Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 先直接回答观点，然后说明工作中容易忘记的具体原因，最后可以进行过去与现在的对比。注意使用正确的语法： “when I go to work”而不是“when I got to work”；“things distract me”而不是“scenes disturbed my focus”；“I used to be very good at remembering things”而不是“used to very good art”。避免重复使用“remember/scene”，并用“because”或“however”连接细节。

Ví dụ: No, I’m not particularly good at memorising things, especially at work. There are many tasks and distractions during the day, so I sometimes forget small details. However, I used to have a much better memory when I was at school because I reviewed my lessons regularly.

Gợi ý: 使用一般过去时讲述过去的经历，例如“forgot”而不是“do forgot”。“my parents’ birthday”与后文的“my mom’s birthday”不一致，应统一；给母亲送花要用“her”而不是“him”。答案中有较多重复和不完整表达，可以用“Unfortunately”“When”“As a result”组织故事，并在结尾说明自己的感受。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my mother’s birthday. Last year, she messaged me on the day, but I still didn’t realise what I had forgotten. When I finally remembered, I felt really guilty, so I sent her some flowers and apologised to her.

Gợi ý: 答案应先概括日常需要记住的内容，例如工作任务、截止日期和后续事项。当前句子过长，缺少清晰的句子结构；应将内容分成2至3句，并使用“such as”“To manage this”“In addition”等连接词。“record the scenes”应改为“record the tasks/events”，“what I have done for recently”应改为“what I have done recently”。“officially write an email”不自然，可说“send a summary email”。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I mainly need to remember work tasks, deadlines, and things that require follow-up. To manage them, I use a calendar to record my plans for the following week. I also send a summary email at the end of the week to keep track of what I have completed.

Gợi ý: 回答内容比较具体，提到了笔记本、会议纪要和手机，这是优点。需要改进语法和搭配：“after the meeting finishes/has finished”而不是“after the meeting finished”；“send the meeting minutes”而不是“send a meeting minutes”；“points I need to remember and follow up on”比“points that I shouldn't remember”准确。最后一句没有完成，应完整表达手机的用途，并用“while”或“For other tasks”区分两种方法。

Ví dụ: I use different tools depending on the situation. During meetings, I take notes in a notebook and then send the meeting minutes to record the key points and follow-up actions. For personal tasks, I use my phone to set reminders, which helps me remember deadlines and appointments.

× No, I'm not good at remembering things, especially when I got to work.

✓ No, I'm not good at remembering things, especially when I go to work.

这里描述的是日常习惯，所以应使用一般现在时“go”，而不是一般过去时“got”。

× There are so many things happening every day and also there are so many scenes disturbed my focus and I cannot remember all the scenes.

✓ There are so many things happening every day, and there are also so many things that disturb my focus, so I cannot remember everything.

“scenes disturbed my focus”缺少正确的定语从句结构。应使用“things that disturb my focus”表示“会分散我注意力的事情”。同时，用“so”连接原因和结果，句子结构会更清楚。

× I used to very good art to remember when I was in school.

✓ I used to be very good at remembering things when I was in school.

“used to”后面需要接动词原形；这里需要使用“be”。另外，“be good at”后面要接名词或动名词，因此应使用“remembering”。

× I used to very good art to remember when I was in school.

✓ I used to be very good at remembering things when I was in school.

固定搭配是“be good at”，不能使用“good art”。“at”后面接“remembering”。

× I used to very good art to remember when I was in school.

✓ I used to be very good at remembering things when I was in school.

介词“at”后面通常接名词或动名词，所以“remember”应改为“remembering”。

× Yeah, I do forgot something very important since like my parents' birthday.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something very important, such as my parents' birthday.

“do forgot”不能这样搭配。“Have you ever...?”询问人生经历，回答时应使用现在完成时“have forgotten”。此外，“such as”可以正确引出例子。

× Yeah, I do forgot something very important since like my parents' birthday.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something very important, such as my parents' birthday.

“since like”不是正确的表达。表示“例如”时应使用“such as”，而不是“since like”。

× I realized I missed this very important moment so I sent a flower to him.

✓ I realized I had missed this very important moment, so I sent a flower to her.

前文提到的是“my mom”，所以要用女性代词“her”，不能使用“him”。

× I remember last year I forgot my mom's birthday and she suddenly sent me a message and I still did not remember her birthday.

✓ I remember that last year I forgot my mom's birthday. She suddenly sent me a message, but I still did not remember that it was her birthday.

这里需要用“that it was her birthday”完整表达“那是她的生日”。过去发生的事情使用过去时“was”是合适的。将过长的句子分开也能使时态和结构更清楚。

× For my daily work I most of the time I need to remember what's the important thing that I should follow up and the plan I need to do most of the times I will use a calendar to record the scenes that I have to do for the next week.

✓ For my daily work, most of the time I need to remember the important things that I should follow up on and the plans that I need to carry out. Most of the time, I use a calendar to record the tasks that I have to do for the next week.

固定表达是“most of the time”，其中“time”通常使用单数，不能说“most of the times”。“things”和“plans”在这里表示多个需要记住的事项，因此使用复数更自然。

× For my daily work I most of the time I need to remember what's the important thing that I should follow up and the plan I need to do most of the times I will use a calendar to record the scenes that I have to do for the next week.

✓ For my daily work, most of the time I need to remember the important things that I should follow up on and the plans that I need to carry out. Most of the time, I use a calendar to record the tasks that I have to do for the next week.

原句重复使用了两个主语“I”，并且把多个完整意思连接在一起，导致句子结构混乱。应删除重复的“I”，并将内容拆成两个句子。

× I will officially write an email to summarize what I have done for recently.

✓ I will write an email to summarize what I have done recently.

“recently”本身就是副词，不需要和介词“for”连用。因此应删除“for”。

× Most of the times I will use a calendar to record the scenes that I have to do for the next week.

✓ Most of the time, I will use a calendar to record the tasks that I have to do for the next week.

“calendar”是可数名词单数，前面使用“a”是正确的。这里主要需要把“scenes”改成符合句子结构的复数名词“tasks”，表示“任务”。

× But for other things I will use my phone to record the important thing that I have to do is.

✓ But for other things, I use my phone to record the important tasks that I have to do.

这里描述的是日常习惯，所以使用一般现在时“use”比“will use”更合适。句末多余的“is”造成句子结构错误，应删除。

× But for other things I will use my phone to record the important thing that I have to do is.

✓ But for other things, I use my phone to record the important tasks that I have to do.

谈论日常生活中的固定做法时，应使用一般现在时：“I use my phone”。一般将来时“will use”通常表示未来某次行为。

× After the meeting finished I will send a meeting minutes to summarize the point that I shouldn't remember and to follow up.

✓ After the meeting finishes, I will send the meeting minutes to summarize the points that I should remember and follow up on.

在含有“after”的时间从句中，如果主句表示将来，时间从句通常使用一般现在时“finishes”，而不是过去时“finished”。此外，应该是“should remember”，因为你想表达“应该记住的要点”，而不是“shouldn't remember”。

× I will send a meeting minutes to summarize the point that I shouldn't remember and to follow up.

✓ I will send the meeting minutes to summarize the points that I should remember and follow up on.

“meeting minutes”表示某次会议的会议记录，在特定语境中应使用定冠词“the”，不能使用“a”。

× I will send a meeting minutes to summarize the point that I shouldn't remember and to follow up.

✓ I will send the meeting minutes to summarize the points that I should remember and follow up on.

“minutes”在“会议记录”的含义中通常使用复数形式；同时，会议中通常有多个需要记住和跟进的要点，所以“point”应改为“points”。

× I will send a meeting minutes to summarize the point that I shouldn't remember and to follow up.

✓ I will send the meeting minutes to summarize the points that I should remember and follow up on.

“shouldn't remember”表示“不应该记住”，与上下文意思相反。这里应使用“should remember”，表示“应该记住”。

× I will send a meeting minutes to summarize the point that I shouldn't remember and to follow up.

✓ I will send the meeting minutes to summarize the points that I should remember and follow up on.

短语是“follow up on something”，表示“跟进某事”，所以“follow up”后面需要加介词“on”。

× But for other things I will use my phone to record the important thing that I have to do is.

✓ But for other things, I use my phone to record the important tasks that I have to do.

原句在“that I have to do”之后又加了“is”，导致句子没有正确结束。删除“is”，并使用完整的名词短语“the important tasks”即可。