Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Actually I don't like thing because I'm not very good at saying. Boss sometimes if I go out with my friends. I would be the one. Listening. My friends thing.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, I never learned how to think because is not my thing. And I'm going. I'm not going to. Plan, play or. Played too much time in learning thing.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I want to sing with my friends because I feel very comfortable and relaxed. Bowl. The atmosphere is very friendly when I wished her.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, of course saying can bring happiness to people, for example when you feel stressed. On the work. And listening some light bulb. Songs will make you feel comfortable and relax.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议简洁明了地表达观点,并注意语法和词汇的准确使用。例如,直接说明不喜欢唱歌的原因,并避免重复和无关内容。
Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I'm not very good at it. When I go out with my friends, I prefer to listen to them sing rather than sing myself.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答中语法混乱且表达不完整,建议直接回答问题并简洁说明原因,避免使用不连贯的句子。
Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing because it's not something I am interested in, and I don't plan to spend time learning it.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了基本意思,但存在语法和词汇错误,建议使用连贯的句子并适当使用连接词,使表达更自然流畅。
Ví dụ: I want to sing with my friends because I feel comfortable and relaxed around them. The atmosphere is always friendly when we sing together.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议使用完整句子并具体说明原因,避免使用错误的词汇。
Ví dụ: Yes, singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when you feel stressed at work, listening to light and cheerful songs can help you feel relaxed and comfortable.
× Actually I don't like thing because I'm not very good at saying.
✓ Actually I don't like singing because I'm not very good at singing.
这里'saying'应为'singing',因为题目是关于唱歌,动词后应使用动名词形式表示喜欢或不喜欢某个活动。
× Boss sometimes if I go out with my friends. I would be the one. Listening. My friends thing.
✓ But sometimes if I go out with my friends, I would be the one listening to my friends singing.
句子中'Listening'应为动名词形式'listening'并且需要加介词'to',表示倾听朋友唱歌。
× No, I never learned how to think because is not my thing.
✓ No, I never learned how to sing because it is not my thing.
'think'应为'sing',且缺少主语'it',需要完整表达。
× And I'm going. I'm not going to. Plan, play or. Played too much time in learning thing.
✓ And I'm not going to plan, play, or spend too much time learning singing.
句子结构混乱,'played'应为动词原形,且'learning thing'应为'learning singing',动词后应接动名词。
× I want to sing with my friends because I feel very comfortable and relaxed. Bowl. The atmosphere is very friendly when I wished her.
✓ I want to sing with my friends because I feel very comfortable and relaxed. The atmosphere is very friendly when I wish her.
'wished'时态错误,应为现在时'wish',且句子中'Bowl'无意义,应删除。
× Yes, of course saying can bring happiness to people, for example when you feel stressed. On the work. And listening some light bulb. Songs will make you feel comfortable and relax.
✓ Yes, of course singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when you feel stressed at work, listening to some light ballad songs will make you feel comfortable and relaxed.
'saying'应为'singing','On the work'应为'at work','listening some'应为'listening to some','light bulb'应为'light ballad','relax'应为'relaxed',动词和介词使用错误。