Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答不够自然，表达不清晰，存在语法和词汇错误。建议简化句子结构，直接表达喜欢唱歌的原因，并用具体细节支持。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my feelings. Also, singing can improve my confidence and help me make new friends.

Gợi ý: 回答内容混乱，语法错误多，表达不连贯。建议直接回答是否学过唱歌，并说明学习方式和原因，使用连贯的句子。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learned to sing by watching online tutorials because I find it difficult to sing well, so I want to improve my skills.

Gợi ý: 回答不连贯，表达不清楚。建议直接说明想为谁唱歌，并解释原因，使用连贯的句子和连接词。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my friends because I feel comfortable with them and we have spent a lot of time together.

Gợi ý: 回答较为清晰，但语法和用词有误。建议使用完整句子，准确表达观点，并用具体理由支持。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because it allows people to express their emotions and relieve stress.

× I like to sing because I think seeing or some well can improve yourself, charm and attract more people who are the mind you and you can make more friends on it.

✓ I like to sing because I think singing well can improve yourself, charm others, and attract more people who have the same mind as you, and you can make more friends through it.

原句中'seeing'应为'singing'，且'some well'不合适，应为'singing well'。此外，'people who are the mind you'表达不清，应改为'people who have the same mind as you'。复数和单数的使用需要注意，'people'为复数，动词和代词需对应。

× I like to sing because I think seeing or some well can improve yourself, charm and attract more people who are the mind you and you can make more friends on it.

✓ I like to sing because I think singing well can improve yourself, charm others, and attract more people who have the same mind as you, and you can make more friends through it.

动词后面需要使用动名词形式，'seeing'应为'singing'，表示喜欢唱歌。

× I like to sing because I think seeing or some well can improve yourself, charm and attract more people who are the mind you and you can make more friends on it.

✓ I like to sing because I think singing well can improve yourself, charm others, and attract more people who have the same mind as you, and you can make more friends through it.

'make more friends on it'中的介词'on'使用错误，应改为'through'，表示通过某事物交朋友。

× Yes, I have a lot of experience and searching how to sing or somewhere in the Internet because I think her sing a song well is not easy for me.

✓ Yes, I have a lot of experience and have searched how to sing somewhere on the Internet because I think singing a song well is not easy for me.

'searching'应使用完成时态'have searched'，表示过去到现在的经历。

× Yes, I have a lot of experience and searching how to sing or somewhere in the Internet because I think her sing a song well is not easy for me.

✓ Yes, I have a lot of experience and have searched how to sing somewhere on the Internet because I think singing a song well is not easy for me.

'somewhere in the Internet'中的介词'in'使用不当，应改为'on the Internet'，表示在互联网上。

× Yes, I have a lot of experience and searching how to sing or somewhere in the Internet because I think her sing a song well is not easy for me.

✓ Yes, I have a lot of experience and have searched how to sing somewhere on the Internet because I think singing a song well is not easy for me.

'her sing a song well'表达错误，应为'singing a song well'，动名词形式表示动作。

× Yes, I have a lot of experience and searching how to sing or somewhere in the Internet because I think her sing a song well is not easy for me.

✓ Yes, I have a lot of experience and have searched how to sing somewhere on the Internet because I think singing a song well is not easy for me.

'her'用法错误，应该用动名词'singing'来表达动作。

× I want you sing for for my friends, 'cause I think this is not embarrassed.

✓ I want to sing for my friends because I think this is not embarrassing.

'you sing for for my friends'中'you'错误，应为'I want to sing for my friends'。'embarrassed'应为形容词' embarrassing'，表示不令人尴尬。

× I want you sing for for my friends, 'cause I think this is not embarrassed.

✓ I want to sing for my friends because I think this is not embarrassing.

'cause'是口语缩写，正式表达应为'because'。

× Same. Towards my friends. Be 'cause we have seen so many times in many positions.

✓ It's the same with my friends because we have seen each other many times in many situations.

'Towards my friends'用法不当，应改为'with my friends'。'seen so many times in many positions'表达不清，改为'seen each other many times in many situations'更合适。

× Same. Towards my friends. Be 'cause we have seen so many times in many positions.

✓ It's the same with my friends because we have seen each other many times in many situations.

缺少主语，'we have seen each other'中需要反身代词each other表示相互。

× Yes, I think saying can surely bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing can surely bring happiness to people.

'saying'应为'singing'，表示唱歌。

× Yes, I think saying can surely bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I think singing can surely bring happiness to people.

动词后应使用动名词形式，'saying'应为'singing'。

× 'Cause I think sing a song. Is a good way to express your emotion and the release if you're. Pressure.

✓ Because I think singing a song is a good way to express your emotions and release your pressure.

'sing a song'应为动名词'singing a song'。'the release if you're. Pressure'表达错误，应为'release your pressure'。

× 'Cause I think sing a song. Is a good way to express your emotion and the release if you're. Pressure.

✓ Because I think singing a song is a good way to express your emotions and release your pressure.

句子结构不完整，断句错误，应合并为完整句子。