Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: In your answer, try to use correct grammar and clear sentences. Start with a direct response, then add specific reasons or examples. Avoid unclear phrases and irrelevant details. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because I have been learning it since I was four years old. It is my hobby, and I enjoy singing during my free time. For example, I admire a famous singer called JJ Lin, who inspires me a lot.

Gợi ý: Make sure your sentences are grammatically correct and clear. Begin with a direct answer, then provide specific details about your learning experience. Use linking words to make your answer coherent.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learnt how to sing since I was four years old. My mother sent me to a famous singing teacher named Rocedure in my hometown, Ipoh. I have learned many techniques from her, and she is a very kind teacher.

Gợi ý: Answer the question directly and clearly. Explain your feelings or preferences with specific reasons. Avoid confusing or incomplete sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas.

Ví dụ: I usually sing for myself because singing is my hobby. However, I also enjoy participating in singing competitions at my school, where I can share my passion with others.

Gợi ý: Try to express your ideas clearly and logically. Start with a direct answer, then explain why with specific examples. Avoid unclear or irrelevant phrases. Use linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, my favorite singer, Gilliam, sings with passion, and listening to his songs always makes me feel joyful and relaxed.

× Yes, I'm like singing.

✓ Yes, I like singing.

The verb 'like' is a stative verb and is not used in the continuous form 'I'm like'. The correct form is simple present 'I like'.

× This is because I have learned singing since I'm four years old.

✓ This is because I have been learning singing since I was four years old.

The phrase 'since I'm four years old' is incorrect; 'since' requires a past point in time, so 'I was four years old' is correct. Also, 'have learned' should be present perfect continuous 'have been learning' to indicate an action continuing from past to present.

× Thing is my hobby and I love to sing during my leisure time.

✓ Singing is my hobby and I love to sing during my leisure time.

'Thing' is incorrect here; the intended subject is 'Singing'. The singular noun 'Singing' should be used to refer to the activity.

× I have an adult which I have infusing I have of supervising it.

✓ I have an adult who supervises me.

The original sentence is unclear and uses incorrect pronouns and verbs. 'Adult' refers to a person, so 'who' is used instead of 'which'. The phrase 'I have infusing I have of supervising it' is incorrect and should be simplified to 'who supervises me'.

× Famous singer is called JJ Lim.

✓ The famous singer is called JJ Lim.

The definite article 'The' is needed before 'famous singer' to specify the person being referred to.

× Yes, I did, and singing since I'm four years old.

✓ Yes, I did, and I have been singing since I was four years old.

The phrase 'singing since I'm four years old' is incorrect; it should be present perfect continuous 'have been singing' and 'I was four years old' for past time reference.

× My mom having me to go to a very famous teacher which is named as Rocedure that located in Ipoh, my hometown.

✓ My mom had me go to a very famous teacher named Rocedure who is located in Ipoh, my hometown.

The verb 'having' is incorrectly used; past tense 'had' is correct. 'Named as' should be 'named'. 'Which' is better replaced by 'who' when referring to a person. 'That located' should be 'who is located'.

× Add lens many tonight from her.

✓ I learned a lot from her.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. It should be rephrased to 'I learned a lot from her' to convey the intended meaning.

× Who do you want to sing for?

✓ Who do you want to sing for?

No correction needed; the sentence is grammatically correct.

× Actually singing is just my hobby and I don't sing for anyone but I love singing competitions and I think for my.

✓ Actually, singing is just my hobby and I don't sing for anyone, but I love singing competitions and I think about them for myself.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding commas and completing the thought improves clarity.

× School students.

✓ I think about school students.

The phrase 'School students.' is incomplete and unclear. It should be part of a complete sentence with a subject and verb.

× I enjoy singing, but not just for the anyone, I just enjoy it.

✓ I enjoy singing, but not just for anyone; I just enjoy it.

The phrase 'for the anyone' is incorrect; 'for anyone' is correct. Also, a semicolon or period is needed to separate the two independent clauses.

× Sure, I do think that are from a sample my favorite single Gilliam.

✓ Sure, I do think that, for example, my favorite singer Gilliam...

The sentence is unclear and contains incorrect words. 'Sample' should be 'example', 'single' should be 'singer', and the sentence needs restructuring.

× I love to hear his his cards.

✓ I love to hear his songs.

'His cards' is incorrect; likely intended 'his songs' or 'his records'.

× Yeah, he sing, he enjoy singing and he saw his singing tanning bring me many enjoyment and also happy, happy NIS.

✓ Yeah, he sings, he enjoys singing and I saw his singing talent bring me much enjoyment and happiness.

Subject-verb agreement errors: 'he sing' should be 'he sings', 'he enjoy' should be 'he enjoys'. 'Saw' should be 'see' or 'I saw' with correct tense. 'Singing tanning' is incorrect; likely 'singing talent'. 'Many enjoyment' should be 'much enjoyment'. 'Happy, happy NIS' is unclear and corrected to 'happiness'.