Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence answering the question, avoid filler words (umm, like), correct grammar (memorizing, important things), and limit to 2–3 sentences. Add one specific example and a brief reason to support your statement, using linking words (for example, because).

Ví dụ: No, I’m not very good at memorising things. For example, I often forget my study schedule because I have many classes, so I rely on written notes to keep track.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and give a specific, coherent example. Use correct verb forms and past tense (I forgot my dad’s purchase), avoid fillers, and connect ideas with linking words (so, because, when). Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. For instance, I once forgot to buy something my dad asked for, so I felt guilty when he noticed. After that, I started writing shopping lists to avoid repeating the mistake.

Gợi ý: Make a clear topic sentence naming what you need to remember (your schedule). Use correct grammar and clearer phrasing (my schedule is very important; I follow a timetable). Use one linking word to explain why and give one specific method you use to remember it. Keep sentences short and natural.

Ví dụ: I need to remember my daily schedule because it helps me manage school and study time. Therefore, I follow a timetable and check it every morning so I don’t miss any tasks.

Gợi ý: Be clear and grammatically correct: say ‘I note them on my phone’ and ‘I set reminders’. Use linking words (for example, by, so) and one brief reason why this works. Limit to 2–3 sentences and avoid fillers.

Ví dụ: I usually note important tasks on my phone and set reminders so I won’t forget. For example, I set an alarm for exam revision and another for appointments, which keeps me organised.

× To be honest, I'm not good at memorizing things because umm, sometimes I always forget an important things such as my schedule as my school or my studies and my exams.

✓ To be honest, I'm not good at memorizing things because sometimes I always forget important things such as my schedule, my school tasks, my studies, and my exams.

The phrase 'an important things' mixes singular article 'an' with plural noun 'things'; use no article with plural 'important things'. Also some list items needed plural or clearer nouns ('school tasks'). Remove filler 'umm' and redundant 'always' if unnecessary. Suggestion: match articles to noun number and use commas to separate list items. Grammar problem type ID: 1

× Of course I have forgotten something important such as I forgot my dad purchase so I feel very bad because of that.

✓ Of course I have forgotten something important, such as forgetting my dad's purchase, so I feel very bad about that.

The noun phrase 'my dad purchase' requires a possessive form 'my dad's purchase' or the gerund 'forgetting my dad's purchase'. Since the sentence uses present perfect 'have forgotten', choose a noun or gerund phrase to follow 'such as'. Also 'because of that' is better as 'about that'. Suggestion: use possessive for nouns and consistent verb forms after 'such as'. Grammar problem type ID: 9

× Umm and I know that when my mom remind me that.

✓ And I know that when my mom reminds me, I remember it.

Pronoun and verb agreement: 'mom remind' is incorrect; third person singular requires 'reminds'. The sentence was incomplete ('that' unclear), so add 'I remember it' to complete the clause. Suggestion: ensure subject-verb agreement and complete the thought. Grammar problem type ID:12

× I need to remember in my daily life that my schedule has gone because it very important for me and every day I have to do it such as my daily life.

✓ In my daily life I need to remember my schedule because it is very important to me and I have daily tasks to do.

Original sentence has awkward structure and unclear phrases ('schedule has gone', 'do it such as my daily life'). Correct by reordering: state context, the object to remember, and reason. Use 'it is' for 'it very important'. Suggestion: make subject, verb, object clear and avoid redundant phrases. Grammar problem type ID:26

× So I always umm remarkable by timetable.

✓ So I always keep a remarkable timetable.

'Remarkable by timetable' is ungrammatical. Likely intended meaning is 'keep a remarkable timetable' or 'follow a timetable'. 'Remarkable' may be wrong adjective; consider 'organized' or 'regular'. Suggestion: choose correct verb and adjective: 'I always follow my timetable' or 'I always keep an organized timetable.' Grammar problem type ID:13

× I remember important things such as I not it on my phones and umm install reminder on my phones and it can help me umm to remember what I want to know and it's so important for me right now.

✓ I remember important things by noting them on my phone and installing reminders on my phone; this helps me remember what I need to and is very important to me now.

Pronoun and verb forms were incorrect: 'I not it' should be 'by noting it' or 'note them'; 'phones' should be singular or 'my phones' consistently but better 'my phone'. 'Install reminder' needs 'installing reminders'. Also replace 'what I want to know' with 'what I need to'. Suggestion: use gerunds after 'by' and ensure noun number consistency. Grammar problem type ID:12