MemoryPart 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

I would say it depends on different situations. If I'm preparing for my exams and I need to memorizing some, not, uh, some foreign knowledge, I will. I'm not very good at it, but I'm good at remembering all my life experiences such as a travel, uh, experiencing.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

To be honest, I'm haven't forgot something important because I'm a I'm an organized person so I will list every day To Do List to uh pre to prepare my daily schedule. So it's hard for me to forget something.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

I would say I tend to remember most The thing is about my study. I need to remember my my daily, uh, study schedule such as our lecture time and and assignment deadlines. So I will set a phone reminder.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

As I mentioned before, I use A to do list or set phone reminders to remind me some important things. For example uh when I need to remember my parents birthday, I will set a reminder and in my phone to pre prepared for the birthday.

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 68.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更直接并且语句更流畅,避免重复与口头语。开头可以直接给出总体判断(例如“Yes, somewhat”或“No, not really”),然后用一两句具体例子支持。注意动词形式(memorize)和冠词使用,减少停顿和重复。可控制在3-4句内,使表达自然且有效。

Ví dụ: Yes, it depends. I'm not very good at memorizing abstract facts for exams, but I remember personal experiences and trips very well. For instance, I can recall details of my last holiday without difficulty.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 74.0

Gợi ý: 回答要注意时态和语法错误,避免断断续续。可以先简短肯定再解释方法,并用连词使逻辑更清晰。用更地道的表达如“I haven't forgotten anything important”或“I rarely forget important things because...”。保持2-3句即可。

Ví dụ: Honestly, I rarely forget important things because I'm an organized person. I make a daily to-do list and plan my schedule, so it's unlikely I'll miss something important.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 72.0

Gợi ý: 回答要更简洁有条理。先给出主题句(例如“I mainly need to remember study-related things”),然后列举具体内容并用连词连接。避免重复词和口头语,注意冠词和复数形式。可提供一两个具体例子来增强细节。

Ví dụ: I mainly need to remember study-related things. For example, I keep track of lecture times and assignment deadlines, and I set phone reminders to make sure I don't miss them.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 76.0

Gợi ý: 回答已经比较清楚,但要修正小错误并更流畅。合并重复信息,用正确的短语(a to-do list, set phone reminders, prepare for the birthday),并举一个简短具体的例子。保持在2-3句内更自然。

Ví dụ: I usually use a to-do list and set phone reminders for important dates. For example, I set a reminder for my parents' birthdays so I have time to buy a gift and prepare a celebration.

Ngữ pháp

Verb + -ing form

× If I'm preparing for my exams and I need to memorizing some, not, uh, some foreign knowledge, I will.

If I'm preparing for my exams and I need to memorize some foreign knowledge, I will.

句中動詞 need 後面應接不帶 -ing 的動詞原形(to 不明顯省略的情況除外),正確結構為 need to memorize 或 need + 動詞原形(在口語中可省略 to)。原句使用了 need to memorizing,動詞形式錯誤。建議:記住 need 之後常接動詞原形或不定式。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I'm not very good at it, but I'm good at remembering all my life experiences such as a travel, uh, experiencing.

I'm not very good at it, but I'm good at remembering my life experiences, such as travel experiences.

原句中使用了不正確或多餘的限定語(a travel, experiencing),語序和名詞搭配不當。應使用復數或不可數形式表示經歷(life experiences)並以 travel experiences 或 just travel 來說明。建議:用固定搭配 “travel experiences” 或 “travel” 表達旅行經歷。

Past tense issue

× To be honest, I'm haven't forgot something important because I'm a I'm an organized person so I will list every day To Do List to uh pre to prepare my daily schedule.

To be honest, I haven't forgotten anything important because I'm an organized person, so I list a daily to-do list to prepare my daily schedule.

原句中混用了現在完成否定和過去分詞 forget 的錯誤形式(haven't forgot -> haven't forgotten)。此外,語序和重複詞匯(I'm a I'm an、every day To Do List)也不正確。建議:使用現在完成時的正確過去分詞(forgotten),並簡化為 “I list a daily to-do list” 或 “I make a daily to-do list”。

Incorrect use of quantifiers

× So it's hard for me to forget something.

So it's hard for me to forget anything important.

原句中 something 與前文語境(否定/限制意義)搭配不夠精確,通常在否定或限制語境下用 anything 表示“任何重要的事”。建議:在表達否定或難以發生的情況下用 anything,並明確加上 important。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× I would say I tend to remember most The thing is about my study.

I would say I tend to remember most things about my studies.

原句中代詞和名詞搭配混亂(most The thing is about my study),應使用 most things about my studies 表達“我記得大部分與學業有關的事情”。建議:將主語和名詞放在一起,用複數形式 studies 表示學習相關的多件事。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I need to remember my my daily, uh, study schedule such as our lecture time and and assignment deadlines.

I need to remember my daily study schedule, such as lecture times and assignment deadlines.

原句有重複詞(my my,and and)和名詞單複數不一致(lecture time 應為 lecture times)。此外,前置詞使用上應直接列舉例子,不需特殊介詞。建議:刪除重複,將可數名詞用複數形式以匹配多個講座時間和多個截稿日期。

Verb + -ing form

× As I mentioned before, I use A to do list or set phone reminders to remind me some important things.

As I mentioned before, I use a to-do list or set phone reminders to remind me of some important things.

動詞 remind 後面通常接 of + 名詞或直接接人及不定式(remind me to do sth)。原句缺少介詞 of。建議:使用 remind me of something 或 remind me to do something,根據語境選擇。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× For example uh when I need to remember my parents birthday, I will set a reminder and in my phone to pre prepared for the birthday.

For example, when I need to remember my parents' birthdays, I set a reminder in my phone to prepare for their birthdays.

原句中介詞位置錯誤(and in my phone),以及所有格和複數錯誤(parents birthday -> parents' birthdays)。此外,pre prepared 用法錯誤,應為 prepare 或 be prepared。建議:使用 possessive parents' 和複數 birthdays,並把介詞 in my phone 放在 reminder 後,動詞用 prepare 或 be prepared。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

DifferentDissimilar; Distinct; Unusual
ForeignOverseas; Unfamiliar
GoodFine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
HardFirm; Arduous; Difficult; Harsh; Strict
ImportantSignificant; Main; Powerful
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