Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

Yes, I remember when I was a child my grandmother usually took me go to a park after work. I think that is my best memory in my childhood.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Sure. Last year I forgot my mother's birthday, which was really important to me. I felt terrible because I don't celebrate with her. So afterwards I applied just and took her out for dinner to make up for it.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

The most important things I needed to remember is to bring a umbrella when I go to work. It's necessary in class is running so I don't get wet on my way.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

I will make A to do list note and the pastor might study study table to reminder myself the thing needed to do.

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Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 56.0

Gợi ý: 回答需要更直接并符合语法,避免冗长或不相关的信息。开头应直接回应问题(Yes/No + 简短说明),然后用1–2句具体细节支持。注意时态和动词用法(例如 'took me to a park')。

Ví dụ: Yes, I’m fairly good at remembering things. For example, I always recall routines and appointments easily because my grandmother used to take me to the park every day after work when I was a child, and those repeated experiences made my memory strong.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 回答应更清晰连贯,注意语法时态一致并使用连接词(so, therefore, because)。避免含糊或错误的短语(例如 'applied just' 不明确)。描述补救措施时要具体且简洁。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have. Last year I forgot my mother’s birthday, which made me feel awful because we usually celebrate together. Therefore, I apologized to her and took her out to dinner the next day to make up for it.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 40.0

Gợi ý: 回答需使用正确主谓一致和单复数(e.g. 'an umbrella'),并提供清晰原因。避免模糊或语法错误的从句,尽量用一到两句表达要点并用连词解释原因。

Ví dụ: I need to remember to bring an umbrella when I go to work because it often rains in the morning, and that way I won’t get wet on my way to the office.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 34.0

Gợi ý: 回答目前语法和用词混乱,应直接说明使用的方法(例如 to-do lists, alarms, calendar apps)并说明具体细节或例子。删除无关或错误词汇(如 'pastor'、重复的 'study')。

Ví dụ: I usually make a to-do list and set reminders on my phone or calendar app. For example, I add deadlines to my calendar and set an alarm one day before so I don’t forget important tasks.

Ngữ pháp

Verb in the -ing form

× Yes, I remember when I was a child my grandmother usually took me go to a park after work.

✓ Yes, I remember when I was a child my grandmother usually took me to go to a park after work.

句子中动词短语“took me go”缺少介词“to”。在英语中,动词“take”用于表示带某人去某地时常用结构是“take someone to somewhere”或“take someone to do something”。因此应在“me”和“go”之间加上“to”。建议多练习固定搭配如“take someone to + 地点/动词不定式”。

Sentence structure errors

× I think that is my best memory in my childhood.

✓ I think that is my best memory from my childhood.

中文解释:短语“in my childhood”在这种表达中不如“from my childhood”自然。“best memory from my childhood”更常用来表示“童年时期最好的回忆”。建议学习常见时间短语搭配,区分 in/from/when 的用法。

Past tense issue

× Sure. Last year I forgot my mother's birthday, which was really important to me. I felt terrible because I don't celebrate with her.

✓ Sure. Last year I forgot my mother's birthday, which was really important to me. I felt terrible because I didn't celebrate with her.

中文解释:句子描述的是过去发生的事情,第一句用过去时“forgot”“felt”,所以后半句也应使用过去时“didn't celebrate”。将现在时改为过去时以保持时态一致。建议注意叙述过去事件时全句使用过去时态。

Incorrect use of words / sentence structure errors

× So afterwards I applied just and took her out for dinner to make up for it.

✓ So afterwards I apologized and took her out for dinner to make up for it.

中文解释:原句中“applied just”用词错误,应为“apologized”表示道歉;“just”位置和用法也不合适。句子结构也因此不通。建议记住常见动词词汇区别,例如apply(申请)与apologize(道歉)。

Subject-verb agreement errors

× The most important things I needed to remember is to bring a umbrella when I go to work.

✓ The most important thing I need to remember is to bring an umbrella when I go to work.

中文解释:主谓一致和冠词错误:主语为单数“thing”而不是“things”,谓语时态与表述习惯应为现在时“need to remember”,并且“umbrella”前应使用不定冠词“an”。建议检查主语单复数并配合正确时态与冠词。

Incorrect use of words / sentence structure errors

× It's necessary in class is running so I don't get wet on my way.

✓ It's necessary when it rains so I don't get wet on my way.

中文解释:原句中“in class is running”没有意义,可能想表达“下雨时”。应使用“when it rains”。句子需表达因果关系,注意选用正确的从句引导词并使用正确的动词形式。建议多练习时间状语从句和常用天气表达。

Verb + -ing form

× I will make A to do list note and the pastor might study study table to reminder myself the thing needed to do.

✓ I will make a to-do list and put it on my study table to remind myself of the things I need to do.

中文解释:原句存在多处错误:1) “A to do list note” 结构重复且大小写错误,正确为“a to-do list”;2) “the pastor” 不合语境,应为“my study table”(书桌)可能是想写“study table”;3) “to reminder myself” 中 reminder 用法错误,正确动词为“remind myself”;4) “the thing needed to do” 语序与定语使用不当,改为“the things I need to do”;5) 时态和冠词也需调整。建议学习固定短语“to-do list”,“remind someone of something”,并注意词性(名词/动词)转换和语序。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Best— Finest; To the highest standard
Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
Terrible— Dreadful; Repulsive; Severe; Unkind
Wet— Damp; Rainy; Sticky; Aqueous; Dampen
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