Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be direct and concise. Start with a clear topic sentence (e.g., "Yes, I love flowers."), then add one or two specific supporting details. Use correct grammar and avoid filler words like "you know." Also use accurate vocabulary (e.g., "planting" and "balcony/garden" instead of "planning" and "vulgarity"). Keep it to maximum 3–4 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers. They are a lovely way to show affection to partners and family. In my free time I enjoy planting flowers on my balcony and tending to them each weekend.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use correct verb forms and clearer chronology. Replace fillers and unclear phrases. Provide one specific example (types of flowers, what she taught you) and link ideas with a connector (e.g., "because" or "so"). Keep it within 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes — my mother loves flowers and taught me how to plant and care for them. Because of her I often visit the garden after school, where we grow roses and sunflowers together.

Gợi ý: Be specific about location and correct nouns. Replace vague words ("flavors", "shot of florist knit up") with clear vocabulary ("flower beds", "flower shops"). Use present simple and reduce fillers. Provide one clear supporting detail about how you use these places.

Ví dụ: Yes, I live near a park that has many flower beds and several small florists. When we want a new plant, we usually buy it from a nearby shop and bring it home to plant.

Gợi ý: Give a clear yes/no answer and then explain simply how and why. Use correct verbs and vocabulary (e.g., "I use social media apps to share photos"). Avoid repetition and keep to 2–3 sentences with one specific example (which app or what you post).

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph flowers and post them on social media. I usually upload pictures to Instagram and caption them with where I found the flowers or the type of flower.

Gợi ý: Answer directly and use precise examples of occasions (Valentine's Day, birthdays, funerals). Use clearer noun phrases and avoid hesitations. Explain briefly who sends flowers and for what reason. Keep to 2–3 sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, people commonly send flowers for special occasions such as Valentine’s Day, birthdays and funerals. Couples often give bouquets on Valentine’s Day, while families send flowers to express sympathy at funerals.

× Yes, of course, you know what flowers is the things that you can show your love to you know your partners, your girlfriends are anyways your parents too, and it is my favorite things to do when I was just a free time.

✓ Yes, of course. Flowers are things that you can use to show love to your partners, girlfriends, or parents, and arranging flowers was my favorite thing to do in my free time.

The sentence has multiple pronoun and noun reference problems: 'flowers is' needs plural verb agreement (use 'are') so this is also subject-verb agreement but primarily incorrect pronoun/noun usage. 'you can show your love to you know your partners' misuses 'to' with 'show love' and repeats 'you know' unnecessarily. 'your girlfriends are anyways your parents too' is unclear pronoun reference — corrected to 'partners, girlfriends, or parents.' Tense for the hobby should be past simple for a past habit: 'was my favorite thing to do in my free time.' Suggestion: simplify clauses, use correct plural verb forms, and keep pronoun references clear.

× Well, definitely, that was my mom, you know, who will teach me to planting flowers in her garden and she absolutely care a lot about, you know, them.

✓ Well, definitely it was my mom who taught me to plant flowers in her garden, and she absolutely cared a lot about them.

Problems: tense and pronoun use. 'that was my mom' should be 'it was my mom'; 'will teach me to planting' mixes future/infinitive with gerund — correct is past simple 'taught me to plant' for a past action. 'she absolutely care' needs past tense and subject-verb agreement: 'cared.' Keep pronouns consistent: 'them' refers to flowers and is fine. Suggestion: use past simple for past actions and correct infinitive vs gerund.

× And every time I show her when I just come back to school, that was at the garden and with, you know, colorful flowers, kind of like rose and sunflower.

✓ Every time I returned from school, she was in the garden with colorful flowers such as roses and sunflowers.

Errors include awkward adverbial phrase and incorrect noun forms: 'every time I show her when I just come back to school' mixes present and past — use past 'returned.' 'that was at the garden' is awkward; use 'she was in the garden.' 'rose and sunflower' need plural forms 'roses and sunflowers.' Suggestion: maintain consistent tense and use correct plural nouns and clearer adjective placement.

× Well, yes, you know, I'm living near a parks, which was have a lot of beautiful flavors, you know, and which was have, I mean, a shot of florist knit up too.

✓ Well, yes, I live near a park that has a lot of beautiful flowers, and there is also a small florist shop nearby.

Multiple article and noun errors: 'near a parks' mixes singular article with plural noun — use 'a park' or 'parks' without 'a.' 'which was have' is ungrammatical; use 'that has.' 'beautiful flavors' is wrong word choice — should be 'beautiful flowers.' 'a shot of florist knit up' is unintelligible; corrected to 'a small florist shop nearby.' Suggestion: use correct articles with singular/plural nouns and choose appropriate vocabulary.

× And when we made just make a new, you know, plant, we just come to this and, you know, take a little bit and then come back.

✓ When we planted a new plant, we would go there, take a few, and then come back.

Tense and aspect problems: 'made just make' mixes tenses; for planting a new plant use past simple 'planted' or habitual past 'we would plant.' 'we just come to this' should be past 'we would go there.' 'take a little bit' should be 'take a few (cuttings/flowers).' Suggestion: choose consistent tense for past habits (simple past or 'would' for habitual actions) and use precise nouns.

× Well, absolutely, you know what, I'm used to use the apps which come lockets to share, you know, every single moment in my life.

✓ Well, absolutely. I used to use apps that come with lockets to share every single moment of my life.

Error: incorrect expression 'I'm used to use' — should be 'I used to use' (past habitual) or 'I am used to using' (be accustomed to + gerund). The phrase 'apps which come lockets' is unclear — corrected to 'apps that come with lockets.' Suggestion: distinguish between 'used to + base verb' for past habits and 'be used to + -ing' for being accustomed to something.

× So you know, every time I'm just uploaded to, you know, save the trick and any times in day I'm just a lot, you know, random flowers on that page.

✓ So I often upload random photos of flowers to that page every day.

Multiple tense and form errors: 'I'm just uploaded to' mixes present and past participle — use simple present 'I upload' or present habit 'I often upload.' 'save the trick' is unclear; likely 'share the pictures' corrected to 'upload random photos of flowers.' 'any times in day I'm just a lot' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'every day' and 'often.' Suggestion: use simple present for habitual actions and concise expressions.

× Well, yes, of course, especially in some special specific as events, kind of like Valentine.

✓ Well, yes, of course, especially on special occasions, like Valentine's Day.

Article and noun usage: 'in some special specific as events' is incorrect — use 'on special occasions.' 'Valentine' should be 'Valentine's Day.' Also use preposition 'on' for days/occasions. Suggestion: learn fixed expressions 'on special occasions' and proper names like 'Valentine's Day.'

× Some couples love to, you know, buy the artist some flowers and you know, including with some special gift or you know, the heart, the sweetheart that was the ways that they share, you know, their love to the.

✓ Some couples like to buy flowers, often with a special gift for their sweetheart; it is one of the ways they express their love.

Pronoun and sentence-structure errors: 'buy the artist some flowers' is incorrect word choice — use 'buy flowers.' 'including with some special gift' is ungrammatical; 'often with a special gift' is better. 'the heart, the sweetheart that was the ways that they share, you know, their love to the.' is confusing; rephrased to 'for their sweetheart; it is one of the ways they express their love.' Suggestion: simplify sentence structure, use correct collocations like 'express their love' and accurate noun phrases.