Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes, I really enjoy singing the cup is help me express my emotion and feel more relaxed after in a busy day for symbol of friend single. My friend, you instead of fries.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, I have never learn how to sing, but I. I still. Enjoy. Singing.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
I would like to sing for my family and girlfriend. Singing for them feels mom personal or meaningful because they know me there an appearance if my first my over their support and incorporate.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes I believe saying can definatly bring happiness to people singing allowed in the visual. 2 is raise their emotion and can be every 15 especially when the auto in outlook or jar.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, nhiều phần không liên quan hoặc khó hiểu. Bạn nên tập trung trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, sử dụng câu đơn giản, rõ ràng và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy cố gắng diễn đạt ý tưởng một cách tự nhiên và có logic hơn.
Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and feel relaxed after a busy day.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: Bạn cần chú ý ngữ pháp, đặc biệt là thì động từ (learn -> learned/learnt). Câu trả lời nên đầy đủ hơn và tránh ngắt quãng không cần thiết để câu nói tự nhiên hơn.
Ví dụ: No, I have never learned how to sing professionally, but I still enjoy singing in my free time.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn có ý tưởng tốt nhưng bị lộn xộn và khó hiểu. Bạn nên sắp xếp câu trả lời rõ ràng, tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và dùng từ phù hợp để diễn đạt ý nghĩa một cách mạch lạc.
Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my family and girlfriend because it feels personal and meaningful. They understand me well and support me.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng đơn giản nhưng chính xác và sắp xếp câu có logic.
Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people because it helps raise their emotions and makes them feel better, especially when they are feeling sad.
× Yes, I really enjoy singing the cup is help me express my emotion and feel more relaxed after in a busy day for symbol of friend single. My friend, you instead of fries.
✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me express my emotions and feel more relaxed after a busy day. Singing is a symbol of friendship for me.
The original sentence is confusing and lacks proper sentence structure, making it difficult to understand. The correction breaks it into clear, grammatically correct sentences that convey the intended meaning.
× No, I have never learn how to sing, but I. I still. Enjoy. Singing.
✓ No, I have never learned how to sing, but I still enjoy singing.
The verb 'learn' should be in the past participle form 'learned' to correctly follow 'have never'. Also, the sentence fragments are combined into a complete sentence for clarity.
× I would like to sing for my family and girlfriend. Singing for them feels mom personal or meaningful because they know me there an appearance if my first my over their support and incorporate.
✓ I would like to sing for my family and my girlfriend. Singing for them feels more personal and meaningful because they know me and support me.
The original sentence contains unclear pronouns and nonsensical phrases. The correction clarifies pronoun use and removes irrelevant words to make the sentence meaningful.
× Yes I believe saying can definatly bring happiness to people singing allowed in the visual. 2 is raise their emotion and can be every 15 especially when the auto in outlook or jar.
✓ Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. Singing allows people to raise their emotions and can be very effective, especially when they are feeling down or upset.
The original sentence has spelling errors and unclear phrases. The correction fixes spelling, improves word choice, and clarifies the meaning for better understanding.