Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer has some good points, but there are several language errors and some words are incorrect or unclear, such as 'sailing' instead of 'singing', and 'saying' instead of 'singing'. Also, 'funny' should be 'fun', and 'social gallery's' is unclear. Try to use correct vocabulary and check your pronunciation to make your answer more natural and effective. Keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

Ví dụ: Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. For example, when I'm feeling stressed, singing my favourite songs instantly lifts my mood. Additionally, it's a fun way to connect with others during social gatherings.

Gợi ý: Your answer contains many mistakes and unclear phrases, such as 'learned how to think' instead of 'learned how to sing', 'took parked in a core' instead of 'took part in a choir', and 'Page and rhythm, said' which is unclear. Please focus on using correct vocabulary and sentence structure. Also, try to organise your answer logically with linking words to improve coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have learnt how to sing. When I was in school, I took part in a choir where I received basic vocal training and learned about pitch and rhythm. Singing has always been a passion of mine, and those lessons helped me improve my confidence and technique.

Gợi ý: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but there are some grammatical errors and awkward phrases, such as 'would meet motivates me at to improve'. Try to use correct grammar and linking words to make your answer more natural and coherent. Also, avoid redundancy by expressing ideas concisely.

Ví dụ: I would like to sing for my family and close friends because it feels more personal and meaningful. They know me well and appreciate my efforts. Moreover, their support and encouragement motivate me to improve and enjoy the experience even more.

Gợi ý: There are several mistakes in your answer, such as 'sitting' instead of 'singing', 'your emotions' instead of 'their emotions', and 'went down with others in a group of core' which is unclear. Also, 'mode' should be 'mood'. Please focus on correct vocabulary and grammar, and organise your answer logically with linking words to improve clarity and coherence.

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people. Singing allows individuals to express their emotions and can be very uplifting, especially when done with others in a group or choir. For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed when they sing their favourite songs, which helps improve their mood.

× Yes, I really enjoy sailing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

✓ Yes, I really enjoy singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions.

The student mistakenly wrote 'sailing' instead of 'singing'. The question is about singing, so the verb should be 'singing' (verb + -ing form) to correctly express the activity enjoyed.

× For example, when I'm feeling stressed, saying my favorite songs instantly lifts my mood.

✓ For example, when I'm feeling stressed, singing my favorite songs instantly lifts my mood.

The verb 'saying' is incorrect here; the correct verb is 'singing' (verb + -ing form) to describe the action of performing songs vocally.

× Additionally, it's a funny way to connect with others during social gallery's.

✓ Additionally, it's a fun way to connect with others during social gatherings.

The phrase 'social gallery's' is incorrect. The correct noun is 'social gatherings' to refer to social events. Also, 'funny' means humorous, but 'fun' is appropriate to describe an enjoyable activity.

× Yes, I have learned how to think.

✓ Yes, I have learned how to sing.

The student wrote 'think' instead of 'sing'. The correct verb is 'sing' to answer the question about learning to sing. 'Have learned' is correct present perfect tense here.

× When I was in school, I took parked in a core while I receive basic vocal training and learned about Page and rhythm, said.

✓ When I was in school, I took part in a choir where I received basic vocal training and learned about pitch and rhythm, said.

Multiple errors: 'took parked' should be 'took part'; 'core' should be 'choir'; 'receive' should be past tense 'received'; 'Page' should be 'pitch'; 'said' is unclear and likely extraneous. Correct past tense and vocabulary are needed.

× He has always been a passion of mine and those lessons helped me improve my confidence in technique.

✓ It has always been a passion of mine and those lessons helped me improve my confidence in technique.

'He' is incorrect as the subject refers to 'singing' (an activity), which is neuter and should be referred to as 'it'.

× I would like to sing for my family and close friends.

✓ I would like to sing to my family and close friends.

The correct preposition after 'sing' when indicating the audience is 'to', not 'for'. 'Sing to someone' means performing for them.

× Moreover, the support and encouragement would meet motivates me at to improve and enjoy the experience even more.

✓ Moreover, the support and encouragement motivate me to improve and enjoy the experience even more.

The phrase 'would meet motivates me at to' is incorrect. The correct form is 'motivate me to' to express what the support and encouragement do.

× Yes, I believe sitting can definitely bring happiness to people.

✓ Yes, I believe singing can definitely bring happiness to people.

The word 'sitting' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'singing' (verb + -ing form) to refer to the activity discussed.

× Singing allows individuals to express your emotions and can be very uplifting, especially went down with others in a group of core.

✓ Singing allows individuals to express their emotions and can be very uplifting, especially when done with others in a group or choir.

'Your' should be 'their' to agree with 'individuals'. 'Went down' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'when done'. 'Group of core' should be 'group or choir'.

× For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed when they singing your favorite songs, which helps improve their mode.

✓ For example, many people feel joyful and relaxed when they sing their favorite songs, which helps improve their mood.

'When they singing' is incorrect; it should be 'when they sing' (simple present tense). 'Your' should be 'their' to agree with 'many people'. 'Mode' is a typo for 'mood'.