Part 1
Giám khảo
Are you good at memorising things?
Thí sinh
Yes, I think I am good at remember some things. I can remember some. Strangers face and it and their names. I always play memorizing games.
Giám khảo
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Thí sinh
Absolutely, yes. Sometimes I remember some important things, but it is. Common for me to be disturbed by other people and then.
Giám khảo
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Thí sinh
I need to remember some important meetings and deadlines because of my major. I need to attend some different kind of seminars.
Giám khảo
How do you remember important things?
Thí sinh
And sometimes I usually write them down in my notebook because I think writing can make me remember them better. Also I will use my phone reminders or calendar app to set alert for me.
Are you good at memorising things?
Điểm: 62.0Gợi ý: 在回答中注意语法准确性和句子连贯性,避免重复和碎片化表达。先直接回答问题,然后用1–2个具体细节支持观点;使用连词使句子更流畅。比如改正动词形式(remember→remembering),把零散句子合并,提供具体例子。
Ví dụ: Yes, I think I'm quite good at remembering things. For example, I can usually remember strangers' faces and their names because I often play memorizing games on my phone, which helps train my memory.
Have you ever forgotten something important?
Điểm: 50.0Gợi ý: 改善句子完整性并给出具体情境和原因。先直接回答,再说明一个具体例子或原因,使用连词(because/so/when)连接句子,避免残句。可以描述一次具体忘记的事情及其原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, I have. For example, once I forgot an important meeting because I was distracted by friends and didn't check my calendar, so I missed the start of the session.
What do you need to remember in your daily life?
Điểm: 68.0Gợi ý: 回答时更具体并合并重复信息,提供细节(如课程、项目或时间频率),使用连接词使逻辑清晰。避免泛泛而谈,说明你如何优先安排这些事项。
Ví dụ: I need to remember meetings and deadlines for my major, such as project submission dates and weekly seminar times, because they affect my grades and research progress.
How do you remember important things?
Điểm: 80.0Gợi ý: 总体表达清楚但开头避免加连词“And”。可增加一两句具体例子说明方法的效果或优先级,并用连词使句子更自然。比如说明何时用笔记本何时用手机及其好处。
Ví dụ: I usually write important things down in my notebook because writing helps me remember, and I also set alerts on my phone calendar for deadlines; this way I have a written record and timely reminders.
× Yes, I think I am good at remember some things.
✓ Yes, I think I am good at remembering some things.
错误类型:动词 + -ing 形式(第8类)。在短语“be good at”之后,习惯上使用动名词(动词 + -ing),因此应将动词 remember 改为 remembering。建议记住常见固定搭配,如 be good at + doing sth。
× I can remember some. Strangers face and it and their names.
✓ I can remember strangers' faces and their names.
错误类型:句子结构错误(第26类)和所有格/代词使用(第12类)。原句中有断句、冗余的代词“it”和语序混乱。应合并为一个完整句子,并使用所有格 strangers' 表示“陌生人的脸”。建议把相关信息合并成完整短语:remember X and Y。
× I always play memorizing games.
✓ I always play memory games.
错误类型:动词的现在分词误用(第8类)和词类选择(可归入第13类形容词/副词使用)。“memorizing games”虽然可理解,但更自然的表达是名词短语“memory games”。建议学习常用搭配,选择更地道的名词形式。
× Sometimes I remember some important things, but it is. Common for me to be disturbed by other people and then.
✓ Sometimes I remember some important things, but it is common for me to be disturbed by other people.
错误类型:句子结构错误(第26类)和连词/标点使用(第16类)。原句因错误断句导致句子不完整,并且多余的“and then”使句子不自然。合并句子并去掉多余部分,保持意思连贯。建议注意避免在句中随意断句,保持主谓宾完整。
× I need to remember some important meetings and deadlines because of my major.
✓ I need to remember important meetings and deadlines because of my major.
错误类型:量词使用(第14类)。句中使用“some”并非严格错误,但在此语境下显得多余。去掉“some”使表达更自然。建议在正式回答时省略不必要的量词或根据上下文选择更准确的限定词。
× I need to attend some different kind of seminars.
✓ I need to attend different kinds of seminars.
错误类型:单复数问题(第1类)与搭配问题(第13类)。短语“some different kind of seminars”中“kind”应与复数“seminars”一致,正确形式为“different kinds of seminars”。建议注意“kind of”结构:若后接可数复数名词,通常用“kinds of”。
× And sometimes I usually write them down in my notebook because I think writing can make me remember them better.
✓ Sometimes I usually write them down in my notebook because I think writing helps me remember them better.
错误类型:句子结构/副词使用(第26类、第13类)。句首不必要的连词“And”应去掉;“make me remember”虽可理解,但更自然的是“help(s) me remember”。建议去掉重复词并用更自然的动词短语(help + 动词原形)。
× Also I will use my phone reminders or calendar app to set alert for me.
✓ I also use my phone reminders or calendar app to set alerts for me.
错误类型:时态问题(第6类)与可数名词复数(第1类/第14类)。在谈论习惯时应使用一般现在时(I use),并且“alert”应为复数“alerts”以匹配“reminders or app”。建议使用一般现在时描述习惯,并注意单复数一致。