乐。

Ví dụ: Yes, singing can make people happy, especially when they feel stressed. Happy songs are like sunshine in the heart, and singing with friends helps us relax and enjoy ourselves.

× Yes, I like singing be 'cause where I think a lot it can relax myself when I see with my parents or friends, it can make our relationship deeper.

✓ Yes, I like singing because I think a lot. It can relax me when I am with my parents or friends, and it can make our relationship deeper.

这里'singing be 'cause where I think a lot'结构不正确，应该用because引导原因状语从句，且relax后面接宾语时用宾格me而不是myself。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的连词和宾语形式。

× Yes, actually. After my primary school, I take a took a lesson of singing.

✓ Yes, actually. After primary school, I took a singing lesson.

这里时态混用，'take a took'是错误的，应该用过去式took表示过去发生的动作。

× And teach me how to. How to see in right tongue?

✓ And the teacher taught me how to sing correctly.

句子结构混乱，缺少主语和谓语，'How to see in right tongue'表达不清，应改为'how to sing correctly'，使句子完整且语义明确。

× So yeah it can make me thing.

✓ So yeah, it can make me think.

'make me thing'中的'thing'应为动词'think'，这里是动词用法错误，需改正为think。

× I want to be a proud of my parents.

✓ I want to make my parents proud of me.

'be a proud of my parents'用法错误，'proud'是形容词，不能直接用作名词，且表达应为让父母感到骄傲，故改为'make my parents proud of me'。

× Yes, when we feel stressful, you can see me, you can see and it can make you happy.

✓ Yes, when we feel stressed, you can sing, and it can make you happy.

'feel stressful'应为'feel stressed'，'you can see me, you can see'表达不清，应为'you can sing'，使句子语义明确。

× So happy songs. Is like a sunshine. In your heart.

✓ So happy songs are like sunshine in your heart.

句子断裂，缺少主谓一致，'Is'应改为'are'，且合并为一句完整句子。

× And you can see with your friends to relax and bring our joy.

✓ And you can sing with your friends to relax and bring us joy.

'see'用错，应为'sing'，'bring our joy'应为'bring us joy'，代词用法错误。