Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you like singing? Why?
Thí sinh
Yes I do like seeing every time when I go to the karaoke I would order some of the salt from my favorite singer is likely a phone or jitter. I always sing the sing their songs.
Giám khảo
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Thí sinh
No, I don't actually. I'm only an amateur in saying so. I think I don't have to own the professional skills in saying. I just entertain myself.
Giám khảo
Who do you want to sing for?
Thí sinh
Well, I really want to see for myself every time when I feel this chest, I would have seen some things, some songs alone and I am too shy to sing some songs in public. So I would like to appreciate my singing alone.
Giám khảo
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Thí sinh
Yes, definitely. The true meaning of saying is not in the judging others voice is. To make everyone love music and enjoy the songs, that's the true meaning of the music. So I think everyone would be happy if they sing their favorite songs.
Do you like singing? Why?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题,建议简化句子结构,避免拼写错误,并且直接回答问题。可以用简单明了的句子表达喜欢唱歌的原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I like singing because it helps me relax and have fun. Whenever I go to karaoke, I enjoy singing songs by my favorite singers.
Have you ever learnt how to sing?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 回答中多次出现拼写错误(saying应为singing),表达不够自然。建议使用正确的单词,并且用更自然的表达方式说明自己是业余爱好者。
Ví dụ: No, I haven't learned how to sing professionally. I'm just an amateur and I sing for my own enjoyment.
Who do you want to sing for?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答表达不清晰,语法和词汇使用错误较多。建议直接回答问题,说明想为自己唱歌的原因,并用连词连接句子,使表达更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually want to sing for myself because I feel shy singing in front of others. Singing alone helps me relax and enjoy the music.
Do you think singing can bring happiness to people?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答中多次拼写错误(saying应为singing),句子结构混乱。建议用更清晰的句子表达观点,并用连词使句子更流畅。
Ví dụ: Yes, definitely. Singing is not about judging others' voices, but about enjoying music. When people sing their favorite songs, it can make them feel happy.
× Yes I do like seeing every time when I go to the karaoke I would order some of the salt from my favorite singer is likely a phone or jitter.
✓ Yes, I do like singing. Every time when I go to the karaoke, I would order some songs from my favorite singer, likely a phone or jitter.
这里'seeing'应为'singing',因为题目是关于唱歌,动词后接动名词形式表示喜欢做某事。
× I always sing the sing their songs.
✓ I always sing their songs.
句中'the sing'不合适,应去掉'the sing',直接用'sing their songs',避免单复数错误。
× No, I don't actually. I'm only an amateur in saying so.
✓ No, I don't actually. I'm only an amateur in singing, so...
'saying'应为'singing',因为上下文谈论的是唱歌,动词-ing形式应正确使用。
× I think I don't have to own the professional skills in saying.
✓ I think I don't have to own the professional skills in singing.
同上,'saying'应为'singing',保持语义一致。
× Well, I really want to see for myself every time when I feel this chest, I would have seen some things, some songs alone and I am too shy to sing some songs in public.
✓ Well, I really want to sing for myself. Every time when I feel this urge, I would sing some songs alone because I am too shy to sing in public.
'see'应为'sing','feel this chest'应为'feel this urge'或类似表达,'have seen'应为'sing',保持动词形式和语义正确。
× The true meaning of saying is not in the judging others voice is.
✓ The true meaning of singing is not in judging others' voices.
'saying'应为'singing','judging others voice is'结构错误,应改为'judging others' voices',修正代词所有格和句子结构。
× So I think everyone would be happy if they sing their favorite songs.
✓ So I think everyone would be happy if they sang their favorite songs.
条件句中虚拟语气,动词应使用过去式'sang',表示假设情况。