Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答は意味が伝わりますが、文法の誤りや不自然な表現が多く、内容もやや冗長です。より自然で効果的な英語表現を使い、文を簡潔にまとめることを意識しましょう。例えば、"I like singing because it makes me feel excited. However, I prefer singing alone because I feel embarrassed in front of many people."のように、直接的で明確な表現を心がけてください。

Ví dụ: I like singing because it makes me feel excited. However, I prefer singing alone because I feel embarrassed when I sing in front of many people.

Gợi ý: 回答が不明瞭で文法的な誤りが多いです。質問に直接答え、具体的な経験を簡潔に述べることが重要です。例えば、"Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in elementary school. I took music classes where I learned the basics."のように表現しましょう。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in elementary school. I took music classes where I learned the basics.

Gợi ý: 文法の誤りが多く、意味が伝わりにくい部分があります。質問に対して直接的に答え、理由を明確に述べることが大切です。例えば、"I want to sing for myself because singing makes me feel excited and happy. I usually sing when I feel sad or uncomfortable."のように簡潔にまとめましょう。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for myself because singing makes me feel excited and happy. I usually sing when I feel sad or uncomfortable.

Gợi ý: 回答は基本的な内容を伝えていますが、文が断片的で繋がりが弱いです。接続詞を使って論理的に話を展開し、具体的な理由や例を加えると良いでしょう。例えば、"Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it makes me feel excited and happy. Also, listening to music has a similar effect on me."のように表現してください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I think singing can bring happiness because it makes me feel excited and happy. Also, listening to music has a similar effect on me.

× I like singing big 'cause when I sing a song.

✓ I like singing a lot because when I sing a song,

The sentence is incomplete and incorrectly structured. 'big' is used incorrectly; it should be 'a lot' to express intensity. Also, 'cause' should be expanded to 'because' for formal correctness. The sentence needs a comma to connect the clauses properly.

× But I like to seeing alone.

✓ But I like to sing alone.

The verb form 'to seeing' is incorrect. After 'like to', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'to sing' is correct. Also, 'alone' is correctly placed.

× The 'cause when I seen in front of many people, I feel embarrassed.

✓ Because when I am in front of many people, I feel embarrassed.

'The 'cause' is informal and should be 'Because'. 'seen' is the past participle and incorrectly used here; the present tense 'am' is appropriate to describe a current feeling. Also, 'in front of many people' is correct preposition usage.

× Yes, I've around how to sing when I was an elementary school student.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing when I was an elementary school student.

'I've around' is incorrect and unclear. The correct past tense verb 'learned' should be used to indicate past action. 'I was an elementary school student' correctly sets the past time frame.

× I took a music class.

✓ I took a music class.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× I love about the basic. Information or music?

✓ I love the basics of music.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'I love about the basic' is incorrect; it should be 'I love the basics'. 'Information or music?' is unclear and should be omitted or rephrased for clarity.

× I want to say for myself.

✓ I want to sing for myself.

'Say for myself' is incorrect in this context; the correct verb is 'sing' to match the question about singing.

× The 'cause when I sing a song, I feel excited.

✓ Because when I sing a song, I feel excited.

'The 'cause' is informal and should be 'Because' to start the sentence properly.

× Singing a song makes me happy.

✓ Singing a song makes me happy.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× So are usually sing a song when I was sad or when I feel uncomfortable.

✓ So I usually sing a song when I am sad or when I feel uncomfortable.

'Are usually sing' is incorrect; it should be 'I usually sing'. Also, 'when I was sad' should be 'when I am sad' to maintain present tense consistency. 'When I feel uncomfortable' is correct.

× 'Cause when I sing a song, I feel excited and happy.

✓ Because when I sing a song, I feel excited and happy.

'Cause' is informal and should be replaced with 'Because' for proper sentence structure.

× Also when I listen to music.

✓ Also, when I listen to music,

This is a sentence fragment and needs a comma after 'Also' and continuation to complete the thought.

× I feel excited.

✓ I feel excited.

This sentence is correct and needs no correction.

× And I really like to listen to music.

✓ I really like to listen to music.

Starting a sentence with 'And' is informal; it is better to remove it for formal correctness.

× It makes me more.

✓ It makes me feel better.

'It makes me more' is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'feel better' completes the thought and makes the sentence meaningful.