Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and natural: give a clear topic sentence, one reason, and one short example. Correct grammar (e.g., memorising vs memorizing, I try to write down, I make an effort). Use linking words like "so" or "because" properly.

Ví dụ: Not really. I’m not very good at memorizing things, so I usually write important items down in a notebook. For example, when I need to remember study topics, I make a short list and review it each evening.

Gợi ý: Provide clearer sequence and a specific reaction. Start with a direct sentence, then give brief details and outcome. Use past tense consistently and link events with words like "then" or "after that."

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. Last week I forgot that I had arranged to meet friends for dinner on Friday evening. When I realized my mistake, I immediately apologised and went to meet them later that night to make amends.

Gợi ý: Give a clear topic sentence and two specific examples. Avoid repetition and incomplete sentences. Use linking words like "for example" or "also" to organise points.

Ví dụ: I need to remember several daily things, such as my university timetable and errands I must do. For example, I always note class times and a shopping list so I don’t forget assignments or items I need to buy.

Gợi ý: Be precise and show one specific method with a brief explanation of why it works. Use natural phrasing like "write things down" or "use my phone calendar" and avoid vague phrases like "and so forth."

Ví dụ: I usually write important tasks down in a notebook or add them to my phone’s calendar. This helps me because I can check the list or receive reminders, so I rarely miss meetings or deadlines.

× No, I think I'm not good at memorizing things, so I try to write something I need when I have to memorize something like study subject or and so forth.

✓ No, I think I'm not good at memorizing things, so I try to write down what I need to remember, such as study subjects and so forth.

Multiple issues: incorrect verb formation and word choice. 'Write something I need' is unclear; better 'write down what I need to remember'. 'Memorize something like study subject' is awkward; use 'such as study subjects'. Use plural 'subjects' to match general reference (Singular and plural issue, ID 1). Also use 'write down' (Verb + -ing/form correction, ID 8).

× So I thought make something efforts.

✓ So I try to make an effort.

Incorrect sentence structure and word choice. 'Thought make something efforts' is ungrammatical; correct is 'I try to make an effort' or 'I try to make efforts'. Use singular 'an effort' is more natural. This is a sentence structure error (ID 26) and singular/plural issue (ID 1).

× Yes, I have forgotten something important.

✓ Yes, I have forgotten something important.

Sentence is grammatically acceptable for the present perfect describing a past event with present relevance; no correction needed.

× Last week I forgot to meet with my friends on Friday evening to eat dinner.

✓ Last week I forgot to meet my friends on Friday evening for dinner.

Minor wording improvement: 'forgot to meet with my friends' is acceptable but 'forgot to meet my friends' is more natural. 'To eat dinner' -> 'for dinner'. This is a preposition and word choice issue (ID 11).

× So first I apologize to my friends and go to dinner.

✓ So first I apologized to my friends and then went to dinner.

Tense inconsistency: The speaker is describing a past event 'Last week', so verbs should be in past tense. 'I apologize' and 'go' should be 'I apologized' and 'went'. This is a past tense issue (ID 5).

× In my daily life, I have to remember the schedule at university or my daily life for instance.

✓ In my daily life, I have to remember my university schedule and my daily routines, for instance.

Redundant and awkward phrasing 'the schedule at university or my daily life'. Use 'my university schedule' and 'daily routines'. This is sentence structure error (ID 26) and incorrect use of prepositions (ID 11).

× Now I have to memorize the.

✓ Now I have to memorize things.

Sentence is incomplete and missing an object after 'the'. This is a sentence without a verb/object or sentence structure error (ID 23 and 26). Replacing with 'things' completes it. Note tense is present, which fits 'Now'.

× Something I need to buy and so forth.

✓ For example, items I need to buy, and so forth.

Fragment lacking a full clause; make it a noun phrase connected to prior sentence or form a full sentence like 'For example, items I need to buy.' This is sentence structure error (ID 26) and article/quantifier choice (ID 14).

× I remember important things through writing it on paper or notebook.

✓ I remember important things by writing them on paper or in a notebook.

Pronoun agreement and preposition errors: 'writing it' should be 'writing them' to agree with 'things' (Incorrect use of pronouns, ID 12). Use 'by' to express method (Modal/structure, ID 4 not required) and 'in a notebook' rather than 'on notebook' (preposition error, ID 11).

× By doing so, I can remember all important things such as my schedule, meeting with my friends, and so forth.

✓ By doing so, I can remember all important things, such as my schedule and meetings with my friends.

Parallel structure and article/number agreement: 'meeting with my friends' should be plural 'meetings' to match 'all important things'. Remove redundant 'and so forth' when examples are given, or keep but after comma. This is incorrect use of adjectives/nouns and sentence structure (ID 13 and 26).