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Part 1

Giám khảo

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

Thí sinh

Note it isn't because I'm often forget the people name in spite of my friends. For example, when I talk someone name in last time I will forget.

Giám khảo

How do you remember people's names?

Thí sinh

I remember people's names by repeat it all the time or to meet that person often so I can remember the person names.

Giám khảo

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

Thí sinh

I will feel embarrassed because I I need to say my name again so they can remember it.

Giám khảo

Do you often forget people's names?

Thí sinh

Yes, I often forget people's names. For example, when I need to sell someone land, in that moment I will forget because I felt nervous at that time.

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Part 1

Is it easy for you to remember people's names?

Điểm: 42.0

Gợi ý: 回答基本直接,但有较多语法和表达问题。应说“it isn’t easy”而不是“Note it isn’t”;“I often forget”不能说成“I’m often forget”;“people’s names”需要使用复数所有格;“in spite of my friends”不符合语境。例子部分也不自然,可以说明自己通常在初次见面后忘记名字,并给出具体原因。建议使用“because”和“For example”连接观点和细节,控制在2—3句内。

Ví dụ: No, it isn’t easy for me to remember people’s names because I often forget them shortly after meeting someone. For example, I may remember a person’s face but forget their name when I talk to them again.

How do you remember people's names?

Điểm: 52.0

Gợi ý: 回答有明确方法,但动词形式和句子结构需要改进。“by repeat”应改为“by repeating”,“the person names”应改为“their names”。“or to meet”结构不平行,应改为“or by meeting”。可以补充一个具体做法,例如在手机里记录名字,增强内容的具体性。

Ví dụ: I usually remember people’s names by repeating them silently after I meet someone. I also try to use their names during the conversation or save them in my phone if I think I might forget.

How do you feel when people can't remember your name?

Điểm: 58.0

Gợi ý: 回答表达了清楚的感受和原因,但“I I”是重复错误,而且“I will feel”在描述通常感受时不如“I feel”自然。可以先直接回答感受,再解释原因,并加入更自然的表达,如“a little awkward”或“slightly disappointed”。注意避免重复使用“remember”。

Ví dụ: I feel a little embarrassed when someone can’t remember my name. I have to introduce myself again, which can make the conversation feel slightly awkward.

Do you often forget people's names?

Điểm: 45.0

Gợi ý: 第一句回答直接,但例子中的“sell someone land”语义不清,可能想表达“向某人介绍自己”或“和某人谈话”。“I will forget”应根据习惯改为“I forget”,“I felt nervous”应与现在习惯保持一致,改为“I feel nervous”。建议选择与忘记名字直接相关的场景,并用“especially when”连接原因。

Ví dụ: Yes, I often forget people’s names, especially when I feel nervous. For example, when I meet several new clients at once, I sometimes forget their names even though I try to remember them.

Ngữ pháp

6: Present tense issue(一般现在时错误)

× Note it isn't because I'm often forget the people name in spite of my friends.

✓ No, it isn't, because I often forget people's names, unlike my friends.

“Often”描述经常发生的习惯,应使用一般现在时“forget”,不能使用“I'm often forget”。一般现在时中,主语“I”后直接接动词原形。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数错误)

× Note it isn't because I'm often forget the people name in spite of my friends.

✓ No, it isn't, because I often forget people's names, unlike my friends.

这里表示“人们的名字”,应使用复数“names”;“people”是复数名词,表示所属关系时应使用“people's”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× Note it isn't because I'm often forget the people name in spite of my friends.

✓ No, it isn't, because I often forget people's names, unlike my friends.

“in spite of my friends”表示“尽管我的朋友们”,不符合句意。这里想表达“和我的朋友们不同”,应使用“unlike my friends”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× For example, when I talk someone name in last time I will forget.

✓ For example, when I talk to someone for the first time, I often forget their name.

动词短语应为“talk to someone”,表示“和某人交谈”,不能直接说“talk someone”。“for the first time”表示“第一次”,是正确的固定搭配。

22: Article errors(冠词错误)

× For example, when I talk someone name in last time I will forget.

✓ For example, when I talk to someone for the first time, I often forget their name.

表示“第一次”时应使用固定表达“the first time”。不能使用“in last time”。

6: Present tense issue(一般现在时错误)

× For example, when I talk someone name in last time I will forget.

✓ For example, when I talk to someone for the first time, I often forget their name.

这句话描述经常发生的情况,应使用一般现在时“often forget”,而不是一般将来时“will forget”。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× For example, when I talk someone name in last time I will forget.

✓ For example, when I talk to someone for the first time, I often forget their name.

“someone”是单数不确定指代,后面用性别中性的物主代词“their”来表示“某人的”。“their name”比“someone name”正确。

8: Verb + -ing form(动词后接-ing形式错误)

× I remember people's names by repeat it all the time or to meet that person often so I can remember the person names.

✓ I remember people's names by repeating them all the time or meeting those people often, so I can remember their names.

介词“by”后面应接动名词,所以“repeat”和“meet”要改为“repeating”和“meeting”。使用“by doing”表示“通过做某事”。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× I remember people's names by repeat it all the time or to meet that person often so I can remember the person names.

✓ I remember people's names by repeating them all the time or meeting those people often, so I can remember their names.

“people's names”是复数,因此应使用复数代词“them”,不能使用单数“it”。后文用“their”指代复数的“those people”。

1: Singular and plural issue(单复数错误)

× I remember people's names by repeat it all the time or to meet that person often so I can remember the person names.

✓ I remember people's names by repeating them all the time or meeting those people often, so I can remember their names.

这里谈论多个人和他们的名字,因此应使用复数形式“those people”和“names”。表示所属关系时,应使用“their names”。

6: Present tense issue(一般现在时错误)

× I will feel embarrassed because I I need to say my name again so they can remember it.

✓ I feel embarrassed because I need to say my name again so that they can remember it.

问题询问通常的感受,回答应使用一般现在时“feel”和“need”,不需要使用“will feel”。重复的“I”应删除。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× I will feel embarrassed because I I need to say my name again so they can remember it.

✓ I feel embarrassed because I need to say my name again so that they can remember it.

主语“I”被重复写了两次,英语中同一个主语只需要出现一次。应改为“I need”。

11: Incorrect use of prepositions(介词使用错误)

× For example, when I need to sell someone land, in that moment I will forget because I felt nervous at that time.

✓ For example, when I need to sell land to someone, I often forget their name because I feel nervous at that time.

“sell”表示把某物卖给某人时,结构是“sell something to someone”,所以应说“sell land to someone”,不能说“sell someone land”来表达这个意思。

6: Present tense issue(一般现在时错误)

× For example, when I need to sell someone land, in that moment I will forget because I felt nervous at that time.

✓ For example, when I need to sell land to someone, I often forget their name because I feel nervous at that time.

这里描述经常发生的情况,应使用一般现在时“often forget”和“feel”,而不是“will forget”和过去式“felt”。主句和原因从句的时态应保持一致。

12: Incorrect use of pronouns(代词使用错误)

× For example, when I need to sell someone land, in that moment I will forget because I felt nervous at that time.

✓ For example, when I need to sell land to someone, I often forget their name because I feel nervous at that time.

“someone”是单数不确定指代,表示“某人的名字”时可以使用性别中性的物主代词“their”,所以应说“their name”。

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