Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中有语法错误和词汇使用不当，如'seeing'应为'singing'，'can't give me a lot of confidence'表达不准确，建议使用更自然的表达方式，并注意句子结构的完整性。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me build confidence and allows me to fully immerse myself in a relaxing atmosphere.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，如'learn to think'应为'learn to sing'，句子不连贯。建议使用连贯的句子表达，并注意时态和拼写。

Ví dụ: I haven't learned how to sing because I was busy with my studies, but if I get a chance, I would like to learn it.

Gợi ý: 回答中多处语法和拼写错误，如'becauses'应为'because'，'seeing'应为'singing'，句子不完整且表达混乱。建议简洁明了地表达观点，注意句子完整性。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for myself because singing helps me build confidence and relax in a peaceful atmosphere.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在拼写错误和语法错误，如'do see in'应为'do think singing'，'relief'应为'relieve'，句子不连贯。建议使用正确的词汇和连贯的句子表达观点。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can help people express their emotions and relieve stress. For example, when I sing, I feel more relaxed and happy because it helps me forget my worries for a while.

× Yes, I like seeing 'cause I think singing can't give me a lot of confidence when I am saying I can fully emerge myself in the soft atmosphere.

✓ Yes, I like singing 'cause I think singing can give me a lot of confidence when I am singing I can fully immerse myself in the soft atmosphere.

动词后面使用-ing形式时，应该是动词本身的正确形式。这里'seeing'应为'singing'，且'saying'应为'singing'，'emerge'应为'immense'的误写，正确为'immense'。动词形式错误导致句意不清。

× I haven't learned how to sing. I was. Busy with my study so I don't have alot time to learn to think.

✓ I haven't learned how to sing. I was busy with my study so I don't have a lot of time to learn to sing.

过去时态使用不当，'was. Busy'中间不应有句号，应连成一句。'alot'应为'a lot'，'learn to think'应为'learn to sing'，符合语境。

× If I get a chance I would like to learn it.

✓ If I get a chance, I would like to learn it.

条件句中，主句和从句之间应有逗号分隔，缺少逗号导致句子结构不清晰。

× I want to sing for myself becauses I think seeing can help me build my confidence when I am saying I can fully immerse myself in the. Relaxing atmosphere I can. Correct myself.

✓ I want to sing for myself because I think singing can help me build my confidence when I am singing. I can fully immerse myself in the relaxing atmosphere and correct myself.

'becauses'拼写错误，应为'because'。'seeing'应为'singing'。句子断裂，缺少连词，导致表达不完整。代词使用不当，句子结构混乱。

× Yes I do see in can help people express their emotions and relief stress.

✓ Yes, I do see it can help people express their emotions and relieve stress.

'see in'应为'see it'，'relief'应为动词'relieve'，动词形式错误导致句意不明。

× For example when I asking I feel more relaxed and happy because it allows me to forget my worries for awhile.

✓ For example, when I am singing, I feel more relaxed and happy because it allows me to forget my worries for a while.

'when I asking'缺少动词形式，应为'when I am singing'。'for awhile'应为'for a while'，介词短语使用错误。

× It's also. Bring a lot of happier to us.

✓ It also brings a lot of happiness to us.

'It's also. Bring'句子断裂，应为'It also brings'。'happier'为比较级，名词应为'happiness'。形容词和副词使用错误。