Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Try to make your answer more natural and clear by avoiding filler words and correcting grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then explain why you like singing with specific reasons. Keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax. Although I don't have a professional voice, I enjoy singing in the bathroom where I feel comfortable. Singing makes me feel happy and relieves my stress.

Gợi ý: Make your answer more coherent by using linking words and correct grammar. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details about what you learned. Avoid redundancy and unclear phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I studied music during my higher education. In that course, I learned how to sing songs and also how to play instruments like the guitar, harmonium, and drums.

Gợi ý: Improve your answer by making it more concise and grammatically correct. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific reasons why you want to sing for your husband.

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my husband because he inspires me a lot. There are many songs I can dedicate to him, and if I get the chance, I would definitely sing for him to show my appreciation.

Gợi ý: Make your answer clearer and more structured. Start with a direct answer, then give specific examples and reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness to people. For example, when I feel stressed, listening to music and singing help me relax and forget my worries. Many people also use singing as a form of therapy because it improves their mood.

× Instead, very honest I'm a bathroom single because 'cause I don't have that good voice but why I prefer singing the 'cause it it makes me feel relaxed and.

✓ Honestly, I'm a bathroom singer because I don't have a very good voice, but I prefer singing because it makes me feel relaxed.

The original sentence misuses conjunctions and fillers like 'Instead' and 'cause' leading to confusion. Replacing 'Instead' with 'Honestly' and removing redundant conjunctions clarifies the sentence and improves flow.

× I'm a bathroom single because 'cause I don't have that good voice

✓ I'm a bathroom singer because I don't have a very good voice

The word 'single' is incorrect here; the correct noun is 'singer' to refer to a person who sings. This is a singular noun issue.

× I have chosen one subject music, in which I learned to know how to sing a song

✓ I have chosen one subject, music, in which I learned how to sing a song

The sentence lacks commas to set off the appositive 'music' and has an unnecessary phrase 'to know'. Adding commas and removing 'to know' improves clarity and correctness.

× with this I'll learn how to play the instruments, for example guitar, harmonium and drums, all of these.

✓ with this, I learned how to play instruments, for example, guitar, harmonium, and drums.

The phrase 'with this I'll learn' is inconsistent with past tense context; 'learned' fits better. Also, 'the instruments' should be 'instruments' without 'the' when speaking generally. Commas are added for clarity.

× So when if I get a chance to sing, I will definitely go for my husband as he is a true inspiration for me and.

✓ So if I get a chance to sing, I will definitely sing for my husband as he is a true inspiration for me.

The phrase 'when if' is redundant; choosing 'if' is correct. Also, 'go for my husband' is unclear; 'sing for my husband' is more appropriate. The sentence was incomplete and is now completed.

× All my worries goes away an I tried and I started singing and also I saw a man many cases in which people choose singing as their therapy and it it really helps.

✓ All my worries go away when I try and start singing. I have also seen many cases where people choose singing as their therapy, and it really helps.

The verb 'goes' should be 'go' to agree with plural subject 'worries'. The sentence was run-on and unclear; splitting into two sentences and correcting verb tenses improves clarity and grammar.