Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答表达不清晰，语法和词汇使用有误，建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免重复。

Ví dụ: I don't like singing because I think my singing is poor, but I enjoy listening to music.

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯且含糊，建议直接回答问题并补充具体细节，使用连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing in elementary school from my music teacher, but I didn't practice much, so I'm not very good.

Gợi ý: 回答断断续续，语法错误较多，建议用完整句子表达原因，并使用连接词使句子连贯。

Ví dụ: If possible, I want to sing for my friends because even though I don't sing very well, I believe they will accept me.

Gợi ý: 表达不清晰且语法错误，建议用简单明了的句子表达观点，并举例说明。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can express people's emotions simply, so it can bring happiness to them.

× Will I think I don't like seeing because I think my saying is very poor, but I like. Listen to the music.

✓ Well, I think I don't like singing because I think my singing is very poor, but I like listening to music.

动词后面需要用动名词形式（-ing）表示动作或活动。这里'seeing'应改为'singing'，'saying'应改为'singing'，'Listen'应改为'listening'。

× Yes. Why was a element? Elementary school I learned how to sing by my music teacher, but unfortunately. I didn't. Then well, very well.

✓ Yes. When I was in elementary school, I learned how to sing from my music teacher, but unfortunately, I didn't do it very well.

过去时态使用错误。'Why was a element?'应为'When I was in elementary school'，'learned how to sing by'应为'learned how to sing from'，'I didn't. Then well, very well.'应合并为'I didn't do it very well'。

× Yes. Why was a element? Elementary school I learned how to sing by my music teacher, but unfortunately. I didn't. Then well, very well.

✓ Yes. When I was in elementary school, I learned how to sing from my music teacher, but unfortunately, I didn't do it very well.

介词使用错误。'learned how to sing by my music teacher'应改为'learned how to sing from my music teacher'，因为表示教导时用from。

× If possible, I want to sing for my friends. B 'cause. I think. Although I sing not very well. She will. Accept me.

✓ If possible, I want to sing for my friends because I think although I don't sing very well, they will accept me.

连词使用错误。'B 'cause.'应为'because'，句子断裂，应合并为完整句子。

× If possible, I want to sing for my friends. B 'cause. I think. Although I sing not very well. She will. Accept me.

✓ If possible, I want to sing for my friends because I think although I don't sing very well, they will accept me.

单复数错误。'She will accept me'应为'they will accept me'，因为前文提到的是'friends'，复数。

× Yes, I think sing a song is a simpler simple of the somebody's. Emotional so I seeing seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing a song is a simple way to express somebody's emotions, so singing can bring happiness to people.

动词后应使用动名词形式。'sing a song'应为'singing a song'，'seeing seeing'应为'singing'。

× Yes, I think sing a song is a simpler simple of the somebody's. Emotional so I seeing seeing can bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing a song is a simple way to express somebody's emotions, so singing can bring happiness to people.

形容词使用错误。'simpler simple'应为'simple way'，'somebody's emotional'应为'somebody's emotions'。