Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy and pronoun confusion (e.g., "their feelings" should be "my feelings"). Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and keep your answer within 5 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it helps me reduce stress and creates a positive atmosphere around me. Moreover, it allows me to express my feelings, which makes me feel energized and happy.

Gợi ý: Your answer has some grammar and clarity issues. Avoid informal expressions like "ain't tryin myself". Use linking words to connect ideas logically. Also, try to be more specific and clear about your experience with singing.

Ví dụ: No, I haven't taken any professional singing classes because I am not very confident about my voice. However, I often imitate my favourite singers' songs, which has helped me improve my singing skills over time.

Gợi ý: Your answer is heartfelt but contains some awkward phrasing and minor grammar mistakes (e.g., "makes the born more stronger" should be "makes the bond stronger"). Try to use linking words and correct expressions to make your answer clearer and more natural.

Ví dụ: That's an interesting question. I love to sing for my husband because when I lack the words, singing helps me express my feelings and love for him. I believe it's a unique way to connect with loved ones and strengthen our bond.

Gợi ý: Your answer has several grammar and vocabulary errors (e.g., "sinking" instead of "singing", "born" instead of "bond"). The sentence is also incomplete and lacks coherence. Try to organize your ideas clearly using linking words and provide specific examples to support your answer.

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely singing can bring smiles to people's faces, especially when we sing for them. For example, when I sing for my friends to make them feel special, they enjoy it, and it helps strengthen our bond and create happiness.

× Yes, I love singing because it helps me to reduce the stress and to create a positive environment around me as well as it helps to express their feelings and by this way it makes me energized.

✓ Yes, I love singing because it helps me to reduce stress and create a positive environment around me as well as express my feelings, and in this way it makes me feel energized.

The pronoun 'their' is incorrectly used to refer to the speaker's own feelings; it should be 'my' to match the subject 'I'. Also, 'the stress' is better as 'stress' in this context, and 'by this way' should be 'in this way' for correct idiomatic expression.

× No, I haven't taken any professional singing classes because I'm not much confident about my voice and singing.

✓ No, I haven't taken any professional singing classes because I'm not very confident about my voice and singing.

The phrase 'not much confident' is incorrect; the correct expression is 'not very confident' to properly modify the adjective 'confident'.

× But I tried to imitate famous songs of singers which are my favorite and it helped me to improve my voice.

✓ But I tried to imitate famous songs by singers who are my favorites, and it helped me to improve my voice.

The relative pronoun 'which' is incorrectly used for people; 'who' should be used when referring to singers. Also, 'favorite' should be plural 'favorites' to agree with 'singers'.

× And you learn the new songs by this way, I ain't tryin myself.

✓ And you learn new songs in this way; I haven't tried it myself.

The sentence incorrectly uses 'you' and informal 'ain't tryin'; it should be 'I haven't tried it myself' to correctly express the speaker's experience. Also, 'by this way' should be 'in this way'.

× Oh interesting question. I love to sing for my husband because when I am short of the words, I want to express my feelings and love for him by singing.

✓ Oh, interesting question. I love to sing for my husband because when I am at a loss for words, I want to express my feelings and love for him by singing.

The phrase 'short of the words' is incorrect; the correct idiom is 'at a loss for words'.

× And I think it is a unique way to express and convey your feelings for your loved ones and it also makes the born more stronger and connected.

✓ And I think it is a unique way to express and convey your feelings for your loved ones, and it also makes the bond stronger and more connected.

The word 'born' is incorrect; the correct word is 'bond' to refer to a connection between people. Also, 'more stronger' is redundant; 'stronger' alone is correct.

× Yes, definitely sinking can bring up smile on the faces of the people especially when we sing for them As for example when I sing for my friends and to try to make them feel special, they enjoy and also it makes the born more stronger and connected and it helps to induce the feeling of.

✓ Yes, definitely singing can bring a smile to people's faces, especially when we sing for them. For example, when I sing for my friends to try to make them feel special, they enjoy it, and it also makes the bond stronger and more connected, and it helps to induce feelings of happiness.

The word 'sinking' is a typo and should be 'singing'. The phrase 'bring up smile' should be 'bring a smile'. 'The born' is incorrect; it should be 'the bond'. The sentence was incomplete and lacked clarity; it has been corrected for coherence and grammar.