Part 1
Giám khảo
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Thí sinh
Yes I think her remembers people's neighborhood can respect themselves. So I think her is so important. I will remember people's names.
Giám khảo
How do you remember people's names?
Thí sinh
When I talk with I will ask their names if they tell me their names I will remember it in my heart.
Giám khảo
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Thí sinh
I will feel a little angry because I single Roman order names can show the respect to the moon if they can't remember my name, I will think they don't respect me.
Giám khảo
Do you often forget people's names?
Thí sinh
No, because my memory is so strong and every single Rambur's name is so important so I will remember myself forgetting it.
Is it easy for you to remember people's names?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答直接表达了“是的”,但后面的句子有严重的词汇和语法问题,导致意思不清,例如“her remembers people's neighborhood”和“her is so important”都不符合英语表达。应明确说明记住名字是否容易,并给出一个简单、相关的原因。注意使用正确的主语和动词搭配,如“I find it easy”和“remembering people's names”。答案控制在2—3句即可,避免重复“I will remember people's names”。
Ví dụ: Yes, I find it quite easy to remember people's names because I believe using someone's name shows respect. I usually repeat the name once or twice after meeting them.
How do you remember people's names?
Điểm: 40.0Gợi ý: 回答提到了询问对方姓名,但句子结构不完整,尤其是“When I talk with”后面缺少宾语,且“remember it in my heart”不符合自然英语。可以按照“方法+具体做法”的结构回答,例如先说会重复对方的名字,再说明会把名字与外貌或经历联系起来。使用连接词如“also”或“because”使答案更连贯。
Ví dụ: I usually repeat the person's name during the conversation so that I can remember it more easily. I also try to associate the name with the person's face or something we have talked about.
How do you feel when people can't remember your name?
Điểm: 30.0Gợi ý: 回答表达了“不高兴”和“觉得对方不尊重自己”的观点,但中间部分几乎无法理解,存在明显的词汇误用、句子缺少结构和不自然的表达。应先直接回答感受,再用一个清晰的原因解释;“a little disappointed”通常比“angry”更自然,也更符合这一情境。避免使用无法表达清楚的长句。
Ví dụ: I feel a little disappointed when someone forgets my name, especially if we have met several times. I think remembering a person's name is a small but meaningful way to show respect, although I understand that people can be forgetful.
Do you often forget people's names?
Điểm: 35.0Gợi ý: 回答的核心意思是“不经常忘记”,但“Rambur's name”和“remember myself forgetting it”明显是词汇或语法错误,影响理解。“my memory is strong”可以使用,但需要补充自然、具体的解释。建议使用“most of the time”和“make an effort to remember”这样的表达,并用“so”或“because”连接原因。
Ví dụ: No, I don't often forget people's names because I have a fairly good memory. Besides, I make an effort to remember them, especially when I expect to meet those people again.
× Yes I think her remembers people's neighborhood can respect themselves.
✓ Yes, I think remembering people's names can show respect for them.
“her”是宾格,不能在这里作主语;应该使用正确的主语结构。“themselves”指代错误,因为这里需要指代 people,应该使用“them”。同时,“people's names”比“people's neighborhood”更符合上下文。
× Yes I think her remembers people's neighborhood can respect themselves.
✓ Yes, I think remembering people's names can show respect for them.
当动词短语作主语时,通常使用动名词形式,例如“remembering people's names”。不要使用不合适的“her remembers”结构。
× So I think her is so important.
✓ So, I think it is very important.
“her”不能作主语或形式主语。这里需要用“it”指代前面提到的“remembering people's names”。
× I will remember people's names.
✓ I remember people's names.
问题询问的是平时的习惯,不是将来某一次的行为,因此应使用一般现在时“remember”,而不是一般将来时“will remember”。
× When I talk with I will ask their names if they tell me their names I will remember it in my heart.
✓ When I talk with people, I ask for their names. If they tell me their names, I remember them.
“talk with”后面需要有宾语,所以要说“talk with people”。表达“询问某人的名字”时,通常使用“ask for their names”,而不是“ask their names”。
× When I talk with I will ask their names if they tell me their names I will remember it in my heart.
✓ When I talk with people, I ask for their names. If they tell me their names, I remember them.
这里描述的是平时如何记住别人的名字,应该使用一般现在时:“talk”“ask”和“remember”。“will”表示将来,不适合表达一般习惯。
× When I talk with I will ask their names if they tell me their names I will remember it in my heart.
✓ When I talk with people, I ask for their names. If they tell me their names, I remember them.
“names”是复数,所以后面不能用单数代词“it”,应该使用复数宾格代词“them”。
× When I talk with I will ask their names if they tell me their names I will remember it in my heart.
✓ When I talk with people, I ask for their names. If they tell me their names, I remember them.
原句把多个从句连接在一起,缺少必要的标点和清晰的连接结构。可以拆成两个句子,使“when”从句和“if”条件句结构更清楚。
× I will feel a little angry because I single Roman order names can show the respect to the moon if they can't remember my name, I will think they don't respect me.
✓ I feel a little angry because I think remembering someone's name can show respect. If they can't remember my name, I think they don't respect me.
问题询问的是你的通常感受,所以“will feel”和“will think”应改为一般现在时“feel”和“think”。“If”条件句描述通常情况时,也应使用一般现在时。
× I will feel a little angry because I single Roman order names can show the respect to the moon if they can't remember my name, I will think they don't respect me.
✓ I feel a little angry because I think remembering someone's name can show respect. If they can't remember my name, I think they don't respect me.
“respect”在这里表示抽象概念,通常是不可数名词,不需要使用定冠词“the”。正确表达是“show respect”。
× I will feel a little angry because I single Roman order names can show the respect to the moon if they can't remember my name, I will think they don't respect me.
✓ I feel a little angry because I think remembering someone's name can show respect. If they can't remember my name, I think they don't respect me.
原句中“because”和“if”连接的内容混在一起,逻辑不清。应该先用“because”说明原因,再用“If”引出条件句。
× I will feel a little angry because I single Roman order names can show the respect to the moon if they can't remember my name, I will think they don't respect me.
✓ I feel a little angry because I think remembering someone's name can show respect. If they can't remember my name, I think they don't respect me.
原句包含多个不完整或混乱的分句,缺少清晰的主语、谓语和标点。可以改成两个完整句子,并使用“because”和“if”分别表达原因和条件。
× No, because my memory is so strong and every single Rambur's name is so important so I will remember myself forgetting it.
✓ No, because my memory is very strong, and every single person's name is important to me, so I don't forget any of them.
“myself”是反身代词,必须与主语“I”形成正确的反身关系;“remember myself forgetting it”在这里不符合意思。表达“不会忘记它们”时,应使用“don't forget any of them”。
× No, because my memory is so strong and every single Rambur's name is so important so I will remember myself forgetting it.
✓ No, because my memory is very strong, and every single person's name is important to me, so I don't forget any of them.
表达“某事对某人很重要”时,应使用“important to me”。介词“to”表示重要性所涉及的对象。
× No, because my memory is so strong and every single Rambur's name is so important so I will remember myself forgetting it.
✓ No, because my memory is very strong, and every single person's name is important to me, so I don't forget any of them.
问题询问你是否经常忘记别人的名字,回答的是一般习惯,因此应使用一般现在时“don't forget”,而不是“will remember”。