Memory— Part 1 Báo cáo

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Part 1

Giám khảo

Are you good at memorising things?

Thí sinh

I don't think I'm very good at memorizing things because sometimes I forget where I put my belongings. For example, I often misplace my kids or phone, which can be quite frustrating. However, I try to improve by making notes or settings.

Giám khảo

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Thí sinh

Yes, I've forgotten something important before. For example, I once missed my friend's birthday because I was very busy in my study and she felt quite sad about it. After that, I apologized and made sure to celebrate with her.

Giám khảo

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Thí sinh

I need to remember to inform my college about the tasks I plan to complete each day so we can coordinate better. Besides that, I must also remember important things such as anniversaries or meeting Tuesday organization.

Giám khảo

How do you remember important things?

Thí sinh

Sometimes I make notes to record important information because writing things down helps me remember them better. In the evening, I usually review these notes to remind myself of the crucial tasks or events for the next day.

Đánh giá

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Tổng: 6.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 6.5Phát âm: 6.0Ngữ pháp: 6.0Từ vựng: 6.0

Part 1

Are you good at memorising things?

Điểm: 75.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在语法和表达上的小错误,如“misplace my kids”不合适,应为“misplace my keys”。建议注意词汇的准确使用,并避免表达上的歧义。此外,回答较长且略显重复,可以更简洁自然。

Ví dụ: I'm not very good at memorizing things because I often misplace my keys or phone, which is frustrating. To improve, I usually make notes or set reminders on my phone.

Have you ever forgotten something important?

Điểm: 85.0

Gợi ý: 回答结构清晰,内容具体且有逻辑。但可以使用更多连接词使表达更流畅,如“because”、“so”。同时,部分表达如“busy in my study”可改为“busy studying”更自然。

Ví dụ: Yes, I once forgot my friend's birthday because I was very busy studying, so she felt quite sad. After realizing this, I apologized and made sure to celebrate with her later.

What do you need to remember in your daily life?

Điểm: 70.0

Gợi ý: 回答中存在表达不清和语法错误,如“meeting Tuesday organization”不明确。建议使用更准确的词汇和表达,避免模糊。回答也可更简洁自然。

Ví dụ: In my daily life, I need to remember to inform my college about my tasks to coordinate better. I also have to remember important dates like anniversaries and meetings on Tuesdays.

How do you remember important things?

Điểm: 90.0

Gợi ý: 回答自然且结构合理,内容具体。可以尝试使用更多连接词如“because”、“so”来增强连贯性。

Ví dụ: I usually make notes to record important information because writing things down helps me remember better. Then, in the evening, I review these notes so I don't forget crucial tasks or events for the next day.

Ngữ pháp

Singular and plural issue

× I often misplace my kids or phone, which can be quite frustrating.

✓ I often misplace my keys or phone, which can be quite frustrating.

这里的 'kids' 应该是 'keys',因为语境中指的是钥匙,而不是孩子。'kids' 是复数形式,且语义不符,属于单复数和词义错误。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I try to improve by making notes or settings.

✓ I try to improve by making notes or setting reminders.

'settings' 用法不当,应该是 'setting reminders',表示设置提醒。'settings' 是名词复数,语境中需要动词短语。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I was very busy in my study and she felt quite sad about it.

✓ I was very busy with my studies and she felt quite sad about it.

'busy in my study' 用法不正确,应该用 'busy with my studies',表示忙于学习。

Incorrect use of prepositions

× I need to remember to inform my college about the tasks I plan to complete each day so we can coordinate better.

✓ I need to remember to inform my college of the tasks I plan to complete each day so we can coordinate better.

'inform about' 一般用于通知某事,'inform of' 更正式且常用于告知具体事项。这里用 'inform of' 更合适。

Singular and plural issue

× I must also remember important things such as anniversaries or meeting Tuesday organization.

✓ I must also remember important things such as anniversaries or meetings with the Tuesday organization.

'meeting Tuesday organization' 结构不完整,应该是 'meetings with the Tuesday organization','meetings' 复数形式,且加上介词 'with'。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Better— Superior; More advantageous; To a higher standard
Busy— Occupied; Unavailable; Hectic
Good— Fine; Virtuous; Well-behaved; Right; Capable
Important— Significant; Main; Powerful
Sad— Unhappy; Tragic; Unfortunate
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