Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I like singing, I said, saying it is a way of relaxing myself. Oh, I can. Suits or I can still sing loudly to refresh myself and release my stress.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No. I haven't ever learn about how to see I just the. C1 Whatever I want to see and whenever I want to sit.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
Nobody I want to sing for. I just want to see for myself it actually. I like. Saying just over the lonely. Others. Comment Eisenhower performed better and the relaxed more better.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes. Is happiness for me. So I think this must. Happiness for other people. Some people make it.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答不够连贯,表达不自然,存在语法错误和重复。建议简洁明了地表达观点,并使用连贯的句子结构。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and relieve stress. Sometimes, I sing loudly to refresh myself after a long day.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 20.0Gợi ý: 回答含糊不清,语法错误严重,表达不完整。建议直接回答问题,并用完整句子说明情况。
Ví dụ: No, I have never taken singing lessons. I usually sing whenever I feel like it, without any formal training.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 15.0Gợi ý: 回答混乱且难以理解,缺乏逻辑和连贯性。建议明确表达想法,使用连贯的句子,并避免无关内容。
Ví dụ: I usually sing for myself because it makes me feel happy and relaxed. I don't often perform for others.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 25.0Gợi ý: 回答不完整且表达不清晰。建议用完整句子表达观点,并提供理由或例子支持。
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people because it allows them to express their emotions and feel joyful.
× Yes, I like singing, I said, saying it is a way of relaxing myself.
✓ Yes, I like singing, I said, saying it is a way of relaxing myself.
该句中"saying"用法正确,表示正在说的动作,符合动词+ing形式的用法,无需修改。
× Oh, I can. Suits or I can still sing loudly to refresh myself and release my stress.
✓ Oh, I can. Sometimes I can still sing loudly to refresh myself and release my stress.
原句中"Suits or"应为"Sometimes",这是代词使用错误,导致句意不清。应使用正确的副词来表达频率。
× No. I haven't ever learn about how to see I just the. C1 Whatever I want to see and whenever I want to sit.
✓ No. I haven't ever learned about how to sing. I just sing whatever I want to sing and whenever I want to sing.
"learn"应使用过去分词"learned",因为前面有助动词"have",构成现在完成时。"see"应为"sing",且句子结构混乱,需调整。
× Nobody I want to sing for. I just want to see for myself it actually.
✓ Nobody I want to sing for. I just want to sing for myself actually.
"see"应为"sing",且"for myself it actually"语序错误,应调整为"for myself actually"。代词使用不当导致句意不明。
× Saying just over the lonely. Others. Comment Eisenhower performed better and the relaxed more better.
✓ Singing just over the lonely others. Some people perform better and feel more relaxed.
"Saying"应为"Singing","more better"是比较级错误,应为"better"或"more relaxed"。句子结构混乱,需调整。
× Yes. Is happiness for me. So I think this must. Happiness for other people. Some people make it.
✓ Yes. It is happiness for me. So I think this must be happiness for other people. Some people make it.
缺少主语"It",导致句子不完整。"must"后应接动词原形"be",构成情态动词用法。句子结构需调整。