Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 「No, I don't」は質問に合わないため、「No, I'm not」または「I'm not very good at memorising things」と答えましょう。また、「forget something such as the classes and homework」は不自然なので、「forget information from my classes and important homework」と表現できます。最初に結論を述べ、その後に具体的な例と理由を加えると、より自然で効果的です。

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget information from my classes and important homework. Therefore, I usually write everything down in a notebook or on my phone.

Gợi ý: 過去の経験を尋ねられているため、「Yes, I have」と現在完了形で直接答えましょう。「in my junior high school」は「when I was in junior high school」、「usually forget」はこの文脈では「once forgot」などに直します。また、「important hallmark and it」は意味が不明確なので、忘れた具体的な物や出来事を一つ挙げてください。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. When I was in junior high school, I once forgot to bring an important textbook to class. As a result, I had to share one with a classmate.

Gợi ý: 質問には「I need to remember...」と、日常生活で覚える必要がある具体的な内容を先に答えましょう。「a calendar application on my smartphone」のように冠詞と前置詞を修正し、「watch this application」は「check the app」と表現します。さらに、予定や締切などの具体例を加えると内容が明確になります。

Ví dụ: I need to remember my appointments, work deadlines, and daily tasks. I use a calendar app on my smartphone to keep track of them. I check it every morning so that I don't miss anything important.

Gợi ý: 習慣について話しているため、「wrote」ではなく現在形の「write」を使いましょう。「on the calendar applications」は「in my calendar app」、「watch it」は「check it」、「forget the importance」は「forget them」または具体的な名詞にすると自然です。方法を述べた後、確認する頻度や効果をリンク語で説明してください。

Ví dụ: I write important tasks and appointments in my calendar app. I also set reminders and check the app every evening. This helps me remember deadlines and plan my next day.

× No, I don't.

✓ No, I'm not.

The question uses the verb be in Are you good...? Therefore, the short negative answer should also use be: No, I'm not. Do-support is used with questions such as Do you...?.

× In my high school, I usually forget something such as the classes and homework.

✓ When I was in high school, I usually forgot things such as my class notes and homework.

The phrase When I was in high school refers to a finished period in the past, so forget should be changed to the past-tense form forgot. Things is also more appropriate because class notes and homework are plural examples.

× Yes in my junior high school I usually forget them I usually forget the important hallmark and it

✓ Yes. When I was in junior high school, I usually forgot important things.

The original answer contains several independent clauses joined without appropriate punctuation or conjunctions, which creates a run-on sentence. Separating the ideas and using a complete sentence makes the structure clear.

× Yes in my junior high school I usually forget them I usually forget the important hallmark and it

✓ Yes. When I was in junior high school, I usually forgot important things.

Junior high school is a completed period in the past, so forget should be changed to forgot. The past tense is needed to match the time expression.

× Yes in my junior high school I usually forget them I usually forget the important hallmark and it

✓ Yes. When I was in junior high school, I usually forgot important things.

The pronouns them and it do not have clear or grammatically appropriate antecedents. Replacing them with the clear noun phrase important things avoids unclear pronoun reference.

× I usually use calendar application in my smartphone to remember something.

✓ I usually use a calendar application on my smartphone to remember things.

A singular countable noun such as calendar application needs an article, so a calendar application is required. The plural noun things is more natural when referring to items in general.

× I usually use calendar application in my smartphone to remember something.

✓ I usually use a calendar application on my smartphone to remember things.

The usual preposition for a device is on, as in on my smartphone, not in my smartphone.

× I usually wrote the important things on the calendar applications and I usually watch it so I don't forget the importance.

✓ I usually write important things in my calendar application and check it so I don't forget them.

The question asks about a current daily habit, so write should be in the present tense, not the past tense wrote. The corrected sentence also uses the singular application consistently with one smartphone application.

× I usually wrote the important things on the calendar applications and I usually watch it so I don't forget the importance.

✓ I usually write important things in my calendar application and check it so I don't forget them.

The singular pronoun it refers to one application, so the noun should also be singular: calendar application, not calendar applications.

× I usually wrote the important things on the calendar applications and I usually watch it so I don't forget the importance.

✓ I usually write important things in my calendar application and check it so I don't forget them.

The pronoun it correctly refers to the singular calendar application, while them refers to the plural noun important things. The original phrase the importance does not refer clearly to the things being remembered.