Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to give a clear and direct response with simple sentences. Use correct vocabulary and avoid redundancy. For example, say 'No, I don't like singing because I am not confident about my voice and I often forget the lyrics.'

Ví dụ: No, I don't like singing because I am not confident about my voice and I often forget the lyrics. Therefore, I prefer to listen to music rather than sing.

Gợi ý: Your answer is somewhat relevant but has many language mistakes and unclear phrases. Use simple and correct sentences to explain your reason. For example, say 'No, I have never learned to sing because I spent most of my time playing football and did not have time to practice singing.'

Ví dụ: No, I have never learned to sing because I spent most of my time playing football with my friends. So, I did not have time to practice singing.

Gợi ý: Your answer is good but can be improved by using linking words and clearer sentence structure. Also, avoid repetition. For example, say 'If I had a chance, I would sing for my future wife at our wedding. Besides her, I would also sing for my parents and sometimes for my friends while driving.'

Ví dụ: If I had a chance, I would sing for my future wife at our wedding. Besides her, I would also sing for my parents. Sometimes, I enjoy singing for my friends while driving.

Gợi ý: Your answer has good ideas but is unclear and contains many errors. Try to express your opinion clearly and use linking words. For example, say 'Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because song lyrics often express feelings that people can relate to, reminding them of their own experiences.'

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing can bring happiness because song lyrics often express feelings from the heart. This helps people connect with their own memories and emotions.

× Even though I like to see while I'm.

✓ Even though I like to sing while I'm.

The word 'see' is incorrectly used instead of 'sing'. The preposition 'while' is correctly used to indicate simultaneous action, but the verb should be 'sing' to match the context of the question about singing. Suggestion: Use the correct verb that fits the context.

× My voice is not so bored and I don't like to sing and I don't remember the lyrics that much so I don't.

✓ My voice is not so good and I don't like to sing because I don't remember the lyrics that much.

The adjective 'bored' is incorrectly used to describe 'voice'. The correct adjective is 'good'. Also, the sentence is fragmented and lacks clarity. Suggestion: Use appropriate adjectives to describe qualities and connect ideas clearly.

× I don't like to. Make wrong Bible song.

✓ I don't like to make mistakes when singing songs, especially Bible songs.

The sentence is fragmented and lacks proper structure. 'Make wrong Bible song' is unclear and ungrammatical. Suggestion: Combine fragments into a complete sentence and clarify meaning.

× No, I've never learned how to, seeing as I was a sports person.

✓ No, I've never learned how to sing, seeing as I was a sports person.

The phrase 'learned how to' is incomplete without the verb 'sing'. Also, 'seeing as' is correctly used to explain reason. Suggestion: Complete the verb phrase for clarity.

× Most of my time I used to play football with my friends in puts on ground.

✓ Most of my time I used to play football with my friends on the ground.

The phrase 'in puts on ground' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'on' to indicate location. Suggestion: Use correct prepositions to indicate place.

× And I didn't have much time to practice singing, so I didn't get time to see and I never want to learn how to seeing anything.

✓ And I didn't have much time to practice singing, so I didn't get time to sing and I never wanted to learn how to sing.

The verb forms are incorrect: 'see' should be 'sing', 'want' should be past tense 'wanted', and 'seeing' should be 'sing'. Suggestion: Use correct verb forms consistent with past tense.

× If I could get a chance to sing.

✓ If I could get a chance to sing,

The sentence is a conditional clause and should be connected to a main clause. Suggestion: Complete the sentence for clarity.

× Obviously, I would like to sing for my future wife during the time of our wedding.

✓ Obviously, I would like to sing for my future wife during our wedding.

The phrase 'during the time of our wedding' is wordy. 'During our wedding' is more concise and natural. Suggestion: Use concise expressions.

× And after an apart from a future wife, I would like to sing for my father and mother.

✓ And apart from my future wife, I would like to sing for my father and mother.

The phrase 'after an apart from' is incorrect. The correct phrase is 'apart from' to indicate exception. Suggestion: Use correct prepositional phrases.

× Yes, I think she again bring happiness to people as the lyrics of the song can express something from your heart.

✓ Yes, I think singing can bring happiness to people as the lyrics of the song can express something from your heart.

The pronoun 'she' is incorrectly used to refer to 'singing'. The correct noun is 'singing'. Suggestion: Use appropriate nouns or pronouns matching the subject.

× And that can match with what happened in their life and they can't recall about their past things and make it plug it or. Target.

✓ And that can match what happened in their life, helping them recall their past and let them process it or target their feelings.

The sentence is unclear and contains pronoun misuse and awkward phrasing. 'Can't recall about' should be 'help recall'. 'Make it plug it or target' is unclear. Suggestion: Use clear pronouns and expressions to convey meaning.