Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you love flowers?
Thí sinh
Yeah, I like flowers because I very like rosy.
Giám khảo
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Thí sinh
Yes, I know sometimes who loves flowers.
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Thí sinh
Now I live in small county care.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Yes, I usually take photos for flowers.
Giám khảo
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Thí sinh
Yes, for example in holiday send flowers.
Do you love flowers?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答需要更自然、语法正确并直接回应问题。应以主题句开头,说明喜欢或不喜欢,然后用一到两句具体理由或例子支持。避免语法错误(如“I very like”应为“I really like”或“I love”),并用恰当词汇描述花(如“roses”而非“rosy”)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers. I especially like roses because of their fragrance and vibrant colors, and they always brighten up my room.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答不清晰且语法错误。应直接说出你是否认识这样的人,并给出具体人物或例子说明(例如朋友或家人),并解释为什么他们喜欢花。使用连词使句子连贯。
Ví dụ: Yes, my mother loves flowers; she grows many kinds in our garden because she finds gardening relaxing and enjoys the variety of colors.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答没有直接回应问题且语法错误。应先说明是否有许多花,然后解释原因并给出具体例子(如花园、公园或市场)。使用正确短语表达地点(例如“a small county town”或“a small county”)。
Ví dụ: I live in a small county town, and there are quite a few flowers around, especially in the public parks and private gardens.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 回答简洁且基本正确,但可更自然并增加细节以展现语言能力。建议说明拍摄频率、场合或目的,并用连词丰富句子。注意介词用法(通常说 “take photos of flowers”。)。
Ví dụ: Yes, I usually take photos of flowers when I visit parks or markets, because I enjoy capturing their colors and sharing the pictures on social media.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Điểm: 55.0Gợi ý: 回答基本可理解,但需更自然并提供具体场合和文化背景。例如说明哪些节日或场合常送花,并用连词连接句子以提高连贯性。注意复数和冠词的使用(e.g. “on holidays people send flowers”)。
Ví dụ: Yes, people often send flowers on special occasions, for example during holidays like New Year and Mother's Day, or to celebrate weddings and birthdays.
× Yeah, I like flowers because I very like rosy.
✓ Yeah, I like flowers because I really like roses.
问题类型接近“13: Incorrect use of adjectives or adverbs”与“20: Incorrect adverb placement”。原句中“very like”是错误用法,英语中“like”不能直接与“very”连用来表示“非常喜欢”;应使用副词“really”或“very much”放在动词后或用“really”放在动词前。另外“rosy”是形容词,表示“玫瑰色的、红润的”,此处应使用名词“roses(玫瑰)”。建议:把“very like”改为“really like”或“like ... very much”,把“rosy”改为复数名词“roses”。(例如:“I really like roses.”)
× Yes, I know sometimes who loves flowers.
✓ Yes, I know some people who love flowers.
问题类型对应“26: Sentence structure errors”和“1: Singular and plural issue”。原句语序与用词混乱。“sometimes”位置不当且不合句意,应使用“some people”表示“有些人”。此外“who loves”中主语为“people”应与动词保持复数形式“love”。建议:使用“some people who love flowers”。
× Now I live in small county care.
✓ Now I live in a small county town.
问题类型对应“22: Article errors”和“26: Sentence structure errors”。原句缺少不定冠词,且“small county care”词序和词汇不正确。“county”表示县,常与“town”搭配表达“县城”或“小县城”。应在可数名词前加不定冠词“a”。建议:改为“a small county town”或“a small town in the county”。
× Yes, I usually take photos for flowers.
✓ Yes, I usually take photos of flowers.
问题类型对应“11: Incorrect use of prepositions”。固定搭配是“take photos of (something)”表示“拍...的照片”。“take photos for flowers”是不自然的介词使用。建议:使用“take photos of flowers”。
× Yes, for example in holiday send flowers.
✓ Yes, for example, people send flowers on holidays.
问题类型对应“26: Sentence structure errors”和“11: Incorrect use of prepositions”。原句缺少主语和正确的介词短语。“in holiday”应为复数或特定时态的“on holidays”或“on a holiday”,“send flowers”需要明确主语(people/they)。建议:补上主语并改为“on holidays”或“on special holidays/occasions”。