Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
No, I'm not good at remember things, especially the time and the information. So I need to write, write and read them many times to remember it. However, I don't like to do some repetitive activities, so remembering is very difficult for me.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Yes, I have always forgotten the meeting times and academical informations. I think they were really important for me but uh, I cannot remember them so, and now I always take them note at my bones to remember recall me.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
In my daily life, I need to remember the times of my courses and I need to remember the academic information about my major. Umm, so I always use the notebooks to remember them.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
I'm not very good at remembering things, so now I always take some notes on my phone and set some clocks to remember remind me and I think they were really good ways to help me to remember things.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 回答要语法正确并简洁明确。注意时态和动词形式(例如 use ‘remember’ 的正确形式),并避免重复表达。可以给出一到两个具体例子并使用连接词使回答更连贯。控制在不超过5句话内。
Ví dụ: I'm not very good at remembering things, especially appointments and study facts. Therefore, I often write them down and review the notes several times. However, I dislike repetitive tasks, so memorising still feels difficult for me.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 54.0Gợi ý: 注意语法、词汇准确性与清晰表达。避免模糊或口语填充词(如 'uh')。把经历描述得更具体,例如说明一次具体事件、后果和你为避免再犯所采取的措施。
Ví dụ: Yes. Once I missed an important meeting because I forgot the time, which affected my project progress. Since then I always save meeting details in my phone calendar and set reminders to avoid missing anything.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答要更自然、流畅并使用连接词。可具体说明你记哪些课程时间或哪类学术信息,以及如何组织笔记(例如用不同标签、颜色或应用)。避免填充词并保持句子简短。
Ví dụ: In daily life I need to remember my class schedules and important facts related to my major, such as formulas and key theories. I usually keep a dedicated notebook and organise it with labels and highlights to find information quickly.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 70.0Gợi ý: 回答结构清楚但注意用词准确与简洁(例如 use 'set alarms' 或 'calendar reminders')。可以补充一两个具体例子说明方法的效果或使用场景,从而使回答更有说服力。
Ví dụ: Because I'm not good at memorising, I use my phone a lot: I write notes in a note-taking app and set calendar reminders or alarms for important events. This method has helped me stop missing classes and deadlines.
× No, I'm not good at remember things, especially the time and the information.
✓ No, I'm not good at remembering things, especially times and information.
错误类型:动词+ -ing 形式(Grammar Problem Type 8)。解释:固定搭配是 "be good at + 动词ing",因此动词记忆要用动名词形式 "remembering";另外“the time and the information”在此处不需要定冠词,且可用复数形式更自然,改为 "times and information"。建议:记住搭配 "be good at + -ing",并避免不必要的定冠词。
× So I need to write, write and read them many times to remember it.
✓ So I need to write and read them many times to remember them.
错误类型:句子结构/代词使用(Grammar Problem Type 26 和 12)。解释:重复的 "write, write" 不自然,应去掉重复;后半句中的指代不一致,前文为 "them"(复数),但用到 "it"(单数),应统一为 "them"。建议:保持代词一致,避免不必要重复。
× However, I don't like to do some repetitive activities, so remembering is very difficult for me.
✓ However, I don't like doing repetitive activities, so remembering is very difficult for me.
错误类型:动词+ -ing 形式(Grammar Problem Type 8)。解释:在英文中常用结构是 "don't like doing" 而不是 "don't like to do some"(虽有时可用,但此处更自然);另外 "some repetitive activities" 可改为无冠词的 "repetitive activities"。建议:使用更地道的表达 "don't like doing + 名词"。
× Yes, I have always forgotten the meeting times and academical informations.
✓ Yes, I have often forgotten meeting times and academic information.
错误类型:形容词/名词形式错误(Grammar Problem Type 13 与 14)。解释:"have always forgotten" 表达不自然,通常用 "have often forgotten" 表示经常忘记;"academical" 不是常用形容词,应为 "academic";"informations" 不可数名词,应为单数 "information",且不加复数。建议:注意形容词搭配与不可数名词的使用。
× I think they were really important for me but uh, I cannot remember them so, and now I always take them note at my bones to remember recall me.
✓ I think they were really important to me, but I couldn't remember them, so now I always take notes on my phone to remind myself.
错误类型:代词、介词和句子结构(Grammar Problem Type 12、11、26)。解释:"important for me" 更常用 "important to me";时态与上下文应使用过去时或现在完成时,原句混乱,改为 "couldn't remember";"take them note" 错误,正确为 "take notes";"at my bones" 是错误短语,意图为 "on my phone";"to remember recall me" 应为 "to remind myself"(反身代词)。建议:注意介词搭配(important to)、正确词组(take notes, on my phone)和反身代词用法(remind myself)。
× In my daily life, I need to remember the times of my courses and I need to remember the academic information about my major.
✓ In my daily life, I need to remember the times of my courses and the academic information about my major.
错误类型:冠词错误/重复结构(Grammar Problem Type 22 与 26)。解释:句中两次使用 "I need to remember" 可合并为一次,且在并列名词前加定冠词 "the academic information" 更自然。建议:合并重复表达并注意冠词使用以提高流畅度。
× Umm, so I always use the notebooks to remember them.
✓ Umm, so I always use notebooks to remember them.
错误类型:冠词/数(Grammar Problem Type 22 与 1)。解释:一般情况下说 "use notebooks" 而不是 "use the notebooks"(除非指特定的笔记本);保持与上文 "them" 指代一致。建议:根据语境决定是否使用定冠词,若泛指就省略。
× I'm not very good at remembering things, so now I always take some notes on my phone and set some clocks to remember remind me and I think they were really good ways to help me to remember things.
✓ I'm not very good at remembering things, so now I always take notes on my phone and set alarms to remind me, and I think they are really good ways to help me remember things.
错误类型:动词形式、代词和时态(Grammar Problem Type 8、12、6)。解释:"set some clocks to remember remind me" 非常混乱,正确表达为 "set alarms to remind me";"take some notes" 可简化为 "take notes";句尾时态应与现在状况一致,用 "they are" 而不是 "they were";去掉多余不定式 "to" 在 "help me remember" 中更自然。建议:使用固定搭配 "set alarms to remind me" 和保持时态一致(现在一般现在时)。