Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答时应注意语法完整性，例如“Also reduce my stress”应改为完整句子。此外，回答可以更自然流畅，避免重复“singing”一词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I enjoy singing because it reminds me of my happy childhood and helps me relax. Moreover, it effectively reduces my stress after a long day.

Gợi ý: 回答结构较好，但“learn singing”表达不够地道，建议使用“learn to sing”。此外，连接词使用可以更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned to sing during music lessons when I was 12 years old. Therefore, I believe following proper guidance is essential to learn singing effectively.

Gợi ý: 回答较好，但可以增加连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节使内容更具体。

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because their support and appreciation make the experience truly special and rewarding.

Gợi ý: 注意拼写错误，如“becauses”应为“because”。此外，使用更多连接词使表达更流畅，内容更具体。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their feelings and emotions. Furthermore, it offers a pleasant escape from the busy daily routine.

× Yes, I like singing because singing can remind me of the happy childhood and helps me relax.

✓ Yes, I like singing because singing can remind me of happy childhood and helps me relax.

这里的“the happy childhood”中，childhood是不可数名词，不需要加冠词“the”。应去掉“the”。

× Also reduce my stress.

✓ It also reduces my stress.

该句缺少主语和谓语，导致句子不完整。应补充主语“it”并将动词改为第三人称单数形式“reduces”。

× So I think it's very important to follow the right guidance so that you could learn singing easily.

✓ So I think it's very important to follow the right guidance so that you can learn singing easily.

此处表示一般现在时的能力或可能性，应该用情态动词“can”而非过去式“could”。

× Besides, people can escape from the busy routine through singing.

✓ Besides, people can escape the busy routine through singing.

动词“escape”后通常直接跟宾语，不需要介词“from”。应去掉“from”。

× Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people becauses singing can help people to express their feelings and emotions.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people because singing can help people express their feelings and emotions.

“becauses”拼写错误，应为“because”。此外，“help”后面不需要“to”不定式，直接用动词原形。