Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

Uh, no, I'm not. I, I, I tend to, I'm easy to forget. Uh, but so that I, I sometimes.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

I guess I have I, I thought I have forgot I had forgotten, uh, the place, the place where I had to go, uh, in the morning, but.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

Uh, I think the taking note is one of the easiest way to remember daily life. Uh, for example, uh, write down, uh, write down what? What?

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

Uh, I, I tend to take a memo, uh, if I, if I need to memorize important things, for example, I usually use my, uh, memo, memo book on my phone. Uh, so, uh, that helps me, uh.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 回答は率直だが、言い淀みが多く、冗長で構造が弱い。まず明確なトピック文を一文で述べ、その後に1~2の具体例や理由をつなぎ語(for example / because / so)で続けるとよい。語彙はシンプルで構わないが、繰り返しを避け、発音と流暢さを改善する練習(短いフレーズを練習しながらスムーズに言う)を行うこと。

Ví dụ: No, I'm not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget appointments because I rely on my memory instead of writing them down. So nowadays I set reminders on my phone to help me remember.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 25.0

Gợi ý: 内容は伝わるが文法ミス(時制、完了形の誤用)と繰り返しが目立つ。まず簡潔な主文で経験を述べ(Yes, I have / No, I haven't)、次に具体的な状況を一つ添えると良い。過去形や過去完了を適切に使い、冗長な言葉を省く練習をすること。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. Once I forgot where I was supposed to go in the morning; I realised I had written the wrong address and missed the appointment.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 35.0

Gợi ý: 要点は良いが表現が不自然('taking note'や繰り返し)。まずトピック文で何を覚える必要があるかを明確にし、具体例(買い物リスト、締切、約束)を1~2挙げてつなぎ語で詳述する。短い完成文を意識して話すこと。

Ví dụ: I need to remember everyday tasks like appointments and shopping lists. For example, I always write down things I must buy and set deadlines in my phone calendar so I don't forget them.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 答えは具体的で良いが繰り返しと躊躇が多い。より流暢にするために一文で主張し、続けて方法を具体的に説明する。例を一つ示し、接続詞(for example / so / therefore)で論理をつなぐ練習をすること。また 'memo book'より自然な表現は'memo app'や'notes app'。

Ví dụ: I usually make a note on my phone when I need to remember something important. For example, I use the notes app and set reminders so I receive an alert at the right time.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Uh, no, I'm not. I, I, I tend to, I'm easy to forget. Uh, but so that I, I sometimes.

✓ No, I'm not. I tend to forget things easily, so sometimes I do.

The original contains fragmented and repetitive phrases and lacks a clear subject-verb structure. Combine ideas into complete sentences: use 'I tend to forget things easily' (subject + verb + object) and 'so sometimes I do' to complete the thought. Remove filler repetitions for clarity.

Past tense issue

× I guess I have I, I thought I have forgot I had forgotten, uh, the place, the place where I had to go, uh, in the morning, but.

✓ I guess I thought I had forgotten the place where I had to go in the morning.

The original mixes tenses and uses incorrect past participle 'forgot' after 'have'. Use past perfect 'had forgotten' to indicate an action that occurred before another past moment. Also remove repeated fillers and redundant phrases for clarity.

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× Uh, I think the taking note is one of the easiest way to remember daily life.

✓ I think taking notes is one of the easiest ways to remember things in daily life.

'Taking note' is uncountable and unnatural here; use the gerund plural 'taking notes'. 'One of the easiest way' should be 'one of the easiest ways' (plural 'ways' after 'one of the'). Also add 'things' to clarify the object.

Sentence structure errors

× Uh, for example, uh, write down, uh, write down what? What?

✓ For example, I write things down to remember what I need to do.

The original is fragmented and lacks a complete clause. Provide a full sentence with subject and verb: 'I write things down' and add purpose 'to remember what I need to do'. Remove filler words.

Verb + -ing form

× Uh, I, I tend to take a memo, uh, if I, if I need to memorize important things, for example, I usually use my, uh, memo, memo book on my phone.

✓ I tend to take notes; if I need to memorize important things, I usually use the memo or notes app on my phone.

'Take a memo' is unnatural — use 'take notes' or 'write a memo'. 'Memo book' is awkward; use 'memo app' or 'notes app'. Use gerund/infinitive forms properly and remove repetitions. Ensure parallel structure: 'I tend to take notes' and 'I usually use the memo app'.

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
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