Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more natural and coherent. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases. Try to form complete sentences and explain why you like singing with specific reasons.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love singing because it helps me express my emotions. I am a big fan of Punjabi music, which inspires me to sing songs with passion.

Gợi ý: Your answer lacks clarity and proper sentence structure. Try to answer directly and use linking words to make your response coherent. Provide specific details about how you learnt singing.

Ví dụ: No, I have never taken formal singing classes. Instead, I learnt by watching and listening to my favourite songs on TV, which helped me improve my singing skills.

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and fragmented. Respond directly to the question with a topic sentence and add supporting details using linking words. Be specific about whom you want to sing for and why.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my mother, especially on her birthday. For example, last year I surprised her by singing her favourite song, which made her very happy.

Gợi ý: Your answer should be more fluent and connected. Use linking words to explain how singing brings happiness and be specific about its effects.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness to people because it relaxes the mind and helps release stress and negative emotions.

× I mostly listen D. Music of Punjabi. Where I can inspire to sing the songs.

✓ I mostly listen to Punjabi music, which inspires me to sing songs.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'listen D. Music' instead of 'listen to Punjabi music'. The verb 'listen' requires the preposition 'to' before the object. Also, 'Where I can inspire to sing the songs' is incorrect; it should be 'which inspires me to sing songs' to correctly express the idea.

× Well, no, I can't. Learn. Singing from anywhere. And not get classes.

✓ Well, no, I haven't learned singing from anywhere, and I haven't taken any classes.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'can't' and fragmented sentences. The correct modal verb usage here is 'haven't learned' to indicate past experience. Also, 'not get classes' is incorrect; it should be 'haven't taken any classes'.

× Hi. Learn singing from watching and listening to music. On TV.

✓ I learn singing by watching and listening to music on TV.

The original sentence is fragmented and lacks subject-verb agreement. 'Learn singing from watching' should be 'I learn singing by watching' to correctly use the present participle and preposition.

× And when I was listen, my favorite.

✓ And when I listened to my favorite songs.

The phrase 'when I was listen' is incorrect; the past tense of 'listen' is 'listened'. Also, the sentence is incomplete and needs 'to my favorite songs' to be complete.

× On my mother's birthday, I was singing a song. 4. Her. To surprise him. By singing are. Her favorite song?

✓ On my mother's birthday, I sang a song for her to surprise her by singing her favorite song.

The original sentence is fragmented and uses incorrect pronouns and prepositions. '4. Her' should be 'for her', 'surprise him' should be 'surprise her' to match the subject, and 'singing are' is incorrect; it should be 'by singing'.

× It's very fascinating.

✓ It was very fascinating.

Since the event happened in the past (mother's birthday), the adjective should be in past tense context, so 'was' is appropriate instead of 'is'.

× Yes, singing is. Bring happiness to the people.

✓ Yes, singing brings happiness to people.

The original sentence is fragmented and incorrectly structured. 'Singing is. Bring happiness' should be combined into 'singing brings happiness' to form a correct sentence.

× And it feels. The mind relax. Anne. Release the. Depression. Acceptable.

✓ And it makes the mind relax and helps release depression effectively.

The original sentence is fragmented and contains unclear words like 'Anne' and 'Acceptable'. The corrected sentence places adverbs and verbs properly to convey the intended meaning clearly.