Snacks— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and clear: state when you eat snacks, give a brief reason, use correct grammar and vocabulary. Keep it within 2–3 sentences and avoid repetition. Use linking words like "because" or "when" correctly, and replace incorrect words (e.g. "snakes" → "snacks").

Ví dụ: I usually eat snacks in the late afternoon or in the evening when I feel unhappy because they cheer me up. For example, if I’ve had a stressful day at work, I’ll have a small treat to relax.

Gợi ý: Answer directly, then give a concise explanation and a contrasting example. Correct grammar (use subject-verb agreement, articles) and precise vocabulary ("too many snacks" not "too much snakes"). Use a linking word like "however" to show contrast.

Ví dụ: I don’t think eating a lot of snacks is healthy because too many sugary or salty snacks can raise blood pressure and blood sugar. However, I sometimes have a small snack when I feel anxious because it helps me calm down.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence about past habit, then support with a specific example and correct past tense forms. Use linking words like "when" and avoid repeating phrases. Use correct plural/singular forms and articles.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often ate snacks when I was young. For example, when I was in primary school I used to buy sweets after class, especially sugary treats, because many children enjoyed them.

Gợi ý: Give a short topic sentence naming preferred snacks, then add a specific example and reason. Use correct word forms ("mainly" not "primary type"; "sweets" or "candies" instead of "some sugar"). Keep sentences concise and use present tense for habits.

Ví dụ: I like many kinds of snacks, but mainly desserts such as chocolate ice cream and cakes. I often choose these because sweet treats lift my mood when I feel anxious or down.

× 'Well, I wish holiday is next when I feel unhappiness because snakes has a magic can recover my bad emotions.'

✓ 'Well, I wish the holiday would come next when I feel unhappy because snacks have a magic way of improving my bad emotions.'

'There be' issue and other errors: The original sentence misuses 'is' with 'holiday' in a wish context; use 'would come' to express desire about the timing. Also 'unhappiness' should be the adjective 'unhappy' after 'feel'. "Snakes" is a misspelling of 'snacks' and is plural so use 'have' not 'has'; the phrase "has a magic can recover" is ungrammatical—use 'have a magic way of improving' or 'seem to magically improve'. Suggestion: use correct nouns and structures for wishes (would + verb), correct adjective after 'feel', plural agreement, and clearer idiomatic phrasing.'

× 'So I think it's, uh, magic.'

✓ 'So I think it's, uh, magical.'

'Third person singular issue': The speaker used the noun 'magic' where the adjective 'magical' is required to modify 'it'. Use the adjectival form to describe a thing's quality. Also contraction 'it's' correctly agrees with singular subject.'

× 'Well I don't think it's healthy because it too much snakes were leading to high blood pressure or high blood sugar.'

✓ 'Well I don't think it's healthy because eating too many snacks leads to high blood pressure or high blood sugar.'

'Present tense issue': The original mixes tenses and forms: 'it too much snacks were leading' is ungrammatical. Use the gerund 'eating' to indicate the action, 'too many snacks' for plural quantifier, and present simple 'leads' for general truths. Ensure subject-verb agreement and correct quantifier usage.'

× 'Well I don't think it's healthy because it too much snakes were leading to high blood pressure or high blood sugar.'

✓ 'Well I don't think it's healthy because eating too many snacks leads to high blood pressure or high blood sugar.'

'Incorrect use of quantifiers': 'too much' is used for uncountable nouns; 'snacks' is countable so use 'too many'. Combine with 'eating' to show the action. This fixes the quantifier error and improves meaning.'

× 'But in sometimes when I feel anxiety or unhappy I will eat some snacks it made me feel happy.'

✓ 'But sometimes when I feel anxious or unhappy I eat some snacks and they make me feel happy.'

'Past tense issue': The original mixes future/modal 'will' with past 'made'. For habitual reactions, use present simple: 'I eat' and 'they make'. Also 'in sometimes' is incorrect — use 'sometimes'; 'feel anxiety' should be 'feel anxious' (adjective).'},{

× 'Well, I did often eat snacks when I was young.'

✓ 'Well, I often ate snacks when I was young.'

'Past tense issue': Use simple past 'ate' for habitual past actions and place adverb 'often' in normal position before the main verb. 'Did often eat' is unnecessary and awkward; use 'often ate.'

× 'I remember quite well that when I when I studied in primary school, I usually buy some snacks after school and I especially sugars because every child like eat sugar.'

✓ 'I remember quite well that when I studied in primary school, I usually bought some snacks after school and I especially liked sweets because every child likes to eat sweets.'

'Present tense issue' and other errors: The sentence mixes present and past. Use past 'studied' and 'bought' for past habitual actions. 'Especially sugars' is unidiomatic; use 'especially liked sweets'. 'Every child like eat sugar' has subject-verb agreement and verb form errors: use 'every child likes to eat sweets.' Ensure consistent tense and correct verb forms.'

× 'Well I like all kinds of snacks, primary type is dessert, for example the chocolate ice cream or some sugar because this dessert can make me feel happy when I was anxiety or feel down.'

✓ 'Well, I like all kinds of snacks. The main type I like is dessert, for example chocolate ice cream or sweets because these desserts can make me feel happy when I am anxious or feeling down.'

'Incorrect use of adjectives/adverbs' and tense issues: 'primary type' is better as 'main type'. 'Some sugar' is incorrect—use 'sweets'. Ensure noun number agreement: 'this dessert' -> 'these desserts' or 'a dessert'. Use present 'I am anxious' for general statements and 'feeling down' for adjective phrase. Break into two sentences for clarity.'