Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: 回答基本直接，但有明显的语法、时态和表达问题。应将“every time when I remember”改为“whenever I learn/try to remember”，并用现在时表达一般情况，例如“ I forget them after a couple of hours”。“forgot that”应改为“forget them”，因为指代的是词汇和语法。建议减少“you know、yeah、maybe”等口语填充词，并补充一个具体的记忆方法或例子，使答案更自然、更有内容。

Ví dụ: Not really. I find it difficult to memorise new vocabulary and grammar because I sometimes forget them after a couple of hours. I also occasionally struggle to remember people’s names, so I usually review new words several times and write them down in a notebook.

Gợi ý: 答案有具体例子，能够回应问题，但存在搭配和语法错误。“my girlfriend birthday”应为“my girlfriend’s birthday”，“I promised her I never forgot it”应为“I promised her I would never forget it”。“over 1,000,000 sorry”不自然，应改为“apologised to her repeatedly”或“said sorry countless times”。避免反复说“I’m very bad”，可以说明结果或采取的补救措施，让内容更有效。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my girlfriend’s birthday, which made her really upset. I apologised to her repeatedly and took her out for a nice dinner the following day. Since then, I’ve started putting important dates in my phone calendar so that I won’t forget them again.

Gợi ý: 答案包含学习和日常生活中的具体内容，但句子连接较弱，且有多处表达错误。“I major in”应改为“I’m majoring in industrial design”或“My major is industrial design”；“skills about the 3D models and CD”不准确，可说“3D modelling techniques and computer-aided design (CAD) software”。“need remember”应为“need to remember”，“my reports name”应为“the names of my reports”。建议按“学习内容—个人信息”的顺序组织答案，并减少停顿词。

Ví dụ: I need to remember quite a few things in my daily life. Since I’m majoring in industrial design, I have to remember 3D modelling techniques and how to use computer-aided design software. I also need to keep track of my tutors’ names, my friends’ contact details, and the deadlines for my reports.

Gợi ý: 回答直接，并提供了手机提醒这一具体方法，但需要改进介词、单复数和词汇选择。“on my mobile phone”可以说“use my mobile phone to remember things”，“some special date”应为“special dates”，“on my phones”应为“on my phone”。“scales on my laptop”含义不清；如果想表达文件或清单，应说“notes, calendars, or task lists on my laptop”。建议使用“First... For example... Besides...”等连接词，使答案更连贯。

Ví dụ: I usually use my mobile phone to remember important things. For example, I put special dates, appointments, and deadlines in my calendar, and it sends me reminders in advance. I also keep a task list on my laptop, which helps me organise my university work.

× Maybe not 'cause you know, I'm learning English, so every time when I remember new vocabulary and grammar, yeah, maybe after two hours I forgot that.

✓ Maybe not, 'cause you know, I'm learning English, so every time I remember new vocabulary and grammar, I forget them after two hours.

“Every time”本身已经表示“每次”，后面通常直接接从句，不需要再使用“when”。另外，“every time”表示习惯性或反复发生的事情，所以应使用一般现在时“forget”，而不是一般过去时“forgot”。“vocabulary and grammar”是两个内容，因此用复数代词“them”更合适。

× Maybe not 'cause you know, I'm learning English, so every time when I remember new vocabulary and grammar, yeah, maybe after two hours I forgot that.

✓ Maybe not, 'cause you know, I'm learning English, so every time I remember new vocabulary and grammar, I forget them after two hours.

“Every time”描述经常发生的情况，应使用一般现在时。应将“forgot”改为“forget”，因为这里不是描述某一次过去发生的事情。

× Yeah, actually I forgot my girlfriend birthday, so I know it's very terrible and I said maybe over 1,000,000 sorry to my girlfriend and I promised her I never forgot it.

✓ Yeah, actually I forgot my girlfriend's birthday, so I know it was terrible. I said sorry to my girlfriend over a million times, and I promised her I would never forget it.

“sorry”在这里表示道歉次数，不能直接用数字修饰；应使用可数名词“times”，例如“over a million times”。“a million”比“1,000,000”更自然地适合口语表达。

× Yeah, actually I forgot my girlfriend birthday, so I know it's very terrible and I said maybe over 1,000,000 sorry to my girlfriend and I promised her I never forgot it.

✓ Yeah, actually I forgot my girlfriend's birthday, so I know it was terrible. I said sorry to my girlfriend over a million times, and I promised her I would never forget it.

这件事发生在过去，所以描述当时的情况应使用过去时“was”，而不是现在时“is”。此外，在“promised”之后，应该根据过去时间背景使用相应的过去形式“would never forget”。

× Yeah, actually I forgot my girlfriend birthday, so I know it's very terrible and I said maybe over 1,000,000 sorry to my girlfriend and I promised her I never forgot it.

✓ Yeah, actually I forgot my girlfriend's birthday, so I know it was terrible. I said sorry to my girlfriend over a million times, and I promised her I would never forget it.

“promised”表示过去的承诺；从过去的角度看，将来的行为应使用“would + 动词原形”。因此，“I never forgot”应改为“I would never forget”。

× A lot of things 'cause I major in industrial design so I need to remember a lot of skills about the 3D models and CD. So sometimes I also need remember uh, my tutor's name, my friends and uh, my reports name.

✓ A lot of things, 'cause I major in industrial design, so I need to remember many skills related to 3D modeling and CAD. Sometimes I also need to remember my tutor's name, my friends' names, and my reports' names.

情态或半情态结构“need to”后面必须接动词原形，因此“need remember”应改为“need to remember”。并列成分应保持结构一致： “my tutor's name, my friends' names, and my reports' names”。

× A lot of things 'cause I major in industrial design so I need to remember a lot of skills about the 3D models and CD. So sometimes I also need remember uh, my tutor's name, my friends and uh, my reports name.

✓ A lot of things, 'cause I major in industrial design, so I need to remember many skills related to 3D modeling and CAD. Sometimes I also need to remember my tutor's name, my friends' names, and my reports' names.

“friends”指多位朋友，因此对应的名词应为复数“names”。“reports”指多份报告，因此应使用“reports' names”表示“报告的名称”。名词数量变化时，相关名词也要保持单复数一致。

× Yeah, actually I forgot my girlfriend birthday, so I know it's very terrible and I said maybe over 1,000,000 sorry to my girlfriend and I promised her I never forgot it.

✓ Yeah, actually I forgot my girlfriend's birthday, so I know it was terrible. I said sorry to my girlfriend over a million times, and I promised her I would never forget it.

“over 1,000,000”后面需要一个表示次数的可数名词，不能直接修饰“sorry”。应说“over a million times”，意思是“超过一百万次”。

× At present, I remember important things on my mobile phone. For instance, some special date, uh, I will put it on my phones and it can uh, remind me on time.

✓ At present, I remember important things on my mobile phone. For instance, for some special dates, I put them on my phone, and it can remind me on time.

“some”通常表示多个，因此后面的可数名词应使用复数“dates”，而不是单数“date”。与复数名词对应的代词也应使用“them”，而不是“it”。

× At present, I remember important things on my mobile phone. For instance, some special date, uh, I will put it on my phones and it can uh, remind me on time.

✓ At present, I remember important things on my mobile phone. For instance, for some special dates, I put them on my phone, and it can remind me on time.

前文使用单数“my mobile phone”，所以后面也应保持一致使用单数“my phone”。如果确实指多部手机，才可以使用“phones”；在这个语境中单数更符合表达。

× At present, I remember important things on my mobile phone. For instance, some special date, uh, I will put it on my phones and it can uh, remind me on time.

✓ At present, I remember important things on my mobile phone. For instance, for some special dates, I put them on my phone, and it can remind me on time.

“special dates”是复数名词，因此需要使用复数代词“them”来指代它们。单数代词“it”只能指代单数名词。