Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和用词不当，如'some very big part'应为'a very big part'，'seeing'应为'singing'。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复表达，并使用更自然的表达方式。

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Music plays a very important role in people's lives. I enjoy singing in the shower and while driving because it lifts my mood and makes me feel energetic.

Gợi ý: 回答中有重复和语法错误，如'how to how to sing'，'a pop music'应为'pop music'。建议简洁表达，注意语法和词汇的正确使用。

Ví dụ: No, I've never formally learned how to sing. I just listen to pop music and sing along for fun when I have free time or feel happy.

Gợi ý: 回答表达了个人感受，但存在语法错误，如'Saying for him'应为'Singing for him'，并有重复词汇。建议注意语法准确性，避免重复，并使用连贯的连接词。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my husband because I feel comfortable and confident around him. I'm quite shy to sing in front of others since I don't think my voice is very good, so singing for him makes me feel relaxed and happy.

Gợi ý: 回答中有断句不连贯和语法错误，如'people are facing with more. Pressure'应为'people are facing more pressure'，'seeing'应为'singing'。建议注意句子连贯性和语法正确性。

Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Nowadays, people face more pressure than ever before, so many enjoy singing in their free time. It can certainly bring happiness and a sense of peace.

× I think music is some very big part in people's life.

✓ I think music is a very big part of people's lives.

这里'some'用法不当，应该用不定冠词'a'，并且'part'后面需要介词'of'，'people's life'应为复数形式'people's lives'，因为指的是很多人的生活。

× I think music is some very big part in people's life.

✓ I think music is a very big part of people's lives.

介词'in'用错，应该用'of'来表示所属关系。

× So do I and I like seeing in the shower and when I am driving.

✓ So do I, and I like singing in the shower and when I am driving.

'seeing'应为'singing'，这里是动词拼写错误，导致意思不符。

× I just listened to a pop music and sing along because I am not so talented in singing.

✓ I just listened to pop music and sing along because I am not so talented in singing.

'music'是不可数名词，前面不需要冠词'a'。

× I just listened to a pop music and sing along because I am not so talented in singing.

✓ I just listened to pop music and sing along because I am not so talented at singing.

'talented in'用法不当，正确搭配是'talented at'。

× Saying for him makes me feel relaxed and happy.

✓ Singing for him makes me feel relaxed and happy.

'Saying'应为'Singing'，拼写错误导致意思不符。

× Nowadays, people are facing with more. Pressure than ever before, so.

✓ Nowadays, people are facing more pressure than ever before, so.

'face'动词后不需要介词'with'，直接加宾语。

× A lot of people like seeing in their free time, and it can certainly. Bring people happiness and peacefulness.

✓ A lot of people like singing in their free time, and it can certainly bring people happiness and peace.

'seeing'应为'singing'，'peacefulness'通常用'peace'表示更自然。