Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I'm pretty good at remembering things. I can easily recall numbers and dates and I often remember people's name and faces. I also enjoy playing memory great games which helps me improve my memory.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have gotten something important before. I once forgot my best friend's birthday and I feel absolutely terrible about it. We are really close so I made sure to apologize profusely and apologized to make it up to name.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
In my daily life, I need to keep track of my work responsibilities such as meeting deadlines for projects and attending scheduled meetings. It's also crucial for me to respond to important emails and messages properly to stay on top of things.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I use my smart phone to remember important things. I set the reminders and alarms for tasks I needed to do and I use a clip cleaner apps to keep track of dates. It's really helpful for me.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答直接,内容也切题。注意名词单复数应为“people's names”,表达“记忆游戏”应说“memory games”,而不是“memory great games”。最后一句的主谓一致也要注意:复数的“games”应搭配“help”。可以补充一个具体例子,让回答更有细节。
Ví dụ: Yes, I’m quite good at remembering things. I can usually recall numbers and dates, as well as people’s names and faces. I also enjoy playing memory games, which help me stay sharp. For example, I can often remember a friend’s birthday without checking my calendar.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 45.0Gợi ý: 回答中有明显的用词和语法问题:“gotten something important”应改为“forgotten something important”;讲述过去的事情时,“I feel”应改为“I felt”。“apologize profusely and apologized”重复表达道歉,“make it up to name”也不完整。建议按照“忘记了什么—当时的感受—如何弥补”的顺序组织回答。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. I once forgot my best friend’s birthday, and I felt terrible because we’re very close. I apologized sincerely and took them out for dinner the following weekend to make it up to them.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 86.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清楚,细节具体,连接也自然。可以把“respond to ... properly”换成更符合语境的“reply to ... promptly”,强调及时回复;也可以补充一个简短的生活例子。注意整体控制在五句话以内。
Ví dụ: I need to remember quite a few work-related things every day. These include meeting project deadlines, attending scheduled meetings, and replying to important emails promptly. For example, I usually check my calendar in the morning so I don’t miss any appointments.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答切题,但有几处表达需要修正:“smart phone”通常写作“smartphone”;泛指提醒时说“set reminders and alarms”,不需要加“the”;描述日常习惯应用一般现在时“need to do”。“a clip cleaner apps”不符合语境,可能想表达“a calendar app”。建议说明你如何使用手机,以及它怎样帮助你避免忘事。
Ví dụ: I use my smartphone to help me remember important things. I set reminders and alarms for tasks I need to do, and I use a calendar app to keep track of dates and appointments. It’s really helpful because I can check my schedule at any time.
× I can easily recall numbers and dates and I often remember people's name and faces.
✓ I can easily recall numbers and dates, and I often remember people's names and faces.
people's 后面指多个人的名字,应使用复数 names。修改时也在并列连词 and 前加逗号,使句子更清晰。
× I also enjoy playing memory great games which helps me improve my memory.
✓ I also enjoy playing great memory games, which help me improve my memory.
great 是形容词,memory 在这里作名词修饰语;形容词应放在名词修饰语前,因此应说 great memory games,而不是 memory great games。
× I also enjoy playing memory great games which helps me improve my memory.
✓ I also enjoy playing great memory games, which help me improve my memory.
关系代词 which 指代复数 games,因此关系从句中的动词应使用原形 help,而不是第三人称单数形式 helps。
× I set the reminders and alarms for tasks I needed to do and I use a clip cleaner apps to keep track of dates.
✓ I set reminders and alarms for tasks I need to do, and I use a clip cleaner app to keep track of dates.
这里描述的是日常习惯和当前需要完成的任务,应使用一般现在时 need,而不是过去时 needed。
× I set the reminders and alarms for tasks I needed to do and I use a clip cleaner apps to keep track of dates.
✓ I set reminders and alarms for tasks I need to do, and I use a clip cleaner app to keep track of dates.
不定冠词 a 只能修饰单数可数名词,因此 apps 应改为 app。也可以去掉 a 并保留复数 apps,但这里采用单数表达。