Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
And yes, I definitely like singing because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, I often think with my friends at karaoke bar, which is a great way for us to relieve stress and have fun together. On some of my friends sing really good, I enjoying too.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
I have learned how to saying Formula Lee since I graduated from Virginia High School in China where you really have music class on during the primary and junior high school where the teacher teach us how to sing some classic songs I sang. However, I think this lesson are mainly designed for children so I didn't continue learning singing after that.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
Are you really like to sing for my boyfriend becauses he really enjoying my singing and always give me some positive feedback and sometimes I just saying for somebody who passed by passing by, but I will enjoy to think for the people who will appreciate my shown instead of judging me.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Of course saying can bring happiness to people for example, last week I attend to a music show at my school and listen to the singer on a stage make me feel really inspired their passion and. Energy give me a sense of join and motivation.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 你的回答表达了喜欢唱歌的原因,但存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式,避免重复表达,并使用更准确的词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, I definitely like singing because it helps me relax after a busy day. For example, I often go to karaoke bars with my friends, which is a great way for us to relieve stress and have fun together. Some of my friends sing really well, and I enjoy singing with them too.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多,句子结构混乱,表达不清晰。建议简化句子结构,注意时态和主谓一致,清晰表达学习唱歌的经历。
Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary and junior high school at Virginia High School in China. We had music classes where the teacher taught us to sing classic songs. However, I think these lessons were mainly for children, so I didn't continue learning singing after that.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法和表达不准确,句子不连贯。建议使用简单明了的句子,注意动词形式和连词的使用,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I like to sing for my boyfriend because he enjoys my singing and always gives me positive feedback. Sometimes, I also sing for people passing by, but I prefer to sing for those who appreciate my performance rather than judge me.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不完整的问题,句子结构混乱。建议注意动词形式,句子完整性,并使用连接词使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: Of course, singing can bring happiness to people. For example, last week I attended a music show at my school and listened to a singer on stage. Their passion and energy inspired me and gave me a sense of joy and motivation.