Part 1
Giám khảo
Do you love flowers?
Thí sinh
Definitely, I'm really into flowers and there are many flowers planted in my garden which I will water them every day.
Giám khảo
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Thí sinh
Is very interesting that my grandma loves flowers too. She have many growing in the garden and she waters them every day because she enjoys watching them bloom.
Giám khảo
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Thí sinh
Of course there are lots of flowers where I live. I especially like roses and ovens when the afternoon Browning them and arranging bouquets for the house.
Giám khảo
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Thí sinh
Yes, I inclined to take photos of flowers in my daily life. It's rarely in the afternoons. I also enjoy watering them and arranging small bouquets for the house.
Giám khảo
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Thí sinh
Sorry, I'm not exactly know it, but I often send flowers to others in order to show respect, which is a very good manner.
Do you love flowers?
Điểm: 72.0Gợi ý: 回答自然但存在语法和冗长问题。首先句子中过长且有重复信息("there are many flowers planted in my garden which I will water them every day"),代词使用不当(which指代不清且与宾语重复)。建议使用更简洁清晰的句子,注意时态和代词,避免重复。可把主题句和细节分成两句,用连接词衔接。
Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers. I have many in my garden and I water them every day, especially in the morning to keep them healthy.
Do you know anyone who loves flowers?
Điểm: 66.0Gợi ý: 语法错误明显(主语-谓语不一致,缺主语),表达略不自然('Is very interesting'应为 'It's' 或者更自然的回应)。建议先直接回答,再补充细节,注意主谓一致和完整句子,以及用连接词解释原因。
Ví dụ: Yes, my grandmother loves flowers. She grows many varieties in her garden and waters them every day because she enjoys watching them bloom.
Are there a lot of flowers where you live?
Điểm: 52.0Gợi ý: 内容含混且存在词汇错误('ovens', 'Browning' 用词不当,语法和拼写问题严重影响意思)。建议先说总体情况,再具体说明喜欢的花和常做的事情,使用正确词汇与时态。避免拼写错误并把动词用在正确的位置。
Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flowers around where I live. I especially like roses, and in the afternoons I enjoy pruning them and arranging bouquets for the house.
Do you take photos of flowers in your daily life?
Điểm: 60.0Gợi ý: 句子结构和词汇选择不自然('I inclined to' 不正确,'It's rarely in the afternoons' 含义不清)。建议使用正确短语(e.g. 'I tend to'),并明确频率和时间表达,保持句子简洁。
Ví dụ: Yes, I often take photos of flowers, usually in the afternoons when the light is soft. I also enjoy watering them and arranging small bouquets for the house.
Do people in your country often send flowers to others?
Điểm: 58.0Gợi ý: 开头不需要道歉,且语法错误('I'm not exactly know it' 应为 'I don't know exactly')。回答应先表明自己不确定,再说明个人做法并给出简短原因,使用恰当连接词。
Ví dụ: I'm not sure about the whole country, but I often send flowers to others to show respect because it is considered polite in many situations.
× Definitely, I'm really into flowers and there are many flowers planted in my garden which I will water them every day.
✓ Definitely, I'm really into flowers and there are many flowers planted in my garden which I will water every day.
原句中的错误涉及到代词重复而非定冠词问题:'which I will water them every day' 中出现了关系代词 which 和宾格代词 them 的重复,导致句子结构错误。应删除其中一个,以避免重复。建议改为:'...in my garden which I water every day.' 或使用逗号和 'and I water them every day.'(注意:这里不涉及定冠词的使用错误)。
× Is very interesting that my grandma loves flowers too.
✓ It's very interesting that my grandma loves flowers too.
句子缺少主语 'It',导致结构不完整并且主谓不一致。补上虚主语 'It' 可使句子完整:'It's very interesting that...'。在中文中:句子缺主语,需加上形式主语 'It' 来引导。
× She have many growing in the garden and she waters them every day because she enjoys watching them bloom.
✓ She has many growing in the garden and she waters them every day because she enjoys watching them bloom.
主语 'She' 是第三人称单数,动词应使用第三人称单数形式 'has',而不是 'have'。因此需改为 'She has many...'. 中文解释:动词与主语人称数不一致,第三人称单数动词要加 -s。
× I especially like roses and ovens when the afternoon Browning them and arranging bouquets for the house.
✓ I especially like roses and often in the afternoons I enjoy trimming them and arranging bouquets for the house.
原句存在多个问题:'ovens' 不合上下文,应为 'often'(表示频率);'Browning' 拼写和词义不当,应该为 'trimming' 或 'browsing' 但结合语境更可能是 'trimming'(修剪);大小写错误及副词位置混乱。修正为 'often in the afternoons I enjoy trimming them...' 更符合语义和语法。中文解释:原句用词和副词位置错误,需用正确副词(often)和动词(trimming)并调整词序。
× Yes, I inclined to take photos of flowers in my daily life. It's rarely in the afternoons. I also enjoy watering them and arranging small bouquets for the house.
✓ Yes, I'm inclined to take photos of flowers in my daily life. It's usually in the afternoons. I also enjoy watering them and arranging small bouquets for the house.
原句 'I inclined to' 缺少系动词,应为 'I'm inclined to' 表示倾向;'It's rarely in the afternoons' 用法不当,rarely 表示频率副词,搭配 'It's' 不自然,应为 'It's usually in the afternoons' 或 'I rarely do it in the afternoons',根据语境更可能是 'usually'。中文解释:缺少系动词,频率副词用法不当,应使用 'I'm inclined to' 和合适的频率副词(如 usually)。
× Sorry, I'm not exactly know it, but I often send flowers to others in order to show respect, which is a very good manner.
✓ Sorry, I don't exactly know, but I often send flowers to others in order to show respect, which is very polite.
原句 'I'm not exactly know it' 语法错误,应使用助动词 'do' 构成否定:'I don't exactly know'。另外 'which is a very good manner' 用法不自然,manner 表示方式,此处应使用形容词 'polite' 描述行为:'which is very polite'。中文解释:否定句需使用助动词 'do',且习惯表达为 'very polite' 而非 'a very good manner'。