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Part 1

Giám khảo

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

Thí sinh

Yes, it's easy for me to remember people's names. I can remember people's names in a very short time.

Giám khảo

How do you remember people's names?

Thí sinh

Well, I usually remember people's names by connecting their names with their voices or faces or their. Looking or shirts.

Giám khảo

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

Thí sinh

Actually, it depends on whether we've met for a long time or just we just get to know each other. So if it's the first case, it would be a little upset. Upset if the if it's the latter.

Giám khảo

Do you often forget people's names?

Thí sinh

That's not the case for me, unless we haven't keep in touch for over years. In that case it will be a problem to record the name name.

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Tổng: 5.0Trôi chảy và mạch lạc: 5.0Phát âm: 5.0Ngữ pháp: 5.0Từ vựng: 5.0

Part 1

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

Điểm: 78.0

Gợi ý: 回答直接、切题,但第二句重复了“remember people's names”,没有增加新的信息。可以补充一个具体原因或方法,并用连接词自然展开,例如说明你会把名字和初次见面的场景联系起来。

Ví dụ: Yes, I’m usually quite good at remembering people’s names. I tend to remember them after hearing them a couple of times, especially if I’ve had a proper conversation with the person.

How do you remember people's names?

Điểm: 55.0

Gợi ý: 你提到了把名字与声音、长相或衣服联系起来,这是相关的记忆方法。不过句子中“or their. Looking or shirts”不完整且不自然。建议整理成清晰的并列结构,并补充一个具体例子。

Ví dụ: I usually associate a person’s name with something distinctive about them, such as their face, voice, or clothing. For example, if someone has a bright red jacket, I might connect that image with their name.

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

Điểm: 48.0

Gợi ý: 你尝试根据彼此认识的时间来区分感受,思路是合理的,但表达中有重复和语法错误(如“just we just”),而且“upset if the latter”让意思不够清楚。建议明确说明两种情况分别对应什么感受,并用“if”句表达完整。

Ví dụ: It depends on how well I know the person. If we’ve known each other for a long time, I feel a little hurt when they forget my name. But if we’ve only just met, I don’t really mind.

Do you often forget people's names?

Điểm: 54.0

Gợi ý: 你直接回答了问题,也补充了可能忘记名字的情况。不过“haven't keep in touch”应改为“haven't kept in touch”,“for over years”表达不自然;“record the name”也不适合表达“记住名字”。建议使用“remember”并说明长时间不联系会带来什么影响。

Ví dụ: I don’t often forget people’s names. However, if I haven’t kept in touch with someone for several years, I might struggle to remember their name. Seeing them again usually helps me recall it.

Ngữ pháp

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Well, I usually remember people's names by connecting their names with their voices or faces or their. Looking or shirts.

✓ Well, I usually remember people's names by connecting them with people's voices, faces, looks, or shirts.

原句中“or their. Looking or shirts”结构不完整,句子被错误地断开了。并列列举时应保持结构一致;这里可以把 names 用代词 them 指代,并用逗号分隔并列项目。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Actually, it depends on whether we've met for a long time or just we just get to know each other.

✓ Actually, it depends on whether we've known each other for a long time or have just met.

“whether”后面连接的两个部分结构不平行,而且“just we just”重复。描述认识一段时间或刚认识,应使用平行结构“we've known ... or have just met”。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× So if it's the first case, it would be a little upset.

✓ So, if it's the first case, I would be a little upset.

“upset”描述人的感受,主语应是感到难过的人。原句中的“it”不能指代说话者,应改为“I”。

26: Sentence structure errors(句子结构错误)

× Upset if the if it's the latter.

✓ I would be upset if it's the latter.

原句是缺少主语和谓语的句子片段,“if the”也造成结构错误。补上主语“I”和谓语“would be”,并删除多余的“the”,即可构成完整条件句。

9: Verb in the past participle form(动词过去分词形式错误)

× That's not the case for me, unless we haven't keep in touch for over years.

✓ That's not the case for me, unless we haven't kept in touch for over a year.

“haven't”后面需要接动词的过去分词,因此“keep”应改为“kept”。

14: Incorrect use of quantifiers(数量词使用错误)

× That's not the case for me, unless we haven't keep in touch for over years.

✓ That's not the case for me, unless we haven't kept in touch for over a year.

表示超过一年的时间时,应说“over a year”;“over years”不能用于这里。也可以说“for more than a year”。

Từ vựng trọng tâm

Easy— Uncomplicated; Docile; Vulnerable; Leisurely
Little— Short; Young; Brief; Minor
Long— Lengthy; Soon; Yearn for
Short— Concise; Brief; Scarce; Briefly
Upset— Distress; Knock over; Disrupt; Defeat
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