Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

Well, no, not great. I'm terrible at memories of things. I usually forget something. What I should I do? Especially the English vocabulary, I always forget, uh, how to remember it?

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Definitely. I sometimes forget some very important things. Uh, one time is I forget to bring my king outside, so when I out of the home, I forget the key so I can get into my house at night. It's very terrible.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

I will. I think I should remember what should I do in a new days. I don't want to waste of the time. I should know what task I should finished in a new days such as finish my homework or do some exercise.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

I think the most significant is I should write a note. If I want do something, I should write it down not so when I see the note I will remember what things should I do. It can help me don't forget it and finish the work.

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Tổng: 5.5Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 5.5Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 5.5

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接但不够自然与流畅。句子有语法错误和重复,信息不够具体。练习时注意使用简洁的主题句并用一两句具体细节或方法支持,同时避免连续停顿和重复。可以改用正确时态和表达(如“I’m not very good at remembering things”),并举例说明你怎么努力记单词。

Ví dụ: I’m not very good at remembering things. For example, I often forget new English vocabulary, so I try to review words every evening and use them in sentences to reinforce them.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 答案能传达意思但有明显语法和词汇错误(如“king”应为“key”,“I out of the home”不自然)。描述不够连贯,缺少衔接词。练习时用一到两句清楚叙述事件顺序,并用连接词(for example, so)使叙述流畅。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. For example, once I forgot my key when I left the house, so I couldn’t get back in that evening and had to call a friend to help.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: 回答意图明确但句子结构混乱,时态和用词不准确(如“in a new days”)。建议先给主题句,然后用两三个具体例子支持,并用适当的时态。使用连接词(for example, such as)提升连贯性。

Ví dụ: I need to remember my daily tasks. For example, I make a list of things to do each day, such as finishing my homework, exercising, and studying English, so I don't waste time.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 60.0

Gợi ý: 回答核心方法明确但表达不够简洁,存在语法错误(如“want do something”,“not so when”)。建议用一两句更自然的表述,并补充具体做法(手机提醒、优先级标注等),用连接词使表达流畅。

Ví dụ: To remember important things, I usually write them down and set phone reminders. This way, when I check my list or get an alert, I won’t forget the task and can complete it on time.

Ngữ pháp

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I'm terrible at memories of things.

✓ I'm terrible at remembering things.

这里“memories”是名词复数,但需要动词-ing形式作介词短语宾语或补语,表示“记住东西”的能力。应使用动词的动名词形式“remembering”。建议记住:表示能力或擅长/不擅长某事时常用动名词,例如“good at doing sth / terrible at doing sth”。

6: Present tense issue

× I usually forget something.

✓ I usually forget things.

原句使用不定量词“something”听起来指单一具体事件,但一般习惯说经常性忘记时用复数名词或不可数‘things’来表示泛指多项。时态为现在时正确,需改为复数以匹配语义。

26: Sentence structure errors

× What I should I do?

✓ What should I do?

原句中疑问词与助动词顺序错误,正确的英语疑问句结构是疑问词 + 助动词 + 主语 + 动词原形。建议熟记一般疑问句和特殊疑问句结构。

26: Sentence structure errors

× Especially the English vocabulary, I always forget, uh, how to remember it?

✓ Especially English vocabulary — I always forget how to remember it.

句子原结构混乱,并在疑问与陈述之间切换。将其改为完整陈述更符合说话意图。如果要做疑问句应为“What is the best way to remember English vocabulary?”。同时去掉多余冠词“the”。

5: Past tense issue

× One time is I forget to bring my king outside, so when I out of the home, I forget the key so I can get into my house at night.

✓ One time I forgot to bring my key when I left home, so I couldn't get into my house that night.

有多处时态和词汇错误:描述过去事件需用过去时(forget → forgot,can → couldn't)。“king”是拼写错误,应为“key”。“when I out of the home”语序和词语错误,应为“when I left home”。此外用“that night”更自然。建议在叙述过去经历时统一使用过去时。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It's very terrible.

✓ It was very terrible.

语境为过去发生的事情,应使用过去时“was”。此外“terrible”可以保留,但用“really terrible”或“awful”更自然。错误属时态与词性混合,需注意时间参考。

6: Present tense issue

× I will. I think I should remember what should I do in a new days.

✓ I think I should remember what I should do on a new day.

句子中多余“I will.”无上下文意义可去掉。疑问句语序错误(what should I do → what I should do)且“in a new days”数量与冠词不一致,应为“on a new day”或“in a new day”更自然,但通常说“each day”或“every day”。建议改为“I think I should remember what I should do each day.”

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers

× I don't want to waste of the time.

✓ I don't want to waste time.

“waste of the time”结构不对。动词“waste”后直接接不可数名词“time”表示浪费时间,不需要介词“of”或定冠词“the”。建议记住“waste time”是固定搭配。

26: Sentence structure errors

× I should know what task I should finished in a new days such as finish my homework or do some exercise.

✓ I should know what tasks I should finish each day, such as finishing my homework or doing some exercises.

错误包括动词时态(finished → finish),单复数(task → tasks,days → each day),短语形式(such as 后面应为动名词短语:finishing / doing)。建议:列举日常任务时用复数名词和动词原形或动名词形式保持一致性。

8: Verb + -ing form

× If I want do something, I should write it down not so when I see the note I will remember what things should I do.

✓ If I want to do something, I should write it down, so when I see the note I will remember what I should do.

错误包括缺少不定式“to”(want do → want to do)、连接词位置和标点,疑问语序错误(what things should I do → what I should do)。另外“not so”顺序错误,应为“so that”或简单用“so”。建议注意不定式、从句连接和陈述句语序。

13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× It can help me don't forget it and finish the work.

✓ It can help me not forget it and finish the work.

否定结构错误:在动词前应使用不带缩写的否定副词“not”或使用“help me to not forget / help me not to forget”。“don't”不能直接跟在“help me”后面。建议使用“help me not forget”或“help me to not forget”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Great— Considerable; Large; Prominent; Magnificent; Enthusiastic
Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
New— Recently developed; Novel; Different; Additional; Reinvigorated
Terrible— Dreadful; Repulsive; Severe; Unkind
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