Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: ตอบได้ชัดเจนว่าจำรูปภาพดีกว่าข้อความ แต่ควรปรับไวยากรณ์และลำดับความคิดให้เป็นประโยคหัวข้อแล้วตามด้วยรายละเอียด ใช้ linking words เพื่อความลื่นไหล และหลีกเลี่ยงคำซ้ำ เช่น ‘picture’ ซ้ำเกินไป เพิ่มตัวอย่างเฉพาะเจาะจง เช่น เหตุการณ์หรือสิ่งที่จำได้จากภาพเพื่อรับคะแนนเพิ่ม

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorising long texts, but I remember visual information well. For example, I can recall places or faces from photos more easily than names. Because of that, I often use images or diagrams to study when I need to remember something.

Gợi ý: คำตอบตรงประเด็นว่าเคยลืมวันเกิดคนในครอบครัว แต่ประโยคควรเป็นระบบ มีประโยคหัวข้อแล้วขยายเหตุผล ใช้ linking words เช่น 'because' หรือ 'so' ให้ถูกต้อง และให้ตัวอย่างเฉพาะ เช่น ใครเป็นคนเกิดวันไหน เพื่อแสดงรายละเอียด

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. I often forget family birthdays because dates don't form a clear image in my mind. For example, I once missed my sister's birthday because I didn't set a reminder. As a result, I now put important dates in my calendar to avoid this.

Gợi ý: คำตอบควรชัดเจนว่าเรื่องที่ต้องจำคือกำหนดส่งงาน แสดงโครงสร้างเป็นประโยคหัวข้อแล้วอธิบายผลกระทบและตัวอย่าง ใช้คำศัพท์ที่ถูกต้องเช่น 'deadline' แทน 'due date' หากให้รายละเอียดเกี่ยวกับผลที่เกิดขึ้นและวิธีแก้ จะดีขึ้น

Ví dụ: I need to remember deadlines for my work and assignments. For instance, I sometimes miss submission dates and receive lower marks because of late submissions. To prevent this, I now write deadlines in my planner and set phone reminders.

Gợi ý: ตอบดีที่บอกใช้โทรศัพท์จดบันทึก แต่ประโยคควรกระชับและชัด ใช้คำที่ถูกต้องและเรียงลำดับเหตุผล เช่น 'I set reminders on my phone' อธิบายเพิ่มเติมว่าใช้แอปไหนหรือวิธีการตั้งเตือนอย่างไร เพื่อเพิ่มความเฉพาะเจาะจง

Ví dụ: I usually set reminders and notes on my phone so I see them every day. For example, I use a calendar app to create alerts a few days before a deadline, which helps me start tasks earlier and avoid being late.

× I'm not good to remember like takes or something long, but I can remember the thing in the picture.

✓ I'm not good at remembering tasks or something long, but I can remember things in pictures.

The verb 'good' is followed by the preposition 'at' + gerund, so 'good to remember' is incorrect; use 'good at remembering'. 'Takes' is a typo for 'tasks'. Use plural 'things' and 'in pictures' for general ability. Suggestion: use 'good at' + verb-ing and correct nouns and plurality.

× Like I can remember the place by picture more than their name or something.

✓ I can remember a place by its picture more than its name.

Use correct possessive pronoun 'its' for singular 'place' instead of 'their'. Also 'by picture' needs an article: 'by its picture'. Suggestion: match pronoun to noun number and use articles.

× I remember that, uh, that some system by picture more.

✓ I remember, uh, things better if I use a visual system.

Original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. Rephrase to a coherent structure: subject + verb + object + condition. Suggestion: express the idea clearly: 'I remember things better if I use a visual system.'

× Yes for sure, I usually forgot my family birthdays because I think that the day can't remember as a picture so I need to remember that exactly day so it's hard to me to remember the day.

✓ Yes, for sure. I usually forget my family birthdays because a date cannot be remembered as a picture, so I need to remember the exact day and it's hard for me to do that.

Use present simple 'forget' for habitual actions, not past 'forgot'. 'Can't remember as a picture' should be 'cannot be remembered as a picture'. 'Exactly day' -> 'exact day'. 'Hard to me' -> 'hard for me'. Suggestion: use correct tense for habits and correct prepositional phrasing.

× Uh, I live quite to remember the due date of work that I was give, so I need to do the work on time and sometime I forget them and the submission is late so I got the points late then.

✓ Uh, I try to remember the due date of work I was given, so I need to do the work on time, but sometimes I forget and the submission is late, so I lose points.

'Live quite to remember' is wrong; should be 'try to remember'. 'Work that I was give' needs passive past participle 'given'. 'Sometime' -> 'sometimes'. 'I forget them' -> 'I forget' (work/submission singular) and 'got the points late' -> 'lose points' or 'get points deducted'. Suggestion: use correct verbs, past participle for passive, correct adverb forms and concise phrasing.

× I usually take note on my telephone that I can see is every day so I can remember the thing by saying in everyday life that nothing me every time is near to the uh, due date or something.

✓ I usually take notes on my phone that I can see every day, so I can remember things by seeing reminders when the due date is near.

Use plural 'notes'. 'Take note on my telephone that I can see is every day' is ungrammatical; use 'take notes on my phone that I can see every day'. 'Remember the thing by saying' should be 'remember things by seeing reminders'. 'Nothing me every time' is incorrect. Suggestion: simplify sentences, use 'take notes' and 'see reminders', and use gerund forms appropriately.