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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

Good job! - Task response & Coherence: You answered the question directly and gave reasons and an example, which is good.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Actually, I didn't remember something that I forgotten something important because I usually keep important things on my mind tightly and record this in my phones. In the future, I hope I will never forget something and continue to be careful.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

I need to remember my homework and daily tasks. There are many courses in my major and dialysis is various. So I must recall this deadline in my phone and remind me every day. So make sure that I will not, uh, missing them.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

Actually, I usually use phones to record important things such as the tasks and the deadlines. I set up some alarms to reminded me don't missing anything. It's a useful way to let me memorize.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 30.0

Gợi ý: 你的回答不相关且没有直接回应考官的问题。需要用主题句直接回答(例如:Yes, I am quite good at memorising things),并提供一到两句具体的支持细节和例子,控制在最多五句内。

Ví dụ: Yes, I'm fairly good at memorising things. I often use short routines and repetition to remember lists or facts, for example I rehearse key points aloud before a presentation. This helps me retain information more reliably.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 句子结构混乱,有时态和语法错误,信息也比较笼统。建议先用一句明确的主题句回答(Yes/No + 简短原因),然后用一到两句具体例子或细节说明,使用连接词如 “because” 或 “for example” 保持连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I have forgotten something important once. For example, I missed a deadline for a course assignment because I underestimated the time required, so now I always set multiple reminders on my phone to avoid that happening again.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 50.0

Gợi ý: 回答内容不够精确,存在词汇使用错误(如 “dialysis” 用错)。建议先给出主题句(I need to remember...),然后列举具体事项并说明记忆方法,用连接词如 “for example”“so” 来组织句子。注意词汇准确性和语法(例如:set reminders, avoid missing)。

Ví dụ: I need to remember my homework, assignment deadlines and class schedules. For example, because I take several courses, I set calendar reminders on my phone a few days before each deadline so I don't miss them.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答基本清楚但有语法和用词错误(如 reminded, don't missing)。建议用一到两句描述方法并给出具体细节或效果,使用连词如 “for example” 来使答案更自然。注意时态和动词形式。

Ví dụ: I usually use my phone to record important tasks and set multiple alarms. For example, I add deadlines to my calendar and set two reminders—one a week before and another on the due date—so I'm rarely late.

Ngữ pháp

Sentence structure errors

× Good job!

(No correction needed)

该句为口语中对鼓励或肯定的简短回应,语法上无错误。此处无需修改。

Past tense issue

× Actually, I didn't remember something that I forgotten something important because I usually keep important things on my mind tightly and record this in my phones.

Actually, I didn't remember something important because I usually keep important things in my mind and record them on my phone.

问题类型:过去时和过去分词的使用错误(ID 5)。原句中出现了 "didn't remember" 与 "forgotten" 连用,英语中助动词 did 已经把动词置于过去时,后面的动词应使用动词原形而不是过去分词,所以不能说 "didn't ... forgotten"。另外,句子中存在冗余和搭配问题:"keep ... on my mind tightly" 不自然,改为 "keep ... in my mind";"record this in my phones" 数量和介词错误,改为单数 "phone" 并用 "on"。建议:使用简单过去时时,用 did + 动词原形;注意可数名词单复数和正确介词。

Future tense issue

× In the future, I hope I will never forget something and continue to be careful.

In the future, I hope I will never forget anything and will continue to be careful.

问题类型:将来时使用不当(ID 7)。原句中 "hope I will never forget something" 在否定希望中更自然用 anything 而非 something;此外并列动词 "hope I will... and continue" 应保持形式一致,建议为 "will ... and will continue" 或使用现在时从句 "I hope I will never... and continue..." 但更清晰的是对两部分都使用 will。建议使用 anything 表示任何事物,并保持动词形式一致。

Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs

× I need to remember my homework and daily tasks.

(No correction needed)

该句语法正确,词序和用法恰当。无需修改。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× There are many courses in my major and dialysis is various.

There are many courses in my major and the content is varied.

问题类型:介词/词汇搭配和形容词形式错误(ID 11/13)。原句中 "dialysis is various" 可能为拼写或词汇错误(dialysis 指透析,与语境不符),应改为指课程内容或科目,使用 'the content is varied' 或 'the topics are various'。如果想表达课程多样,应使用 'various' 修饰名词(various courses),或用 'is varied' 描述内容多样。建议确认意图并选择正确词汇和形容词形式。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× So I must recall this deadline in my phone and remind me every day.

So I must record the deadlines on my phone and set reminders for myself every day.

问题类型:介词与代词使用错误(ID 11/12)。原句中 'recall this deadline in my phone' 用词不当,应该用 'record' 或 'save',并用介词 'on my phone'。此外,'remind me every day' 需要明确是谁设置提醒,改为 'set reminders for myself' 更自然。建议:使用正确动词(record/save/set)和介词 'on',以及用反身结构或明确主语。

Present tense issue

× So make sure that I will not, uh, missing them.

So I make sure that I will not, uh, miss them.

问题类型:动词形式和时态错误(ID 6/8)。原句中 'will not ... missing' 错误地把动词用现在分词,使用助动词 will 后应接动词原形 'miss'。如果想表达习惯性动作,也可说 'So I make sure I don't miss them.' 建议:助动词后用动词原形;根据语境选择合适时态。

Present tense issue

× Actually, I usually use phones to record important things such as the tasks and the deadlines.

Actually, I usually use my phone to record important things such as tasks and deadlines.

问题类型:时态与数的一致性(ID 6/1)。原句中 'use phones' 和 'the tasks and the deadlines' 用法不太自然,通常说 'use my phone'(单数,所有格)并省略泛指名词前的定冠词 'the'。建议根据语境使用单数所有格并省略不必要的定冠词。

Past tense issue

× I set up some alarms to reminded me don't missing anything.

I set up some alarms to remind me so I don't miss anything.

问题类型:过去时与不定式及动词形式混用(ID 5/8)。原句中 'to reminded' 错将不定式用作过去式,应为不定式 'to remind'。此外,'don't missing' 错误地把助动词与现在分词连用,应为 'don't miss'。建议:不定式用动词原形;助动词后接动词原形。

Incorrect use of verbs/gerunds

× It's a useful way to let me memorize.

It's a useful way to help me remember.

问题类型:动词词形和搭配错误(ID 8/9/13)。原句 'let me memorize' 不自然,'let' 更常用于允许他人做某事(let me do),但此处应使用 'help me remember' 或 'help me to remember'。此外 'memorize' 后通常接具体宾语(what to memorize),而 'remember' 更适合与 tasks/deadlines 搭配。建议使用 'help me remember' 来表达有助于记忆。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

CarefulCautious; Prudent; Attentive
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
ManyNumerous; A great/good deal of
UsefulFunctional; Beneficial
VariousDiverse
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