Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Improve grammatical accuracy and clarity. Start with a clear topic sentence, reduce repetition, and include one specific supporting detail using linking words. Use correct verb forms and articles.

Ví dụ: Honestly, I'm not very good at memorising things. I often forget tasks shortly after being asked, for example, once my mother asked me to bring something from the kitchen but I forgot within a few minutes. Because I get distracted easily, I now repeat the instruction to myself to remember it.

Gợi ý: Work on sentence structure and coherence. Give a concise topic sentence, then narrate the event clearly with correct tense and linking words. Avoid hesitation words and repeated phrases.

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my brother sleeping in the car after driving him to school. After parking, I got out and walked away without realising he was still inside; fortunately I heard him calling me and returned immediately.

Gợi ý: Be more concise and use correct word order. Start with a clear topic sentence, then add specific details with linking words. Use appropriate vocabulary (deliveries, arrival) and article usage.

Ví dụ: I work part-time in a restaurant, so I need to remember delivery schedules. For example, I must note when meat and vegetables will arrive so I can store them immediately and keep them fresh.

Gợi ý: Clarify the methods and improve grammar. Give a clear topic sentence describing your main strategies, then add specific examples using linking words. Avoid informal or unclear phrases like 'on my hand'—use 'on my hand' only if explaining a habit, but better to say 'on my phone' or 'write it down'.

Ví dụ: I usually use my phone to record important tasks, because I check it often and see reminders throughout the day. If something is extremely important, I write it down in my notebook or set an alarm so I won't forget.

× To be honest, I'm not the person very good at memorizing.

✓ To be honest, I'm not a person who is very good at memorizing.

Missing article and relative clause; 'the person very good' is unnatural. Use 'a person who is' to describe ability. Also include 'very' before adjective.

× I sometimes forget after a short time.

✓ I sometimes forget things after a short time.

Sentence is grammatically correct but vague because object is missing. Add 'things' to clarify what is forgotten.

× For example, one time my mom asked me to bring her things to kitchen and I forget in a short time.

✓ For example, one time my mom asked me to bring her things to the kitchen, and I forgot them shortly after.

Use definite article 'the' with 'kitchen'. Verb tense should be past ('forgot'). Include object 'them' after 'forgot'. Use 'shortly after' for natural phrasing and add comma before conjunction.

× One time when I drove my brother to his school and I forgot he was he was fall asleep in the car and I just go down the car went down the car and umm go away.

✓ One time when I drove my brother to school, I forgot that he had fallen asleep in the car, and I got out of the car and left.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'to his school' → 'to school' is more natural; 'forgot he was he was fall asleep' needs reporting clause and past perfect 'had fallen asleep' since the sleeping happened before forgetting; 'go down the car' should be 'got out of the car'; 'go away' → 'left' to match past tense.

× I work as a part time job in a restaurant so I have to remember like delivery schedule and I have to ensure when will the meat or the vegetable deliver arrived to our store so that I can keep those fresh.

✓ I work a part-time job in a restaurant, so I have to remember the delivery schedule, and I have to make sure when the meat or vegetables will be delivered to our store so that I can keep them fresh.

Use 'a part-time job' or 'work part-time' (article and hyphenation). 'Like' is unnecessary. Use definite article 'the' for specified schedule. Word order in 'ensure when will the meat...arrive' is incorrect; use 'make sure when the meat or vegetables will be delivered'. 'Vegetable' should be plural 'vegetables' and use 'delivered' (past participle in passive). Replace 'those' with 'them'.

× Sometimes I will record this in my so I can because I scrolling my everywhere so I can see them all day and if the things is very is very important I will write down on my hand so that I can see it all day.

✓ Sometimes I record these things on my phone so I can scroll through them everywhere and see them all day, and if something is very important I write it on my hand so that I can see it all day.

Several issues: 'will record' unnecessary future—use present habitual 'record'. 'in my' incomplete; use 'on my phone'. 'because I scrolling my everywhere' should be 'so I can scroll through them everywhere'. Use plural 'these things'. 'if the things is' incorrect subject-verb agreement and article; use 'if something is very important' and 'write it on my hand'. Removed redundant 'will' and duplicated 'is very'.