Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，直接表达观点，并避免重复和冗余。可以尝试用简单明了的句子表达不喜欢唱歌的原因。

Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I'm not good at it and I feel shy when I sing in front of others.

Gợi ý: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不流畅。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，清晰表达自己没有学过唱歌的原因，并且避免拼写错误。

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing because I prefer playing musical instruments and singing is not my interest.

Gợi ý: 回答内容较好，但存在语法和用词错误。建议注意时态一致，使用连词使句子更连贯，同时避免重复表达。

Ví dụ: I like to sing for my friends because we often sing together at karaoke. They always give me positive feedback, which helps me improve, and singing together strengthens our friendship.

Gợi ý: 回答中表达不够清晰，语法和词汇使用不准确。建议简化句子结构，明确表达观点，并使用恰当的连接词使句子更流畅。

Ví dụ: I think singing can bring happiness if you are good at it because it makes you feel confident and proud. But if you are not good, you might feel shy or awkward.

× Oh no, I'm not particularly founded saying actually I'm not good at it.

✓ Oh no, I'm not particularly fond of singing actually I'm not good at it.

这里'specially founded'是错误的表达，正确的应该是'fond of'，表示喜欢某事。'saying'应为'singing'，因为题目是关于唱歌。

× And besides I'm I can find my confidence in saying so I'm saying from the people or sing along make me feel awkward.

✓ And besides I can't find my confidence in singing so singing in front of people or singing along makes me feel awkward.

'I'm I can find'语法错误，应为'I can't find'。'saying'应为'singing'。'sing along'前应加动名词形式。主语单数时谓语动词应加s。

× So I don't really enjoy seeing.

✓ So I don't really enjoy singing.

'seeing'应为'singing'，因为上下文讨论的是唱歌。

× No, actually I haven't been learned anything about saying I'm not.

✓ No, actually I haven't learned anything about singing.

'haven't been learned'是错误的被动结构，正确用法是现在完成时的主动语态'haven't learned'。'saying'应为'singing'。

× I would say it's a It's not my cup of tea and besides I preferred who playing instruments compared to seeing, so knocking interests prevent me from learning C.

✓ I would say it's not my cup of tea and besides I prefer playing instruments compared to singing, so lacking interest prevents me from learning singing.

'preferred'应为一般现在时'prefer'，因为表达习惯或喜好。'who playing'应为'playing'。'seeing'应为'singing'。'knocking interests'应为'lacking interest'。主语单数时谓语动词加s。

× I would say my friends, we usually sing together in karaoke and I really enjoyed seeing for them because they always give me a positive feedback and help me to improve.

✓ I would say my friends, we usually sing together in karaoke and I really enjoy singing for them because they always give me positive feedback and help me to improve.

'enjoyed'应为一般现在时'enjoy'，因为描述习惯。'seeing'应为'singing'。'a positive feedback'中'feedback'是不可数名词，不加冠词。

× Besides, I would say it's a very good way to bond with each other so I would say my friends are the most.

✓ Besides, I would say it's a very good way to bond with each other so I would say my friends are the most important.

句子不完整，缺少形容词补充说明'most'。

× I would say it depends, maybe if you are a good singer, maybe when you are saying you feel very confident and feel very proud to express yourself and you can feel very happy and gain a sense of achievement when seeing.

✓ I would say it depends, maybe if you are a good singer, when you are singing you feel very confident and feel very proud to express yourself and you can feel very happy and gain a sense of achievement when singing.

'saying'应为'singing'，因为上下文讨论唱歌。

× However, if we're not good as saying may feel shy or awkward when I think.

✓ However, if we're not good at singing, we may feel shy or awkward, I think.

'not good as'应为'not good at'。'saying'应为'singing'。句子结构调整使表达更清晰。