Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

MMM, Actually, I'm not very good at memorizing times because I'm very busy. For example, when I have a lot of tests, I don't have enough time to review what I learned today before, so I often forget it quickly.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

MMM, yeah, I have forgotten something important before. For example, last year I had a very important exam, but I forgot the date. As a result, I don't I didn't have enough time to prepare knowledge, which made I feel quite stressed and this experience.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

I think in my daily life I need to remember important things like my class schedule and work hours because they help me measure my time efficiency. If I forgot them, I may miss important activities or appointments which would cause problems for.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

If I have an important study or work schedule, I usually write down it because I think it help it. It is helping me to measure my time and improve my time efficiency.

Đánh giá

Tổng

Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.0Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 5.5Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“memorizing times”应为“memorizing things”,且表达不够自然。建议简化句子结构,避免重复和冗余,同时注意时态和词汇的准确使用。

Ví dụ: Actually, I'm not very good at memorizing things because I am often busy. For example, when I have many tests, I don't have enough time to review my lessons, so I tend to forget them quickly.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 65.0

Gợi ý: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清,如“don't I didn't have enough time to prepare knowledge”不符合语法。建议使用正确的时态和句子结构,表达更清晰连贯。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot the date of an important exam last year. Because of that, I didn't have enough time to prepare, which made me feel very stressed.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答较好,但最后一句不完整且表达不够自然。建议补充完整句子,使用更自然的表达方式,并注意时态一致。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember important things like my class schedule and work hours because they help me manage my time efficiently. If I forget them, I might miss important activities or appointments, which could cause problems.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法错误,如“write down it”应为“write it down”,且表达重复。建议简化句子,使用正确的短语和时态,使表达更自然流畅。

Ví dụ: When I have an important study or work schedule, I usually write it down because it helps me manage my time and improve my efficiency.

Ngữ pháp

Past tense issue

× As a result, I don't I didn't have enough time to prepare knowledge, which made I feel quite stressed and this experience.

✓ As a result, I didn't have enough time to prepare, which made me feel quite stressed about this experience.

句子中出现了时态混用,'don't'和'didn't'同时出现,且'prepare knowledge'表达不自然,应改为'prepare'。此外,'made I feel'中的主格'I'应改为宾格'me'。建议注意时态一致性,动词搭配和代词用法。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× As a result, I don't I didn't have enough time to prepare knowledge, which made I feel quite stressed and this experience.

✓ As a result, I didn't have enough time to prepare, which made me feel quite stressed about this experience.

'made I feel'中的'I'应为宾格'me',因为动词'made'后面需要宾语。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× If I forgot them, I may miss important activities or appointments which would cause problems for.

✓ If I forget them, I may miss important activities or appointments which would cause problems.

句尾'cause problems for'缺少宾语,且条件句时态应为一般现在时,'forgot'应改为'forget'。建议注意条件句时态和完整表达。

Past tense issue

× If I forgot them, I may miss important activities or appointments which would cause problems for.

✓ If I forget them, I may miss important activities or appointments which would cause problems.

条件句中表达一般现在时,'forgot'应改为'forget'以符合真实条件句的时态规则。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× If I have an important study or work schedule, I usually write down it because I think it help it.

✓ If I have an important study or work schedule, I usually write it down because I think it helps.

'write down it'的词序错误,应为'write it down';'help it'中动词应加第三人称单数's',且不需要第二个'it'。

Third person singular issue

× If I have an important study or work schedule, I usually write down it because I think it help it.

✓ If I have an important study or work schedule, I usually write it down because I think it helps.

主语是第三人称单数'it',动词'help'应加's'变为'helps'。

Incorrect use of pronouns

× It is helping me to measure my time and improve my time efficiency.

✓ It helps me manage my time and improve my time efficiency.

'It is helping me to measure my time'表达不自然,建议用一般现在时'helps',且'manage my time'更符合语境。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Busy— Occupied; Unavailable; Hectic
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
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