Flowers— Part 1 Báo cáo

Gợi ý: Clarify and correct grammar, reduce repetition, and use linking words to make the answer coherent. Start with a clear topic sentence, then give two brief reasons using linking phrases. Correct word choice (followers → flowers, “is” → “are”, “sure full” → “cheerful”).

Ví dụ: Yes, I love flowers. I especially like red ones because they feel romantic, and yellow ones because they look cheerful and make me feel optimistic.

Gợi ý: This answer is generally clear and relevant. Improve coherence by using a linking word to connect reasons and avoid slight redundancy. Add a brief specific example to enrich the response.

Ví dụ: Yes, my boyfriend does. For example, he often brings roses when I am upset to cheer me up, and he also gives me flowers on birthdays because he knows they make me happy.

Gợi ý: Good concise answer with relevant detail. To improve further, add a linking word and a brief example or consequence to make it more specific (e.g., mention a street or effect on atmosphere).

Ví dụ: Yes, there are many flower shops in my neighborhood, so the streets always look cheerful and colourful, especially near the market on weekends.

Gợi ý: Make the sentence structure more natural and avoid repetition. Use linking words to explain cause and give a short concrete example of when you take photos.

Ví dụ: Yes, I do. Whenever I see attractive flowers, I usually take photos of them because they lift my mood; for instance, I often photograph blossoms in the park during my morning walks.

Gợi ý: Correct grammar and word order, remove redundancy, and use linking words for clarity. Offer a brief cultural detail or example to support the statement.

Ví dụ: Yes, people often send flowers. In my country flowers are the first choice for celebrations and apologies, for example many people send bouquets on birthdays and anniversaries.

× I love all kind of flowers, especially red and yellow ones.

✓ I love all kinds of flowers, especially red and yellow ones.

The noun 'kind' should be plural 'kinds' when referring to multiple types. Use 'all kinds of' to indicate variety. Suggestion: use 'kinds' whenever you mean more than one type.

× Red followers. Is a romantic while yellow ones uh sure full and make me optimistic.

✓ Red flowers are romantic, while yellow ones are cheerful and make me optimistic.

Original has several issues: 'followers' is a misspelling of 'flowers'; sentence fragments and missing verb 'are'; 'romantic' should describe 'red flowers' with verb 'are'; 'sure full' is incorrect — likely 'cheerful'. Rephrase into a single sentence with correct subject-verb agreement and appropriate adjectives. Suggestion: combine clauses with 'while' and ensure each noun has a verb.

× Yes, my boyfriend does. He always gives me flowers to cheer me up when I am upset or ask gifts on my special occasions because he knows they make me happy.

✓ Yes, my boyfriend does. He always gives me flowers to cheer me up when I am upset or asks for gifts on my special occasions because he knows they make me happy.

The clause 'or ask gifts' conflicts with subject 'he' and should use third person singular form 'asks' and include preposition 'for' to be idiomatic: 'asks for gifts'. Suggestion: match verb forms to the subject and include necessary prepositions.

× Yes, in my neighborhood there are a lot of flower shops which make the area cheerful and colourful.

✓ Yes, in my neighborhood there are a lot of flower shops that make the area cheerful and colourful.

This sentence is mostly correct but 'which' is used for non-defining clauses; here a defining relative clause is more natural with 'that'. Alternatively, keep 'which' but add a comma. Suggestion: use 'that' for essential information or add a comma before 'which' if non-essential.

× Whenever I see flowers I can't walk away without taking photo to them or with them because they make me happy and cheerful and they trigger me to take this photo.

✓ Whenever I see flowers I can't walk away without taking photos of them or with them because they make me happy and cheerful and they prompt me to take pictures.

Problems: 'taking photo to them' is incorrect preposition; use 'taking photos of them'. 'Taking photo' should be plural 'photos' or 'a photo' with article. 'Trigger me to take' is unnatural; use 'prompt me to take'. Also 'taking pictures' is more natural than 'taking this photo'. Suggestion: use 'photos of' for photographing subjects, pluralize when unspecified, and replace 'trigger' with 'prompt' or 'inspire'.

× Yes, usually people they do because the first gift that we think about it when we want to send gifts, it is flowers, the first option.

✓ Yes, usually people do, because the first gift we think about when we want to send presents is flowers; it is the first option.

Redundant pronoun 'they' after 'people' is unnecessary. Remove 'it' after 'think about'. Use 'presents' or 'gifts' consistently. Reorder for clarity: 'the first gift we think about when we want to send presents is flowers.' Suggestion: avoid redundant pronouns and extra 'it', simplify clause order for clarity.