Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise, avoid filler words, and use a clear topic sentence followed by one or two specific supporting details with linking words. Correct minor grammar (e.g., 'memorizing' and 'needed to memorize'). Aim for 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: It depends on the type of information. When I was in middle school I was good at memorizing facts because I had to learn a lot for exams, but now I remember better when I revise regularly or use notes.

Gợi ý: Give a clear, concise account of the event with specific details (what was forgotten, when, and the consequence). Remove repetitions and use linking words like 'because' or 'so'. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, once I missed an important university exam on a Saturday because I forgot the date, so I lost the chance to take it and felt very disappointed.

Gợi ý: Start with a direct topic sentence and then give specific examples and a linking phrase. Reduce repetition and use more natural phrases (e.g., 'coding details', 'procedures for AI models'). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: At my internship I need to remember work-related details, such as coding conventions, important documents, and methods for developing AI models, because these things affect my daily tasks and teamwork.

Gợi ý: Give a clear main sentence explaining your method, then one brief reason or example. Remove hesitations and unclear phrases. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so'.

Ví dụ: I prefer to write important things down in a notebook or on my phone because this helps me review them later and prevents me from forgetting tasks.

× I think when I was young, I think I'm really good at memorizing things, uh, especially when I was in, uh, middle school because, uh, at that time I, I needed to memory a lot of things for my study or for my life, but.

✓ I think when I was young, I was really good at memorizing things, especially when I was in middle school because at that time I needed to memorize a lot of things for my studies and for my life.

The sentence mixes present and past tenses incorrectly ('I think I'm really good' with 'when I was young'). Use past tense 'was' to match the time reference. 'Needed to memory' is incorrect verb choice; use the verb 'memorize'. 'Study' should be pluralized to 'studies' for general academic activities. Also remove filler words and repeated words for clarity.

× Of course, I, I have forgotten something important and I think it's a shame for me because it is a good exam and it's a good, it's a very important exam for me at Saturday, but on Saturday, but I, I forget to go to the exam and then it is a really bad thing for me.

✓ Of course, I have forgotten something important and I think it's a shame for me because it was a very important exam on Saturday, but I forgot to go to the exam and that was really bad for me.

Use past tense consistently for past events: 'it was' and 'I forgot' instead of present or mixed forms. 'At Saturday' is incorrect preposition; use 'on Saturday'. Remove repeated fillers and tighten phrasing ('it was a very important exam' instead of 'it's a good, it's a very important').

× For me now, because I'm in my internship so I need to remember some work details like the code details or some documents or some method to make AI.

✓ Right now, because I'm doing an internship I need to remember work details such as code specifics, documents, and methods for creating AI.

Use present continuous 'doing an internship' or 'I'm in my internship' can be improved; original sentence is awkward. Replace 'some work details like the code details or some documents or some method to make AI' with clearer noun phrases: 'code specifics, documents, and methods for creating AI'. Maintain present tense for current situation.

× I prefer to write them down because if I I because I write them down, can can notice I can talk to you.

✓ I prefer to write them down because if I write them down I can remember them and then I can tell you.

The original has repetition and missing subject for 'can notice' which is unclear. Use correct clause structure: 'if I write them down, I can remember them'. 'Can notice' is inappropriate; replace with 'remember' or 'tell you' depending on meaning. Remove duplicated words and fillers.