Singing— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 你的回答不够清晰，语法和词汇使用错误较多，导致表达不自然且难以理解。建议简洁明了地回答问题，使用正确的时态和词汇，并避免重复和无意义的词语。

Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and express my emotions. I started singing when I was young, and it has always been a great hobby for me.

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清的问题，建议使用正确的时态和句子结构，明确说明学习唱歌的经历，并避免模糊和不连贯的表达。

Ví dụ: Yes, I learned how to sing when I was in primary school. I was part of the school choir and practiced regularly, which helped me improve my singing skills.

Gợi ý: 回答表达混乱，语法和词汇错误较多。建议直接回答问题，清楚表达想为谁唱歌，并说明原因，使用连贯的句子和适当的连接词。

Ví dụ: I want to sing for my family because they always support me. Singing together has become a tradition when we gather, and it brings us closer.

Gợi ý: 回答中有很多语法和词汇错误，表达不连贯。建议用简洁明了的句子表达观点，提供具体理由和例子，使用正确的词汇和连接词。

Ví dụ: Yes, I believe singing brings happiness because it allows people to express their emotions. Many enjoy singing in the car or shower, which makes them feel joyful.

× Yes, I run the next thing.

✓ Yes, I ran the next thing.

这里的动作发生在过去，应该使用过去式。'run'的过去式是'ran'。

× When I was young I started to known thing

✓ When I was young I started to know things

'started'后面应该接动词原形'know'，而不是过去式'known'。另外，'thing'应为复数形式'things'。

× when I word thing I feel too running relaxed.

✓ when I worked on things I felt very relaxed.

'word'应为过去式'worked'，'thing'应为复数形式'things'，'feel'应为过去式'felt'，'too running relaxed'表达不正确，改为'very relaxed'更合适。

× I think it's all great owing to on what.

✓ I think it's all great because of that.

'owing to on what'表达不正确，应该用'because of that'表示原因。

× Yes, I have known how to sing when I was young and especially in the primary school.

✓ Yes, I learned how to sing when I was young, especially in primary school.

'have known'用法不当，应该用过去式'learned'表示过去学会的动作。'the primary school'中'the'可省略。

× I am all part of the choir so I usually trained a regularly.

✓ I was part of the choir so I usually trained regularly.

'I am all part'应为过去时'I was part'，'trained a regularly'中'a'多余，应去掉。

× Well, now we're the young.

✓ Well, now we're young.

'the young'用法不当，应该去掉定冠词'the'。

× I have learned a lot.

✓ I have learned a lot.

此句语法正确，无需修改。

× The people that I most want to sing for must be my families.

✓ The people I most want to sing for must be my family.

'families'应为单数形式'family'，表示家庭成员的整体。

× Are you running like to sing or So when we gathering together is all tradition for us because my family always support to me so I want to sing for them.

✓ I like to sing, and when we gather together, it is a tradition for us because my family always supports me, so I want to sing for them.

句子结构混乱，'Are you running like to sing or So'无意义，改为'I like to sing'。'gathering'应为动词原形'gather'。'support to me'应为'supports me'。

× Yes, I think seeing him bring happiness to people becauses thing is a great way to express their emotions.

✓ Yes, I think singing brings happiness to people because singing is a great way to express their emotions.

'seeing him'应为'singing'，'becauses thing'应为'because singing'。动词时态应一致。

× Many people like to sing and the car or when there when there are shower.

✓ Many people like to sing in the car or when there is a shower.

'the car'前应加介词'in'，'when there when there are shower'重复且错误，应为'when there is a shower'。

× Uhm, I think seeing is very happy.

✓ Uhm, I think singing is very enjoyable.

'seeing is very happy'表达错误，应为'singing is very enjoyable'，形容词'happy'不能直接修饰动作。