Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Be more concise and organize your answer with a clear topic sentence, one or two specific supporting details, and fewer hesitations. Correct grammar (e.g., "grow up" → "grow", "there's a several season" → "there are several seasons") and avoid repetition. Use linking words (for example, "because," "for instance") to make the answer coherent and keep it under five sentences.

Ví dụ: I love flowers, but I don't keep plants at home because I don't have time to care for them. However, I enjoy visiting flower gardens in Japan; for instance, I once visited Nara during the cherry blossom season where a large sakura garden made a lasting impression on me.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear topic sentence and give specific, well-linked details. Fix tense and grammar (e.g., "every month" not "in every month", "I water them regularly", "I like wildflowers"). Remove filler words and keep to a maximum of five sentences. Add a brief reason or example to enrich the answer.

Ví dụ: Yes — I do. I buy a fresh bouquet every month after I receive my salary and try different types of flowers. I usually keep each bouquet for two to three weeks and water them regularly. I also like wildflowers and often photograph any unusual blooms to keep as memories.

Gợi ý: Provide a concise direct answer, then add one or two specific supporting details and a linking phrase. Correct grammar (e.g., "I live in an apartment", "I don't have enough space", "I tried to plant seeds but failed") and reduce hesitations. Limit to four sentences for clarity.

Ví dụ: No, there aren't many flowers where I live because I live in an apartment and don't have enough space to plant. I only have a tiny balcony and when I once tried sowing seeds they didn't grow. Hopefully, when I buy a house with a garden I will create a flower garden because I love flowers.

Gợi ý: Answer directly then give one or two specific examples. Remove fillers and correct vocabulary (e.g., "especially", "wildflowers", "I post them as stories on Instagram"). Keep tenses consistent and clarify references (e.g., name the season correctly). Stay within five sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, I often photograph flowers, especially unusual wildflowers, and post them as stories on Instagram. I also visit seasonal flower spots in Japan; for example, I planned to see the nemophila season last May but missed it because I was busy with work, and I hope to go next year.

Gợi ý: Start with a clear general statement, then give two specific examples using linking words. Fix grammar (e.g., "people often give bouquets on special occasions", "bride-to-be events", "girls especially like receiving flowers"). Avoid vague language and filler words. Keep the answer to three or four sentences.

Ví dụ: Yes, people in my country often give flower bouquets on special occasions. For example, flowers are common gifts for birthdays, anniversaries, and bridal showers. Although fresh flowers are relatively expensive here, many people still buy them because they make meaningful gifts.

× Yes, so much. I'm in love with flowers, but I don't keep a plant at home because I don't have enough time to care for them.

✓ Yes, very much. I'm in love with flowers, but I don't keep plants at home because I don't have enough time to care for them.

The sentence mixes singular and plural with 'a plant' then 'them'. Change to 'plants' to match plural pronoun 'them' and generalize the statement. Also 'so much' is informal; 'very much' is clearer in this context.

× Flowers need a very good care to grow up grow up.

✓ Flowers need very good care to grow.

Use the noun phrase 'care' without article 'a' and remove the redundant 'grow up grow up'. 'Grow' is sufficient; 'grow up' is used for people/animals growing to adulthood, not flowers.

× But I enjoy visiting flower gardens in Japan there's a several season with a very special flowers special.

✓ But I enjoy visiting flower gardens in Japan; there are several seasons with very special flowers.

Run-on sentence missing connector or punctuation. Use a semicolon or period and correct 'there's' to 'there are' for plural 'seasons', remove extra 'a' before 'several', and 'very special flowers' is the correct noun phrase.

× Lee uh, cherry blossom season, uh, last time I visited to Nara, uh, there's a very big, uh, sakura garden.

✓ Like, uh, the cherry blossom season. Last time I visited Nara, there was a very big sakura garden.

'Lee' is likely 'Like'. Remove filler 'to' after 'visited' (visit someone/place, not visit to). Use past tense 'there was' for a past event. Remove extra commas.

× I really enjoyed that moment.

✓ I really enjoyed that moment.

Sentence is correct; past tense 'enjoyed' matches the past event. No change needed.

× Yes, it's me.

✓ Yes, it's me.

Acceptable in spoken English; no grammatical change required. Pronoun usage is fine.

× It's a habit of mine to buy a new fresh flower bouquet in every month after I get my salary.

✓ It's a habit of mine to buy a fresh bouquet of flowers every month after I get my salary.

Use 'a fresh bouquet of flowers' instead of 'new fresh flower bouquet'. 'Every month' does not need 'in'. Article usage improved and word order corrected.

× I try different types of flowers.

✓ I try different types of flowers.

Sentence is acceptable; present simple 'try' describes habitual action, so no change needed.

× Uh, I keep them for two to three weeks, uh, watering regularly.

✓ I keep them for two to three weeks, watering them regularly.

Place 'watering them regularly' after the object to make the participle clause clearly refer to 'them' and avoid comma splicing.

× Not only that, but also I liked wildflower.

✓ Not only that, but I also like wildflowers.

Use present tense 'like' to match habitual preference. 'Wildflowers' should be plural and 'I also' is the correct word order.

× Also, when I saw a something unusual, I immediately take a photo and keep. Memory.

✓ Also, when I see something unusual, I immediately take a photo and keep it as a memory.

Use present tense 'see' for general habit, remove extra 'a' before 'something', add object 'it' and phrase 'as a memory'. Combine fragments into one sentence.

× Actually no, as I mentioned, uh, I don't have enough time to uh, care for them.

✓ Actually no. As I mentioned, I don't have enough time to care for plants.

Split into two sentences for clarity; replace 'them' with 'plants' for explicit reference. Remove filler 'uh'.

× I don't keep uh, plants. Umm, and also I live in apartment, I don't enough space to uh, plant a flower.

✓ I don't keep plants. Also, I live in an apartment and don't have enough space to plant flowers.

Add the article 'an' before 'apartment', include 'have' in 'don't have enough space', and use plural 'flowers' for general statement.

× I only have a tiny balcony. I once I try to plant some seeds but I failed.

✓ I only have a tiny balcony. Once I tried to plant some seeds, but I failed.

Use past tense 'tried' to describe a past attempt. Remove extra 'I' after 'Once' and add comma before 'but'.

× But I wish one day, uh, when, when I buy a house with a garden, I definitely, uh, make a flower garden because I love flowers.

✓ But I hope that one day when I buy a house with a garden, I will definitely make a flower garden because I love flowers.

Use 'hope' and future 'will make' to indicate intention. Remove repeated 'when' and fillers.

× Yes, I like taking photos of flower, specially unusual ones.

✓ Yes, I like taking photos of flowers, especially unusual ones.

Use plural 'flowers' for general reference and correct spelling 'especially'.

× When I spot area uh, wildflower, I immediately take a photo and post as a story on Instagram.

✓ When I spot a wildflower in an area, I immediately take a photo and post it as a story on Instagram.

Add article 'a' before 'wildflower', place 'in an area' correctly, and include object 'it' for 'post it as a story'.

× I often do that umm and also umm.

✓ I often do that.

Remove fillers and trailing conjunctions; present simple 'often do' correctly describes habitual action.

× I visited several seasonal flowers spots in Japan, for example.

✓ I visited several seasonal flower spots in Japan, for example.

Use 'flower spots' as the noun phrase; 'seasonal' describes 'flower spots'. Past tense 'visited' is appropriate for past experiences.

× I missed pneumopelia season in last May because.

✓ I missed the Nemophila season last May because...

Use 'the' before a specific season, remove 'in' before 'last May', correct the flower name to 'Nemophila' (if intended), and complete the sentence with reason; leave an ellipsis to indicate continuation.

× I had uh, several works on that this, but I hope to go next time I definitely go.

✓ I had several pieces of work at that time, but I hope to go next time; I will definitely go.

Use past tense 'had' is fine; change 'several works' to 'several pieces of work' or 'a lot of work', and use future 'will definitely go' for intention. Reorder 'at that time'.

× Yes, in my country, people uh, often bring a flower bouquet to their special one in their special occasion.

✓ Yes, in my country, people often bring a bouquet of flowers to their special person on special occasions.

Use 'a bouquet of flowers' and 'special person' rather than 'special one'; use 'on special occasions' preposition 'on' and plural 'occasions' for generality.

× For example, when someone's birthday or bride to be event or someone's anniversary.

✓ For example, for someone's birthday, at a bridal shower, or on someone's anniversary.

Use appropriate prepositions and correct noun 'bridal shower' or 'bride-to-be event'. Provide parallel structure with commas.

× Uh, especially girls like to receiving flowers, including me.

✓ Especially girls like to receive flowers, including me.

Use the base verb 'receive' after 'like to', not the gerund 'receiving'.

× Uh, but in my country, fresh flowers are quite. Expensive, but it's worth to buy or receiving as a gift.

✓ In my country, fresh flowers are quite expensive, but they're worth buying or receiving as a gift.

Fix sentence split and punctuation. Use 'worth buying' (verb + -ing) and 'receiving' as noun; 'it's worth to buy' is incorrect. Use contraction 'they're' or 'they are' for subject agreement.